When the Black Fog Descends, I Shack Up Underground with the Witches
黑雾降临，我与魔女们蜗居地下城
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 125k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- English
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This is absolutely unwatchable. Is the main character just a witch's simp? He doesn't even care about the disaster; he's just constantly trying to please the witch.
How about we start a new book? It's not considered abandoned until it's published.
Upon seeing the witch, come and taste the saltiness.
This should be a territory-building story, right? So why are you writing so much nonsense about the male lead's inner thoughts and the female lead's inner thoughts? You keep emphasizing equality and stuff, are you writing a romance novel? What's the point of having affection levels? Why not focus on the sneaky development and farming? It's getting really awkward for me to read now.
The story structure and concept are quite good, showing great potential, but the writing style is not very good. I suggest you practice your writing before you start writing again (you can try reading more literary works, watching online courses to learn some writing techniques, and finding a fixed writing style to practice writing). Of course, if you are just writing for fun, then disregard what I said. Writing for yourself is also great. Keep it up!
In an apocalyptic world, people are more prone to extreme changes, with the good getting better and the bad getting worse.
It feels alright, but I can't see any hope right now.
Did you cut it?
Why haven't you updated? 😐
🎭 Character Design: 5 🎬 Plot: 3 ✒️ Writing style: 6
The world-building is grand, but the author's handling of the narrative makes this grand structure feel incomplete; it always feels like the author is trying to straighten something out. However, no central theme emerges from this constant shifting. It always feels like just when the writing is getting to a great part, the plot suddenly takes a turn, shifting to some obscure or trivial detail.