Basketball: The King of Evolutionary Fusion

It's the system again. I can't write without a system these days. Even with a system, I can't control my power level after 100+ chapters. Actually, I want to write a novel with a general direction: the protagonist is reborn as a baby from a moderately wealthy family, given a one-time system.

Last year there were so many basketball articles about the Wizards (9/11), this year so many about the Lakers 😅. Is this some kind of traffic matrix writing method?

Honestly, judging solely from the story's flow, the writing's fluency, the arrangement of some plot points, and the overall structure, this book is passable. It's not exceptional, but it's at least at a level worth reading and observing. I don't find anything strange about the English name, nor do I see anything wrong with the protagonist's constant chatter on the field.

If you cut half of the book's content, its quality will immediately improve.

The main character makes too many witty remarks; it's a bit annoying.

The writing is okay, but it's too weak and overly suppresses the protagonist's fighting power.

Why would an agent of this caliber take a liking to the lead actor? I don't quite understand.

Not good enough. No developmental experience, no training in the NCAA. Even soccer teams have youth academies, U18 and U20 teams, with phenomenal growth experiences. You somehow made it to the NCAA finals; you can't keep up the hype.

Possessing LeBron James: Starting with Shaving Kobe's Head

Every time I watch something at the Toyota Stadium, it's so distracting.