A Call from the Underworld

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave dazzling traces. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. So, don't stop, update, update, update (copied and pasted, I don't have that much ink)

I probably want to write a feeling like "My Healing Game", but the plot is not compact enough, there is no sense of tension, and the use of suffering as a strange background is very simple. Good, evil, resentment, and hatred should all be added, instead of forcing readers to empathize with other people's pain. I don't know. How painful it is, but some people will abandon books because of the knife, which is fatal for new books. The author should balance the tragic story with the depressive atmosphere, as well as the compactness of the story. The introduction of the second story is too long and not scary enough, but it has an obvious tendency to cause depression, which can easily lead to a large number of abandoning books or keeping books. It needs to be improved.

When I saw Li Jinjin's part, I felt like it was a drama. Give the author some advice. The first problem is that suffering is unrealistic. Li Qianjin's wages were deducted separately. I have also met migrant workers in reality. If they want to be deducted, they will be deducted together. If not, I will find someone to deduct. The reason you gave is unreasonable. Your mother is sick, so you just tolerate everything? Even when I went to the hospital many years ago, I didn't say that I would give the money to the doctor. I would always give the money to the hospital. It would be even more ridiculous to only give glucose. The prescribed medicines are all given by the hospital and there is a receipt. Do the people you treat patients know? The episode when Gao Ping fell ill was also unreasonable. When farmers got sick, they didn't just have to stay up or go to the hospital. It was normal to go to a small clinic in the village to get some antipyretics in bulk, and it didn't cost much. And a high fever will not make you mute, let alone lame. As you can see, there are problems with almost every point. In order to describe Li Qianjin's pain, he used excessive force and forced suffering. Totally unrealistic and too dramatic.

Why do you always recommend this kind of eunuch book to me🤔

The concept is very good, the plot is also good, and the atmosphere is very strong. There is horror, tenderness, and tension. Of course, the most satisfying outcome is the landlord's outcome, where he complained directly and was clean and tidy. I just don't understand why you want to take the initiative to enter JC's sight? People's hearts are unpredictable, and human nature cannot stand the test. Because according to logic, if you really need your help, you really can't refuse. At least now, I don't see anything that can't be said. For me personally, if the quality can be maintained in the future, I really have a chance to carry the banner of the supernatural genre.

I came from piracy. I am relatively poor and cannot support much, but I don't want you to be unfinished. I really like your content. Where can I reward the author?

It is obvious that the author is not skilled enough and wants to give rewards, but is afraid that the balance cannot be balanced, so it seems that the effort exceeds the gain. To put it bluntly, I just can't grasp it. Looking at the first plot, it is obviously an imitation of an air conditioner, but the best thing about the air-conditioned horror house is that he can do it step by step, knowing what villains should appear in the early, middle and late stages, what rewards should be given, when to give big rewards, and when to withhold and search. For example, The first reward in this book is a curse that can kill you at any time and has no effect in the face of difficulties. Whether you can survive depends on the mood of the other person, and there is not enough foreshadowing. See what Zhang Ya wrote about this? The first reward of the Horror House is a skill that can change the current dilemma. The grasp of rhythm and details is really incomparable. Moreover, the horror house has been stabilized as a whole. You can gradually release your emotions and use NPCs to explore the horror house to relieve the depressing atmosphere. Obviously, the author did not do this part well... The plot rhythm is too poor. I have never seen anything more than House of Horrors, and neither are the follow-up works on Air Conditioning...

If you only look at the introduction, it is definitely food. I am Shennong, please wait for me to have a taste.

The writing is quite good, but is the author a god of war who stays up late?

There are flaws, but it's not a big problem for me. The quality is pretty good among the already rare supernatural literature. I'll give you a subscription and a monthly pass. Don't die.