Bleach: My Zanpakuto is the Entire Underworld

There's a question: in the Bleach setting, if you can achieve Shikai without reciting the release phrase, it's a sign that you've already reached Bankai. Whether or not one recites the release phrase is essentially a matter of authority, that is, gaining higher authority from the Zanpakuto. So the protagonist's stance changed, but he still openly recited the release phrase, making it obvious that it was fake.

The writing skills are really mediocre, there's too much internal monologue, and the opening feels both weak and verbose.

This book might have worked five years ago, as it gathers various fantasy and cultivation tropes: commoner's academic success, face-slapping, shocking, noble's betrayal, and so on. But this is 2023... How many people would still buy into this...? The author's writing isn't bad; they should really consider starting a new story. I sincerely suggest...

Nilu's romantic storyline is so strange... Can they really entrust their lives to each other after only a week? Maybe I don't understand love, but this is progressing way too fast...

The protagonist is too weak. I thought it was going to be an invincible protagonist novel. I subscribed to all the Bleach novels immediately, but it wasn't like that. I'm a bit disappointed. If the protagonist remains a weakling later on, I probably won't continue reading. I don't like protagonists who are always getting hurt. I don't need invincibility, at least a draw would be nice!

It gathers all the elements that were essential to the opening of online novels of that era: showing off and getting slapped in the face, the big shots' amazement, inexplicable hostility, the changing fortunes of fortune, the protagonist's halo, the genius supporting character, and so on. It covers all the plot points from fantasy battles to urban fantasy war god student face-slapping scenarios—truly exciting!

Brother, how about we consider the next storyline? You've written nearly 50 chapters about a trial? Is that really a good idea? We're saying we read Bleach novels not to see reforms. The reforms also have a passionate aspect. What are you doing?

Well, how should I put it? The growth process before it was published was alright, I felt. But the previous installment added a bunch of romantic subplots, which made me incredibly awkward. You have to understand, you're a Shinigami! You've gotten involved with one of your archenemies, a Hollow.

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It's a pity the writing isn't strong enough, the protagonist is too stereotypical, and the plot is rather childish and clichéd.