Shrouding the Heavens: Rising Through Card Draws

Trivia: Chen Dong wrote martial arts novels because there was no fantasy at that time.

Overall, it's okay, but it's a bit long-winded and the explanations are too heavy. On the contrary, the aspects of recruiting girls and fighting have been briefly touched on so far. It feels to me like the author is a fan of settings. The key point is that you have already written this kind of harem story. It is best to write some interactions with the female characters. After updating to the latest chapter, the latest Little Moon impressed me a little bit. And after all, they are fellow members of Zhetian, so they can't be too sparing in combat. Also, the world of Tianshan Tonglao, showing them their original destiny is really poisonous to me. It would be fine if it was just a tragic episode, but what about the possibility of having your woman witness herself being fucked by another man. . . I can only say that I can't resist this, but everything else is fine.

The creativity is good, but it's a bit watery. One thing is often said over and over again, from different angles. The author wants to take the postgraduate entrance examination.

Moreover, after the petrified elixir of immortality enters the inner world of the protagonist, it will be directly wiped out by God's will, and it is possible to directly resurrect him. It will probably take a long time to grow again.

At any rate, there are some colorful features in the original work.

It was too long-winded, so I only read six chapters. The main text is only one chapter long, and the rest is all system introduction, explanation, and settings. These things should be placed in the setting collection before the main text, but the author wrote it as the main text. This one is as long-winded as the one I removed from the bookshelf yesterday. That one was about the bloodline of emperors, and the first projected world was infinitely terrifying.

There is also the female body Ye Fan, which makes the brother feel so happy. After finishing it, he said with emotion, Ye Fan tastes really good. 😁

The idea is okay, but it's too wordy and all the settings are thrown out at once.

So far, it's okay. I don't have much pressure on combat power. It looks like I will have the combat power of a saint when I go to Beidou. When Beidou recruits Yan Ruyu, I will have imperial soldiers, and I can almost become a citizen of the motherland.

There are a bunch of system lottery techniques, moves, setting mechanisms, etc. Anyone who knows the original plot of the trilogy knows that it is not necessary to mention the original plot without the basic chapters. The amazingly talented and powerful people or protagonists in the novels all have their own magical skills and great ways. If the quasi-immortal emperor or above in the trilogy does not create his own system realm and great way to sublimate and evolve, he will have to follow the path of the predecessors. Similar to the version of the Eighty-nine Mysterious Techniques in the first generation, it can automatically adapt to different environments, the laws of heaven and earth, etc. To maintain the ultimate peak combat power. It feels like practicing a bunch of different magical realms. It feels like a mixed practice. Even those who dare not dare to go back to Shattered Void are speechless. Below and above Shattered Void are completely different mysterious realms of difference between heaven and earth, special numerical mechanisms and other effects. It is almost like a composition and it is not very interesting!

It's so watery. It's so uncomfortable to listen to the book. After listening to it for an hour, I felt that the plot was not advanced at all.

It's been too busy lately, and the Great Sage of Covering the Sky is exhausted from helping this group of people.

There's too much nonsense. Chapter thirty or twenty is okay, but after that I get tired of aesthetics.

To put it fun, Xiang Yutian, the evil emperor in Huang Yi's martial arts novels, lived from the Eastern Jin Dynasty to the death of Emperor Wen of the Sui Dynasty. He lived for more than two hundred and thirty years before he was broken... And he always maintained the appearance of a middle-aged uncle in his forties... There is something about the magic of cultivating demons in the heart of the Tao. In the novel about cultivating immortals, he is also a master of the golden elixir. The problem with Huang Yi's martial arts is that the difference in combat power and life level between Grand Master and Shattered Void is too great. There are clearly two levels that can be upgraded sequentially, but there seems to be a hundred levels difference in between. The Grand Master is still a human being playing on the earth. He said that Potian is a long-lived extraordinary human being at the level of conventional missiles. Once broken, it becomes an immortal cosmic life that travels through space and time... The contrast is too great.

What can't be written about this and what can't be written about that. To put it bluntly, it is still a problem with the writing style, although the pace of this book is incomparably exciting. But after reading for a long time, readers will also feel aesthetic fatigue. The tendency of female characters to be mentioned in one stroke and nothing can be established mainly depends on the author's ability to hold on. The details of the emotional drama can be seen in Beidou No. 1 Affection next door. The author has nothing to say except that his writing style is too polished.

😐 Think of Ye Fan practicing Shennong Liuli Gong as a normal person and write an introduction. I thought it was just a joke, but ended up writing a lot. Is it really the same category as the previous male video harem?

In harem novels, the protagonist has unlimited women, which means that the protagonist will accept unlimited women. If you like harem novels, you can read it.

Will there be Yangshen martial arts? I feel that the wheel of life and death is quite suitable for the protagonist.

The training system is too complex. The protagonist can be hacked to death during the Law Creation Festival in the world of Zhe Tian. Moreover, the sky is constantly thundering, sometimes martial arts, and sometimes the romance of the gods are coming out, and sometimes there is the tomb of the gods, and sometimes all kinds of martial arts are being used to sell sheep's meat. There are also those who can practice the eight or nine mysterious skills. Author, your writing style cannot support your imagination.

