One Piece: Starting with Failing the Civil Service Exam at Impel Down

After reading the introduction, one question immediately arises: Where in Impel Down would you find souls to eat? Impel Down is a place that holds serious criminals, those not suitable for immediate execution, special Devil Fruit users, or major criminals. What can you possibly gain by trying to survive in Impel Down?

Male female prison staff... Seeing this sentence reminds me of the Joker 🤡

It's alright, but it's best to stop using the Dao Power early on. This thing appears in Water Seven, and then it's gone after Water Seven.

Why would a man be assigned to a women's prison? There's something wrong with that.

Dude, Shiryu got hit by Magellan's ultimate attack three times and still managed to chase after the protagonist? That's absurd.

It's too fast. Both the plot development and the character relationships are too fast. There's no need to write it like this. It's only been a short time since they started contacting the Revolutionary Army. If you were following the Revolutionary Army's route, that would be fine, but that's clearly not the case. If you write it like this, it feels like the later stages will come very quickly.

It is recommended not to use the outdated concept of Dao power.

Stussy is the only female lead in One Piece fanfiction. I'm rooting for her!

The premise is good, but the writing is poor; only the first few chapters are decent.

Having two books of different styles published at the same time makes me afraid to read your books anymore.