I Attain Immortality Through the Alchemy Cauldron

We still meet the beautiful cultivator who disguises herself as a man at the beginning, and she is still as beautiful as a fairy, and all kinds of extraordinary, even a separate chapter, why is the description so heavy? What's the need? Since it is the Zijin Dao, and there is a description of the training pill, and how dark and sinister Tiannan is, it can be seen that the author is not writing about the kind of easy daily cultivation of immortality. Then there is a high probability that there will be destiny and gold status later, and then will she not only be asked to live in the Zifu, but also be allowed to obtain a certificate of gold? Or even Become a true king? Or is it less than 20 chapters, and you have determined that the heroine is her? There are so many Zijin Dao immortal cultivation novels, but few have such an early start. Whether it is the older Xuanjian, Chusheng, Qingwu, or the newer Zifu of the Two Realms, they rarely put their writing power into it. There is too much description of the appearance and temperament of a female supporting character, saying it is an inversion, but adding "" in front of him and writing it as "he", and writing that the skin is white and feminine, for fear that it will not be guessed, and the inversion is boring. It is better to simply write it as a male, and then let him explain himself that it is a problem with the Taoism he practices, and at the same time use this to draw inspiration Without the training system and part of the setting background, writing this kind of woman disguised as a man who can be seen by everyone is firstly inferior in creativity, and then the description is too heavy. If she is not important in the later stage, it will be a big disadvantage, because an unimportant supporting role, why use so many words to describe it? If she is very important in the later stage, what about the rationality of the plot? Just because she is the heroine, does anyone have a clear path forward? Or is this book essentially a refreshing article? Then why do you describe the medicinal properties of various medicinal materials in such detail? Don't you hope that your book is deep enough so that everyone is interested in discussing and thinking about it?

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When I first watched it, I didn't think there was anything wrong with it, especially the setting of the alchemy was pretty good, but I was a bit confused as to why the results were not good. At least after reading the first thirty chapters, I felt that there were only two small flaws and they had little impact. One is that the protagonist loves to laugh, which is actually understandable. After all, the protagonist was an ordinary person before he traveled through time, and it hasn't been long since he traveled back through time. It's normal that his character has not changed. The other thing is that the deaths of Bai Mei and Yin Er feel a bit dramatic, but considering that there are not so many perfect plans in reality, especially since Bai Mei has been refining alchemy for so many years, he has become a little anxious and even obsessed, so it is normal for him to fall into the trap. But when I saw the competition between the following companies, I finally understood why my results were not good. Who is a serious person who would release an alchemist to another place to make alchemy, and then compete with others to see how good he is? Shouldn't he be given materials and asked to practice his specialty elixirs to see how strong he is? If you are good at it, will you slowly take over your own recipe?

Nowadays, the authors are all useless and have no brains, systems, extra points, experience, entries, God rewards hard work... Each one is lazier than the other, and each one is better than the last. On the surface, they are new settings, but in essence they are technical skills. They are still lazy, do not want to grow, but are messed up! The work is inherently deficient, no matter how good the writing is, it is useless!

I've finished chasing it, overall it's pretty good🤔

Will other alchemists have to starve to death? No place to live anymore? Not as good as Jiang Li, but also not as good as anyone else?

After watching it, I realized that the protagonist hadn't practiced qi yet, and I was convinced.

It is indeed the first time for the young author to write a book, so he is not particularly clear about readers' reading preferences🤔🤔. So if there is anything that feels bad, you are welcome to point it out. Including but not limited to [writing style, writing style, plot arrangement, characterization, cool design, whether the setting is difficult to understand, whether self-expression is unbalanced, literary youth disease...] Of course it is best to be specific. For positive corrections: I will change what I can, and I will try my best to change what I cannot. Still upholding the only principle: paying readers are always the best! ! If you are still dissatisfied, I won't delete the review even if I scold you a few words (as long as it's not too bad or a blind person)

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The writing is OK, but it's a little flat. Come on, brother.