This Isn't a Martial Arts World? Why Are We Playing Basketball?

The sentences are confusing and wordy, not just in competitions, but also in daily life. The thoughts are divergent at every turn. This kind of writing looks too tiring, and even the basic plot description is fragmented.

The writing is quite good 😁 It's rare to see someone starting a career in Salt Lake City. However, the protagonist is of Chinese descent. Even immigrants cannot expect to be part of the upper class in America. In small cities, it is more possible to become a city hero. One person per city also adds to the historical status. It is not bad to become Duncan of Salt Lake City 😜😜

Creativity is okay, but does it mean that the author doesn't read it after he writes it? A lot of sentences are not fluent, and the meaning is incorrectly expressed. Are you not going to change it?

The most profitable activity on earth is boxing, as long as you can put up good fights and keep winning. There is no salary cap in boxing, it all depends on whether the audience is willing to buy tickets for you. The maximum salary for the 2003 season is Garnett's 25 million Tyson and Lewis earned 17 million per game. The protagonists can win all the time, twice a year, which is much more comfortable than the NBA.

I think it looks pretty good. When you can get the skill of flying flowers and picking leaves, you will be a stable shooter.

To be honest, is this any different from traveling to Pangu and playing basketball? ? ?

You can only write about yourself in the game, otherwise you can write about other people's offense. How many chapters do you want to win in a game?

Very creative but the author's writing skills are not strong enough

I still need to practice. Judging from the writing style, I am undoubtedly a newcomer. The article is very scattered and jumpy, with a hammer here and a stick here and there. The article must be written fluently first. Although the setting is very good, the author is too new and the overall fluency is still a bit poor.

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