A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I'm in the Mortal World, but the System Is in Battle Through the Heavens!
凡人：人在凡人，系统在斗破！
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- Xianxia
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- Classical Xianxia
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Chapter 20, still playing house in Qixuanmen
With this kind of talent, there's no need to go to the Scarlet Monastery.
The story is fine, and the concept is interesting, but I don't understand why so many emotional descriptions, mental descriptions, and facial expressions are inserted into a short, simple dialogue, far exceeding the content of the dialogue itself. It's the other way around. I'm not reading an urban romance novel. Why do you need so many psychological and facial expressions from three grown men?
The author, "Big Flood King," could easily have condensed the first thirty chapters into fifteen; they're all so trivial I suspect it was written by AI.
Qi training = fighting spirit Foundation building = fighting master Golden elixir = fighting master Nascent Soul = great fighting master Transformation into spirit = fighting spirit? Is this the setting? That would be boring
The protagonist is often asked to think from the Yan family's point of view, and it is so easy to forgive the Yan family for cheating the protagonist. You are getting married and not marrying into the family. It is too humble.
A batch of water, 100 pictures, pushed the plot to the end of the Bloody Forbidden Land. Your idea is good, but you are too good at it. The first few dozen pictures were still playing house in Qixuanmen.
I flipped through it, and I'm not sure if the author will accept Nangong Wan as a character. His writing is so confusing, it feels like he's raising a venomous insect, making my heart pound. This reminds me of a Douluo fanfiction I read several years ago, *Douluo: The Carefree Manor*, which I'll never forget.
You need to have your own opinions. If the main character's plot isn't too deliberate, the book will be successful. The reason most mortals die is because they have good talent, have Foundation Establishment Pills, and still want to go to the Blood Forbidden Land. The key is that some of them go even if you don't recruit Nangong. Recruiting Nangong is also a poison point.
Why did you take Chen Qiaoqian in? She never even reached the Core Formation stage before she died. In terms of looks and talent, she is no match for Nie Yingdu, who only has three spiritual roots. They have no special physique or special talents (Song Yu, Zi Ling, Xin Ruyin, and Yuan Yao all have special talents).