When did you collect the three girls of Yaochi? You didn't write at all. I thought you skipped a chapter.

A blocking point in the front is a bit like a rant. How should I put it? This poisonous point describes the broken void, which is equivalent to the body uniting with the heaven and the heart, the two blending together. It also describes him breaking through the universe and traveling across the sea. Ah, I really want to complain about this. Is he that awesome? If you put it in the Legend of the Gods written behind Huang Yi, he just left the earth and went into the universe. Where did he come from to travel to other worlds and seas of worlds? Is he so awesome?

Can you speed up the pace? You only get two sheets a day like this, just like squeezing a sponge, just little by little.

Is it the perfect chapter? It seemed like it was perfect all of a sudden. There was no description at all, and what state the protagonist is in now. The description was too vague.

I hope the author can write more eye-catching content. In recent chapters, the idea of ​​Jiang Yifei revealing the identities of Duan De and the Black Emperor related to immortals in their previous lives is okay. There are two main points of interest in Chen Dong's novels. One is that the description of the battle scenes should be grand (the special effects of the battles are exaggerated), and the other is that the protagonists should be able to live a normal life (for example, Perfect World No. 10 Loves to eat animal milk, Chu Feng of the Holy Ruins is a human trafficker, and Zhetian Longma, Heihuang, Duan De, and Ye Fan are involved in things together). Generally speaking, there is no problem if a fan writes in these two directions.

More updates can solve all problems

With some imagination, the Dao Heart Demon sees all things as fluctuations. If combined with means such as Dao Patterns, wouldn't it be a low-end version of the True Demon that is indestructible? There is also a sixth kind. If you dismantle it and let Hongyan learn it, and plant it in the protagonist's world, you can borrow strength, experience, insights, etc. Isn't this an alternative heaven or holy position?

Write more about the heroine and the supporting character, don't let it disappear in a few sentences.

Well, his three tombs and three Yis are one and the same, which is essentially to cultivate the human body's essence, energy, and spirit, which is equivalent to the Tao fruit crystallization of the Three Emperors and Chi You Fuxi's Tao body (human head and dragon body) and the Eight Diagrams (Yi), Shennong's ox-headed crystal belly, as well as farming (solar terms), medicine The merits of medicine (herbs, gold and stone), the virtue of fire (sun god), the achievements of the three thousand royal maidens of Xuanyuan, the achievements of killing immortals, gods, Buddhas, demons and ghosts, and unifying the human race (four sides and six aspects), Chi You's negative side is all the gods and evil spirits based on the Qi Tomb created by Shennong The essence of mountain tomb is not cultivation but use It is Yu, externally using God (consciousness) to sense Tao (the changes in all things and phenomena) to explain Tao Yudao (evolution of heaven and earth to govern all phenomena), and to grow the soul internally. Internally, it develops the potential of the body to control everything within itself The essence of Qi Tomb is refining (fire virtue, sun), which can be regenerated into Qi and destroyed into evil, internally refining the human body. The innate Qi (because it is extremely pure and has no attributes, so it turns into water when it meets the weather and wind, which is equivalent to the Qi at the beginning). It opens up eight additional Dantian Qi seas (Shen Nong Jiuquan) in the nine orifices. It evolves into the eight innate Qi and finally merges into one again. It feels like the completion of the technique can open up all the acupoints and apertures all over the body. After all, the hexagrams The changes of infinite vitality are also endless It can not only generate and evolve all kinds of energy and phenomena (as long as all things have a thorough analysis of their nature, their own true energy can evolve their energy), but can also in turn refine all things into their own Qi, or destroy each other and destroy their own Qi to evolve into evil and destroy all things in the world, and use the method of refining Qi to refine the body. It is to enhance the essence of life acquired and reverse the innate to refine the body of gods and demons For the appearance of other people's qi, it is like observing the body (the operation of body data and skills) and to refine other people's qi to observe its way (the true meaning of the skills and magical powers). It can also control all the qi of the world Well, there is also the emperor's qi-watching technique, which is the true qi of others. , Qi machine, and qi number are all in the eyes The shape of the tomb is transformation (six phases) or transformation (four sides), deconstructing all phenomena and shaping the body with the law (the metaphysical is called the Tao, the metaphysical is called the weapon) Using runes (or yin and yang Yao) to perform the shape of the heaven and earth and all the spirits, the images of all things are transformed into one's own body. It begins with transforming all forms into one's own body (what is changed is an essential change) and ends with a perfect body (equivalent to becoming a combination of the Supreme Humanity's Heaven, Four-faced God, and Great Commander). Therefore, once it becomes an enemy or even fails, the body will be partially analyzed and re-engraved and transformed into the Dharmakaya. Therefore, once defeated, it will never come back again.

I have an idea, if we remove the Supreme Humanity (big breeding cattle are too bitter 😭), can we evolve from Fuxi to Shennong in the order of the Three Emperors? The Shennong tribe evolved from the Fuxi bloodline mixed with several foreign bloodlines Or it evolved into the Xuanyuan Tribe based on the sealed human race. After all, the Yellow Emperor was the only one among the three emperors who was born with no difference from ordinary people.

It is best to write about the avatar to serve the main body, and the power belongs to oneself. If the avatar cannot write well, the book will be ruined.