The Outcast: The Heavenly and Human Become One

For those who didn't know, I thought the protagonist was practicing the Sunflower Manual

When you write fan fiction, you should always read the original work again. You can't just write whatever you think of.

It's quite difficult. Why do you have to make the main character so young?

The protagonist is having an affair with a girl of how old he is? I endured the pain and read a few chapters

The comment was deleted twice, but I'm going to post it a third time. It's really stupid.

No, you wrote about gun fighting in the first two chapters, just to show off?

Do you think the latest two chapters look like they were written by a junior high school student with chuunibyou, they are ugly?

As far as the protagonist is able to escape at the age of two, he is inherently incapable of practicing Feng Hou, so he shouldn't stay in Wudang.

I thought I was going to practice Wudang Kung Fu to be very good, but in the end I ended up in the Tianshi Mansion. I thought I was going to specialize in taking off, but I ended up trying to do it all. It looked very lame, but it's not as sincere as specializing in the practice of turning around in all directions.

I am the most incomprehensible about the classification of fan combat power under one person. The detailed settings are specious, the strength division is inexplicable, and the intensity performance is varied.

It looks too watery. From a descriptive level, I am competing with the Heavenly Master for first and second place, but everyone else wants to touch him. It keeps doing this. How stupid is the villain?

In fact, for many novels, you can just read the golden three chapters. If you can't read the first three chapters, just change it.

The five-color divine light, holy shit, Kong Xuan saw it later and said you were a pirated Samādhi Kamikaze. The mouse has grown old and says, you are a pirate Xianxian Flying Knife, Lu Ya wants to compete with you to see who is righteous and who is evil

I'm exaggerating a bit, I feel like the characters in the article are all geniuses.

Jushui is on the shelves, Gaga is playing the game, I don't want to order at all

I can't understand the Immortal Avenue, but it's okay. Plug-ins are optional. I also want to see the world upgrade. Anyway, the protagonist can dominate the world, so why not dance with demons?

Are the author and heroine Xia He, Feng Shayan, and Lu Linglong? (°ー°)

Not bad. It's interesting. You can follow it.

Not bad, it's on the shelves and I'm following it, please keep it up.

Lots of flowers

Every time the protagonist competes with others, he stands still and takes damage, pretends to be cool, and then boasts about the numbers. This is always the same routine, but it's disgusting if it's too much.

I feel like I'm jumping when I watch it. Yes, there are always things that are not followed by the beginning. It's very uncomfortable to watch.