Football: From the Start, Maximum Speed

First of all, the football article was written twenty years ago, and the audience was Chinese bookworms in their thirties. Can these music, love, etc. Move them? Why do people born in the 2000s want to read stories about football stars from 20 years ago? The novel starts from the school team. It can only be said that the author is very ambitious and wants to write a masterpiece that spans at least ten years. But Chapter 200 is still in the World Youth Championship, Portugal. The pace is outrageous. Secondly, the story is set up in a systematic way, and it is naturally rich in literature. It includes national football and entertainment, and everything related to football is detailed. Does the author want to write it or the readers want to read it? Is this a farming article? Furthermore, looking at the responses from the authors in the comment area, I feel that they are very tough-talking and as self-righteous as the protagonist in the article. It can be predicted that the poison plot will continue from beginning to end and will not change. In general, a self-righteous author tries to create an imaginary environment to write a biography of a protagonist who he thinks is very powerful, delusional that readers will understand and like the protagonist and the author. Although the writing occasionally has language errors, it is smooth. I guess he is not a new writer. I don't know what his previous works are like. This one will most likely be unfinished due to lack of popularity.

The plot advancement and details are remarkable, but for the current novel environment, it may be a little wordy, but these are actually harmless. The main thing is that the whole process of playing football feels very ordinary, and the description is too simple. Don't say that you can write two or three chapters for a football match. It is indeed a bit anxious to watch, but you can't write like this. There is no enthusiasm and passion in the game when watching it, and it is very monotonous and affects the reading experience. That is to say, this is the first time I have seen a football novel that also includes music. I feel that this will dissuade many people. In fact, many people read football novels just for the pleasure of it. If the writing is too complicated or a bit confusing, it will easily discourage many people. As for the emotional line, it is also the most complicated one I have ever read in a football article. In fact, you can just write it according to the idea of ​​a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. There is no need to be forbearing and being a turtle. I sincerely feel that the score of this book should not be so low, but the things I mentioned above have caused the popularity to lose too much, and it is really rare to be able to maintain its current status. As a novel, sometimes you really can't just write whatever you want, nor can you come to a conclusion just by listening to the complaints of a few netizens. The main thing is to find a good editor and let him help you deduce the current mainstream reading thinking of the public, how to write and read more people, how to write to a wider audience and retain people. This is what most new authors should think about at present. New authors cannot compare with great authors. Great authors can rely on their reputation to forcefully retain people, but it is really difficult for new authors to get ahead in their works. It's true that not everyone is like Ji Yue. Everyone ordered the first book for RMB 100,000.

On the one hand, there is a female protagonist out of nowhere. There is no shaping. Then the protagonist in the second life has to chase and lick again. Author, you can say that this should be normal, but sorry, it is very inappropriate for a big star to lick an ordinary person. On the other hand, the star whose hormones exploded ended up staying safe and having a single female protagonist. That's not to say there won't be any, but it is indeed a small probability event.

The national football team is the biggest organization that insults China. If you lead the national football team, you won't watch it. It's disgusting.

I wrote two chapters about my memories with my wife in my previous life, and more than 20 chapters about a free kick. There are all kinds of things in the middle. The author should know that writing results like this will definitely not work. I can only say that it is purely out of love.

