When the Black Fog Descends, I Shack Up Underground with the Witches

It's simply unwatchable. Is the protagonist a witch who licks dogs? I can't even feel the disaster. I keep trying to please the witch all day long.

How about re-opening a book? If it's not on the shelves, it's not considered a eunuch.

See the witch, come and taste the saltiness

This should belong to the territorial construction stream, so why do you write such bullshit about the male protagonist's inner activities and the female protagonist's inner activities? You constantly emphasize equality and so on. Are you writing a romance novel? ? What kind of favorability is needed? Why not focus on obscene development and building farming? Now I feel awkward watching it.

The story structure and imagination are very good, and it has great potential, but the writing is not very good. It is recommended to practice writing before writing (you can try to read more literary works, watch online classes to learn some writing routines, find a fixed writing style and keep practicing). Of course, if it is purely for fun, pretend I didn't say it, and it's good to write for yourself. Come on.

In the apocalypse, people are more likely to undergo extreme changes, with good things getting better and bad things getting worse.

It feels okay, but there is no hope at the moment.

Why isn't it updated?😐

🎭 Character: 5 🎬 Plot: 3 ✒️ Writing style: 6

The worldview is very grand, but the author's handling methods make this grand narrative structure incomplete, and it always feels like the author is correcting something. But there is no one subject in the process. It feels like when I write about something wonderful, the plot suddenly takes a turn and turns to some trivial and trivial place. Take a quick look and you will find that the writing style is very awkward anyway, mainly because you can't tell what the author wants to express specifically.