This Isn't a Martial Arts World? Why Are We Playing Basketball?

The writing is disorganized and rambling, not just in competitions but in everyday life. The author's thoughts often wander, making the writing exhausting to read. Even the basic plot descriptions are fragmented.

Well written 😁 It's rare to read a story where the protagonist starts their professional career in Salt Lake City. However, as a Chinese American, even with immigration, it's unlikely he'd make it into America's high society. Smaller cities offer a better chance of becoming a city hero. A person's place in a particular city also contributes to their historical status. Becoming Salt Lake City's Duncan wouldn't be bad either. 😜😜

Creativity is fine, but after you finish writing, don't you ever read it aloud? Don't you ever revise the sentences that are awkward or misinterpreted?

I could have just watched and given the pills to someone else, but I couldn't hold back. I feel like I'm not a basketball fan, just a casual fan, while you're a true fan. You're treating athletes like saints. Every player who's made it this far has their merits. What if Yao Ming talks about it? What if someone reports you for using performance-enhancing drugs?

The most lucrative activity on Earth is boxing, as long as you can put on exciting fights and keep winning. There's no salary cap in boxing; it all depends on whether the audience is willing to buy tickets. The maximum salary for Garnett in the 2002-03 season was $25 million. Tyson and Lewis earned $17 million per game. The main character can keep winning, two games a year, which is much more comfortable than the NBA.

Honestly, what's the difference between this and being reincarnated as Pangu and having to play basketball?

To put it simply, the protagonist's thought process reflects the author's idiot brain. He hires the sister of someone who harmed him, who ultimately died, and then becomes his agent, even splitting the insurance claim with someone else (the insurance agent knew it was fraud and a crime). Then he becomes an NBA star? Dude, where's your brain? With that kind of brain, I could eat you alive for the rest of my life.

I think it looks pretty good. When we get the "Flying Flowers and Plucking Leaves" skill, the marksman class will be a sure thing.

You can only write about your own experiences in a match; otherwise, you can write about other players' attacks. How many chapters do you want to pad out a single match?

Very creative, but the author's writing skills are lacking.