Daily Fortunes, From a Market Rogue Cultivator to Immortality

So far, it flows very smoothly, with no major flaws or frustrating moments, and it's not filler content. However, I feel that the protagonist's personality shouldn't be too detached. Since it's a story about ordinary people, he should have emotions and desires so that readers can better empathize with him. As long as he doesn't act without thinking, it's fine.

Haha, I've found another cultivation novel with multiple female protagonists.

The story flows smoothly and the pace is quite fast. There are no plot points where the younger generation is defeated and the older generation suffers the consequences. I suggest getting the protagonist a spirit beast to raise.

It's alright, the plot is decent, no major flaws. The balance between combat and training is well maintained, and it features multiple female leads, which is nice. It doesn't suppress the protagonist's strength or level either.

Honestly, it's fantastic, and the writing is excellent. I'm giving the author a small tip; please don't abandon the story! I'll keep reading until the end; I still have the subscription money.

The writing is quite good; I just hope the author doesn't abandon the project.

Let's increase the combat power of the protagonist's Daoist partners, so that they don't just have a high cultivation level but no combat strength.

It's alright, the writing is decent, and the story is good. The only drawback is that the process of breaking through to the Foundation Establishment or Golden Core stages is described too briefly; it feels quite simplistic. Keep it up, I'll vote for you next month.

So far, there are no obvious flaws, making it a good recommended read. Junior readers, you should definitely mark it as a favorite! 😡

It avoids the clichéd, idiotic passersby, which is a big plus. The pacing is smooth, and the map switching is decisive. Worth experiencing.