Writing about football is pretty good, but it has to be about the entertainment industry. If I want to read entertainment articles, why should I read your book? Which of the best football articles in recent years has developed into music content? Isn't this just superfluous?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out of writing about the protagonist singing and all kinds of hype, after all, it's to improve your skills and you need to be famous. But the plot about the wife in the past life and the plot about the draft in this life are really annoying. 143 And 144 are actually two whole sheets of this. Next time the protagonist writes this kind of plot, please either write a few sentences to mention it; or put it in a separate chapter and indicate it in the title, such as [Previous Life] [Wife], etc., So that I can skip chapters.             ，，， ① At present, the female protagonist and the male protagonist have no intersection at all. Don't you think, author, that the female protagonist is completely different from the main plot? It seems very abrupt. Maybe the author wants to foreshadow this, saying that this is a very awesome woman, so that the female protagonist can help the male protagonist handle related business in the future. But I want to say that it is really too much, too detailed, and has absolutely nothing to do with the current protagonist, so I have no patience to read it. If you want to foreshadow the story, it would be better if you simply write in plain language that the heroine is a person with high emotional intelligence and skill, and occasionally insert a few sentences, rather than describing the heroine in detail from the side (and the side profile does not achieve the effect of showing the heroine's power). If you want to write in detail, please wait until you meet and fall in love with the protagonist before writing. For example, the translator girl can write a lot, so it is slightly better, because she has a real intersection with the protagonist and is also part of the plot. ② The draft line is even more inexplicable. I don't know what the author wants to express. At first I thought the heroine was participating, but it turned out to be the heroine's sister. Come on, everyone describes the heroine too much now, and adding her sister also feels like it has nothing to do with the protagonist at all. We should also talk about the basics of hydrology, okay? Moreover, the main character's music line originally greatly reduced the competitive concentration, which made many people who came for football unhappy. Fortunately, the author found a good reason - to increase popularity and improve skills. But adding a draft line that has nothing to do with the protagonist and writing it in such detail makes the book look quite fragmented. It's like a story about the male protagonist being reborn as a cheater and a competitive writer and a story about the female protagonist's boyfriend being reincarnated as entertainment. They are quite stiffly put together, and the reading experience is uncomfortable. It is recommended that if this draft line is an important foreshadowing, then please also briefly write it down, such as how many times you entered, what songs you sang, which round you went to in the end, and a few sentences (at most a few paragraphs) to describe it.        ，，，，OK？ It's rare to see a good book about the national football team. I really don't want to give up easily, so I took the trouble to write such a long paragraph. I read the comment area and there are quite a few book friends who are disgusted with this. The author please consider it carefully 🙏🙏🙏

The emotional line is too bad If you love your wife before rebirth so much, don't write about other female protagonists The assistant was ambiguous in the early stage and then turned into a tool; Then inexplicably, the shy group turned into a girlfriend; I directly looked at the table of contents at the back, and there was a part involving Korean ex-girlfriends. It gives people the feeling that it is both fake and ridiculous Some people have mentioned this problem in the comments of several chapters. The author said that it is foreshadowing and foreshadowing But good foreshadowing and foreshadowing should be integrated into the plot normally

Here are the protagonist photos. There are photos of the venue, life photos, art photos, boxing photos, and profile photos. Add a few comic versions

I'm a book reader, and it's actually quite embarrassing. The equipment and scoring time give the impression that the number of words is low. As for the early days of the entertainment industry, there aren't many of them at the moment, but I feel that the protagonist has the potential to be a bitch.

Talking about opening a harem and writing about rotten love, talking about saving the national football team is not passionate at all, saying that the number of words is not enough but showing pictures but the whole story is just a big reward point, saying that the plot needs an entertainment branch, but in fact, no one will watch this kind of plot. In general, the text is not clear. The fact that there are so many criticisms shows that the writing is good and readers still have hope. I hope the author can improve his hydrological technology and there will be great potential for the next part.

After a cursory look, I can only say that you are sacrificing the last and chasing the last. In order to upgrade the system and create entertainment, you might as well directly upgrade more well-known points who became famous with one goal. Originally, football articles are relatively niche in novels, but by doing this, you have made the worst mistake among all authors. Screening readers. Some readers like football but not entertainment, and some like entertainment but not football. You mix them together and select those who like watching football and entertainment. What is not filtering? Not to mention that there will be a lot less people following these chapters now, but at least there will be a lot less subscriptions in the future.

There are so many female protagonists, don't write about pure love at the beginning, that's what bothers me. The stallion story writes about pure love, and it also writes about loyalty in the early stage. It poisoned me in one breath.

Give up, give up! There are only a few serious chapters, a lot of sophistication and mismatches!

Another one who writes about the national football team, retreat

Is this a stallion story or a football story? When I clicked in and saw a group of female characters getting stuck, I really couldn't stand it 😄

The biggest beneficiary of the limited exemption is that you can skip the chapters you don't want to read. Otherwise, if you are waiting for the Champions League draw here, he will give you a first-hand entertainment experience💩, and you have paid to subscribe, so you can't skip it. Qiu is well written. Except for the interspersed part of feeding you flies, I don't know why I insist on writing about the entertainment industry when I don't understand anything.

Music-related plots will have to filter out a group of readers.

Other people's experience card, you still play this set with the fucking props, I bet you will be a hit on the street. Now there is no novel that uses this set without being a hit on the street.

