A Call from the Underworld

When you update once, minor flaws will be magnified, and the immaturity of your writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience will be born, and the progress of the plot will be given more attention. When you're up past midnight, small praises begin to emerge, and the number of dead harvests begins to decline.

I was trying to write something like "My Healing Game," but the plot wasn't tight enough, lacked tension, and the forced use of suffering as a bizarre backdrop felt simplistic. Good, evil, resentment, and hatred should all be included, instead of forcing readers to empathize with someone else's pain.

I felt distracted by Li Qianjin's part. I'd like to offer some suggestions to the author. The first problem is that the suffering is unrealistic. Li Qianjin was singled out for wage deductions. I've also encountered migrant workers in real life; if they're going to deduct wages, they'll deduct them all at once, or they'll find one to deduct from.

Why do you keep recommending these abandoned books to me? 🤔

The concept is excellent, the plot is good, and the atmosphere is very strong. It has horror, warmth, and tension. Of course, what I'm most satisfied with is the landlord's ending—a clean and decisive response, getting revenge for wrongs directly. I just don't quite understand why I would willingly seek out the police. Human nature is unpredictable, and it can't withstand scrutiny.

I bought this from a pirated copy; I'm not very well-off and can't support you much, but I don't want you to leave it unfinished. I really enjoy your writing. Where can I tip the author?

It's obvious that the author's skill is insufficient. They wanted to give a reward, but were afraid of not being able to balance it out, so it seems that the effort was greater than the reward. To put it bluntly, it's because we can't grasp it. The first plot is clearly a copy of Air Conditioner, but what makes Air Conditioner Horror House so appealing is its gradual progression.

If you only look at the introduction, It's definitely a source of supplies. I am Shennong. Gentlemen, please allow me to have a taste.

It's pretty well written, but is the author a master of staying up all night?

It has some flaws, but they're not a big deal for me. It's quite good quality for a supernatural story, which is already rare. Here's your subscription and monthly pass, don't die!