Honghuang: Reborn as the One Qi Immortal, Cultivating with Caution

So what if you went to Shangqing? Didn't the disciples recite the royal decree in their caves during the Investiture of the Gods? You went to your death and blame others. Weren't you a scholar of literature before you transmigrated? Haven't you read any Taoist or Buddhist classics?

You're stuck at the bottleneck right from the initial Golden Immortal stage to the intermediate stage? How are you expecting Ma Yuan to level up in the future? In the same amount of time, most people who attend the three lectures on Golden Immortal cultivation can advance to Quasi-Saint, but you're stuck at the minor Golden Immortal stage and can't move forward? Ma Yuan, how are you going to survive?!

It was alright at first, but later he became insanely greedy. It's one thing to be greedy when you have the ability, but to be greedy when you don't is just courting death. A Golden Immortal trying to sever the karmic ties between the Three Pure Ones, Di Jun, Nuwa, and the gourd vine to monopolize it—how could you be so audacious?

The first half was alright, but the plot started to spiral out of control after the introduction of the "Outside the Mortal Realm" arc. The protagonist became increasingly reckless, lacking both the background and power of a sage, and recklessly provoked sages—it was utterly ridiculous. 😑

The author's writing skills are quite good, capturing some of the essence of fantasy and chivalry. The biggest problem is the inability to escape the clichés of the "primordial era" genre, relying solely on causality. If the author could transcend this simplistic view of cause and effect, the book would soar to new heights.

The protagonist is too cautious. He dares to venture into the Chaos when he is only a beginner Golden Immortal, and he dares to sever the gourd vine and the karma between himself and the saints when he is a late-stage Golden Immortal. Being prudent isn't just about words; it's about actions.

The writing was initially very good, but later the protagonist became like a thief stealing from a prehistoric home, and then acted all high and mighty, which was just ridiculous.

At first glance, it seemed like nothing but assumptions and boasting.

The very premise is flawed. The Twenty-Four Sea-Stabilizing Pearls were ultimately obtained by Randeng, who opened the Twenty-Four Heavens, yet he didn't transcend the primordial world. The system itself is too crudely designed. The idea of ​​the primordial spirit residing in the Heavenly Dao seems increasingly absurd to me.

Tsk tsk tsk. This guy's ambitions are sky-high, but his fate is as fragile as paper.