Seeking the Dao in the Golden Book
金书问道
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- Ongoing
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- 583k Words
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- Xianxia
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- Fantasy Cultivation
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The protagonist is immortal and inexplicably dotes on the emperor's daughter, as if she were his own. It's incomprehensible. It's understandable when the protagonist is in his eighties or nineties, but the fact that he's written like this when he's still young makes me feel a little poisoned.
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As a new writer and author, this is my first time writing, so it's inevitable that I haven't thought things through. I had come up with several frameworks for other themes and even wrote the beginnings, but the editor rejected them all. I might as well not think about anything at all and just write what I like. So I chose the longevity path, and without even an outline, I just submitted a draft.
The cowherd he casually pointed at became the founding emperor. That's laughable. If you were telling him that, wouldn't a whole bunch of people around want to be emperor too? If giving a few pointers makes someone an emperor, what's the point of force? You might as well say you casually took in a martial arts practitioner to test his skills.
Overall, it's not bad, but the way the emperor's daughter is treated a bit too well is excessive. Wouldn't it be more interesting to have several concubines to play with than to raise a princess? 😰
I support any story that's not written by an eunuch, I love eunuch stories! 😁😁😁😁 I hope this story is good and interesting.
After reading the description, I'm stunned! You've got immortality! Add some points... Even the Heavenly Dao might not be able to defeat you with this cheat!
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I've read 16 chapters, and... Well, it's a bit bland. The good news is the emotionally nuanced writing; the bad news is that the transmigrator isn't really a transmigrator. Instead, he seems like a native, making it hard to immerse myself in the story. The plot feels a bit weak, and the protagonist's cheat ability seems to have a mind of its own.
Author, your timeline shouldn't be too long or too short. Also, regarding the characters in the synopsis, I don't know how well your outline is structured, so it might not be able to support where you'll end up writing.
If even the Heavenly Dao is destroyed, wouldn't the protagonist also die?
The princess's writing was too venomous, almost as vicious as those who wrote those rhinoceros-like poems.