I'm leaving, I'm a little annoyed. The protagonist is always being fouled and doesn't fight back. Your ankles will be crushed. Protagonist, I want to upgrade my entry to make my ankles harder. Forget it, I kicked the Korean referee's black whistle in the past. I have always been like a daughter-in-law who is stepping on the horse and being annoyed.

After reading for a long time, the protagonist was fucked by that rubbish newspaper several times and didn't have a long memory. Every time his words were distorted and misunderstood, the protagonist offended people. He didn't care. He continued to talk and continued to be used as a weapon by the newspaper. His skills were average, but the protagonist had a really broad mind.

I suggest the author write less ambiguous chapters next time if the heroine is not the heroine. You have written so many chapters to tell me that you are not the heroine, and you also made an online song. I can't stand it anymore. Football is better with three lines, but there are also poisonous points. The agent is an unknown person. It will be difficult for you to win the Golden Globe Award in the future.

When I saw Chapter 32, I looked through the comment area and saw the author's reply. Isn't this ambiguous interaction with the heroine? Either the previous life's wife locks up the single heroine, and the harem is opened openly. I read the comments that the harem members include Korean girl groups, and the corresponding plot is written and then the harem is selectively opened. This is a taboo in harem literature. The translation assistant first described her outstanding appearance and figure, and then conducted some ambiguous interactive plots in some chapters. This is a proper configuration of the heroine, just because the author subjectively gave up on her being a member of the harem. Maybe the master can write it this way, because the master has great skills and can write this kind of poisonous plot, and he can also rely on other advantages to attract readers. What ordinary authors need more is to narrow the performance gap with masters by reducing poison points, because skills need to be improved slowly, and poison points can be controlled subjectively. The readers lost by every poisonous point have a great impact on ordinary authors.

Doing knitting? You dive into entertainment and you can't get out, right?

Good guy, look at you. The characters, the female characters, are all original. It's just blinding the harem theme.

Selling dog meat on the head of a sheep, the title of the chapter is to discover potential new stars, click on it and it will all be singing

Finished watching it again. Let me talk about my personal feelings first. This is a rare and good novel! Great football article! Generally, football writers don't dare touch upon the national team because everyone knows that they are worried about losing readers due to performance. However, this article is very successful in dealing with the national team. It does not interfere with high-level management, but through continuous personal improvement and glory, domestic players with high-level potential go abroad to play, and their level is continuously improved, avoiding the embarrassment of playing alone in the national team. That is to say, the improvement of the national team's performance is a whole and does not rely on the protagonist alone. In addition, through the improvement of the individual's level, the honors and reputation obtained gradually increase and influence the selection of the national team. This is feasible. As long as you are strong enough, you will have a chance to implement it. As a novel, a reborn person is a mess! As the author repeatedly mentioned, he cheated! Reborn! I still haven't changed anything about the national football team, I just want to escape. Simply going to play abroad or even joining a foreign national team doesn't make much sense! At least I believe that people who read football articles, whether they are opposed to writing about the national football team or not, still have a wish in their hearts that the national football team can really be strong! It's just that the national football team is terrible and it's too difficult to be truly strong, so I deliberately don't read football articles about the national football team. But it is not far-fetched that the author of this article has a very reasonable arrangement in this regard, starting with individuals and then driving domestic players to go out and gradually improve to form a relatively high-level collective, a bit like the Norwegian team. Except for the national football team, other aspects are also written very well. At first, I thought the author wrote too many ambiguous women and it might break down. But when I think about how many superstars in reality are surrounded by beautiful women, and the protagonist and the performance are very restrained, I feel that the author is getting better and better at handling this aspect. In addition, the author's protagonist's personality is also very suitable for our Chinese people, and he also handles all aspects of the relationship with the team's head coach and players very well and is very realistic. In short, I think this is a very well-written football article! My personal level is limited, so I just wrote a few thoughts based on my personal feelings. I hope you won't criticize me!

The system is a bit interesting, and the overall plot is good but the water injection is serious. In the cup competition, the opponent's and the group's competition process must be described in detail. After the game, the media reports must publish the news content of each media, and then there is a lot of popular science content, which is still related to football, not to mention the content of song writing. Many chapters are skipped to read, which makes them tasteless and a pity to discard.

The national football team is so bad, but they still change the national football team. What will happen to Yao Ming? Laughing

Thank you Shennong