Simultaneous Transmigration: Becoming a Legend Before the Story Begins

There is already one person, it is recommended to add Douluo, Dragon Clan, and Demon Slayer 🙂

The combat power of the one-person world is too low. It doesn't make sense to mix it with other worlds. Speed ​​through it quickly.

There are constant poisonous points, mainly because the character settings are all problematic. For example, as a tutor of the Lu family, Mr. Lu would not say such provocative words, and the Heavenly Master would not let a six-year-old kid fight with his twenty-year-old disciple. In Douluo Dalu, if the royal family wants to eradicate the roots, they won't openly do it in front of so many people. The protagonist's parents were assassinated, so the protagonist's child must be killed openly for such a lame reason? So stupid.

See Chapter 7, all Sharingan are Blood Wheel Eyes

The author wants to play a hodgepodge, but obviously does not surf. The version is too backward, with too many zones, and the knowledge of information collection in each part is very poor. The Sharingan is a typical case of difficulty. Naruto is a bad code and cannot be copied. Douluo is a shit mountain code. It is even more difficult for one person to jump on it. It is recommended to add more, Mystery, Gu, Demon Slayer, Snow, Sword, Harry Potter, Dragon Clan, balance the toxins, and maybe you can bring back the dead.

The children are too tough and can't stand it anymore. Everyone scolds the author for writing hard. It's so touching. The author is so entrepreneurial. He suggests that in the future world, he should add Dragon Clan, Demon Slayer, Super God, Genshin Impact, Siheyuan, Inventory, Regret Flow, and Change of Homework. With these, it must be a good flow to write these, and the results will be great (suppressed laughter)

The heroine of Douluo is almost Bibi Dong. If you write a selfish white-eyed wolf, who would be disgusting as the heroine? I stopped reading and left. Although there are no good heroines in this time period, there is a cousin who likes her cousin, a sister who likes her brother, and a white-eyed wolf who is not clear-headed. The old-fashioned way of writing is about Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor. I won't say anything. Even if I write about the head of the Tianshui family, I won't say anything. Who would be disgusted by writing a white-eyed wolf?

There is Douluo in it, and Douluo is written the same as 💩!

It's hard to judge, one person acts as a puppet master, and then Naruto plays along. Puppetry is not a grand thing when it is not passed down. Why do you have to play this? Why don't you go to practice martial arts, study medicine, and cultivate your mind when you have time? I understand even if you are high-tech. (It reminds me that there is a puppet master hidden in the world who travels across the heavens. What kind of puppets can be made in a world like Marvel DC? As long as you learn some technology, you will not make some armor and then think about power supply and maintenance every day) Secondly, Douluo is 💩. What you wrote makes me not want to continue reading. The plot is really incomprehensible. The emperor kills the protagonist's parents, and then when the protagonist is full of soul power during the test, the prince directly leads the troops on the spot. After the pursuit (everyone knew it, but they couldn't understand why the emperor didn't act, it was fair and aboveboard), the protagonist fought back, and inexplicably brought out the rebel troops. Regardless of whether there were titled Douluo on the other side, he split the earth and sealed the king. Come on, this is a world of high martial arts. It can be done with a few titled Douluo. However, a large territory was conquered and enshrined in the sect because no one helped the Qingjun. As a result, the protagonist's side found the country! ! I suspect there is something wrong with the protagonist's brain

Generally speaking, one person cannot write well, either hesitant or unable to write with that sense of satisfaction. I think most well-written books can be read quickly by one person. No need to give numbers.

What plot is Douluo writing?

There are not that many people who are willing to watch Douluo. Forget about the free part. If you pay for it, you still get a large section of Douluo. Isn't this trying to drive people away? Delete the length of the Douluo part and just write about the benefits.

It was definitely written by AI. Douluo's writing is so rubbish. The soul skills of three thousand-year soul rings are barely comparable to Dai Mubai's thousand-year soul skills.

The protagonist is the Virgin, repaying evil with kindness. Readers who like to be the Virgin should come and read it.

Oh, Worship the Ghost Spirit, then your book is really rare.

Hearty Akaishi🙂

I think puppetry learned by one person is really retarded, and a puppet master who is so strong that he is not a puppet but a physical body is very stupid, 😅

The child who takes the lead in bullying cannot be called Uchiha. Uchiha are all arrogant and unsociable. How can they get too close to non-Uchiha people? Not to mention bullying. Uchiha can be a villain, but doing something contrary to the original story at the beginning will discourage him from doing so. Also, this Uchiha is too weak. He was almost instantly defeated by the protagonist and has no expressive power at all. You must know that Naruto is very particular about blood, and Uchiha cannot be too weak. He should be born with more chakra and physique than others. Not to mention that Uchiha is still a wealthy family. In that era and background, he should have consumed much more nutrients than the protagonist, an orphan, and his physique is undoubtedly higher. So, not changing the name would be inconsistent with the original work and illogical.

But you just asked Tang Sect to take you to find Little Japan's troops and you gave them two factories... This idea is completely different from normal people, it was written by AI!

You will know Akaashi after reading the introduction to the world

The three ten-thousand-year soul skills of the main character in the Douluo episode are too shitty, right? The blue and silver pole vaults are better than this.

Men are bad, but women can accept it. Double standards and whitewashing of Bibi Dong's novels, don't read it.

Pig's feet are so strong that they are worthy of weak players.

Beginning of the first chapter, the Uchiha boy organizes and mobilizes to bully Kushina ദ്ദി ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ ) Author, you are invincible. Farewell

There is no need to take it out when one person is alone

I have an idea to let one person perform Naruto stories in his own world and gain faith. Is there any explanation?

After watching Renren and Tangmen, why doesn't the protagonist kowtow step by step, kneel down and beg them to guide him, instead of doing so many things in a roundabout way?

Naruto and his mother are about to become one of the new generation of Hokage's must-eat list. Can you please stop doing it?

Douluo... Tsk tsk tsk

Just change the one-man puppet technique, unless you can combine modern technology and puppet technique like Iron Man! ! Otherwise, the puppet is just trash in the fantasy world, worse than a wooden escape substitute!