Rejected After Confessing to the Campus Belle, I Take Up Sprinting to Bring Glory to My Country

I think track and field is the most interesting sports fiction. The biggest problem is that it becomes a bit hollow in the later stages, and the numerical values ​​are inconsistent.

The overall pacing of the matches and system progression in the book is fine, but the descriptions of individual matches are too drawn out. A 100-meter dash only takes 10 seconds; where do you find the time for so much thought, yet it happens in every single match, with all sorts of psychological descriptions and unnecessary drama. I just glance at the free chapters and turn the page; it doesn't bother me at all.

The middle part was too wordy. There was so much internal monologue.

It's such a captivating story; the mountain dwellers saw the sea, and the coastal people saw the real sea.

It's not bad, worth a look, though a bit wordy.

The descriptions of sprinting techniques are very limited. I remember a book where the protagonist was Su Shen, and the sprinting techniques were described in great detail. The author could take a cue from that.

I think this kind of shocking writing style is no longer popular.

It's well-written, but a bit short.

When will you start writing a book about the post-Su Shen era? Sprinting is so outdated these days.

Is it going to be a poorly written ending? It's only updating once a day now.