Shrouding the Heavens: The Most Devoted Man in Beidou

There are currently 21 chapters in total. The highlight is that the ancient prose is played very skillfully and the plot arrangement is okay, especially the earth period. The problem is mainly in the two sections of the Tomb of the Green Emperor and the destruction of the Li family. The common problem is that there are a lot of obscure ancient texts and rare characters, which affect the smoothness of the plot and combat. The Tomb of the Green Emperor feels a bit messy. There is another problem in the part about controlling the puppet in the cave. On Earth, the protagonist looked like a Taoist master. When he went to the Beidou Cave, although he didn't kill anyone, his style was like a villain. His character was exactly the opposite. However, after I went to the Xu family and started teaching, I returned to the smooth and smooth style of the Earth period.

Other Zhetian fanfics are from beginning to end, but this one is from beginning to end, and the author's writing style is really good, and it is very comfortable to read. It can be regarded as an outlier among Zhetian fandoms The monthly pass is given to you

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Has the protagonist not returned from ancient times yet?

The emotional descriptions are delicate and nuanced, and the combat descriptions are fierce and domineering.

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Dude, it's very well written. I've rarely seen a book like "Zhetianhougong", and you've also written something new. But you have to consider the audience of "Zhetianhou Gong" and what they like to read. When I first clicked on this book, I enjoyed reading it because of the large number of words. But so far, I personally feel that there are too many daily interactions between men and women, and even the plot of the protagonist's love affair with Xia Jiuyou appears in the entire chapter. Hasn't your 24-hour reading time declined? Furthermore, there are too many plots about other supporting characters in recent chapters, and even pig's feet only play a third of the role in one chapter at most. You may think you are paving the way, but some paving the way does not need to be too thin. For example, Pig's Feet went to find Sanguang Shen Shuili, and there was a war between two countries on the way. You can write this, because Pig's Feet was going to take action next, but Pig's Feet defeated the princess and the prince. The surviving prince asked Xia and Zhou for help. Is it necessary for this communication process to be too detailed? Then why do you write too many words about this kind of Chelu? It has to be seven or eight hundred words. If you are just for the word count, then pretend I didn't say it. If you are writing this subconsciously, you have to control the content and focus on the pig's feet. The main supporting characters Ye Fan, Hei Huang, and Duan De can add more words. In addition, these two supporting characters are involved in the colorful stone, so it's okay to write more. But if the Black Emperor fails to tell Pigfoot the information about the colorful stones in time, then your plot is really unnecessary. You have been laying the groundwork for the loss of the colorful stone for a long time. From the priest, to the material storage point of the four dynasties, Juancheng, to the Hongchenxuan Wenren, the Black Emperor, and the Xunlong Family, how many hands have gone through in between, plus other plots such as your love affair, there must be a hundred thousand words in between? There are enough, such as other passers-by who appear briefly. If Pig's Foot is not present, if it does not contribute to the subsequent plot, why waste so many words? For example, in the latest two chapters, the grudges between Yang Shen and Ci, and then Pig's Foot obtains the sacred water amaranth, his son survives, and another group of forces arrives. The author is very good at foreshadowing. Compared with others, the plot he wrote is not very rigid, but the shortcoming is still as mentioned above, it is too watery, which will lead to loose content. The plot of the story is about linking one link after another. You have done it, but the distance between the links is too long, which will cause readers to skip reading. Readers who are following up on the book will not remember your book in the end. There is a book in the same category called Fluclight that is already a high-quality product. Personally, I think your book is stronger and at least has some of the majestic features of the original work. But why you don't have a high-quality book, you should think carefully, so that you can make progress and make money.

In the eyes of the world, the protagonist has a pure and immaculate spirit, and he is dedicated to pursuing the truth and does not eat the fireworks of the world. He is like a true immortal coming to the world. In fact, the protagonist is a suave and flirtatious woman, and can be called the pick-up king in the Beidou world. The protagonist in the eyes of the Beidou natives, a descendant of His Highness Kunpeng from the Yao clan, was later promoted to the Primordial Dragon Prince by the Primordial Royal Clan. In the eyes of the Black Emperor, a mysterious and ancient village has produced many great emperors, with the Great Saint as its protector. In fact, the protagonist is a domineering body of a Taoist temple in a desolate planet. The domineering body in the eyes of the audience has a sea of ​​suffering and purple energy, and the body is cultivated and the shots are domineering and fierce. In fact, the protagonist, the bloody sea of ​​bitterness, howls in the dark wind, and his moves are even more sinister, sinister and weird. The protagonist in the eyes of fellow villagers is a man of integrity, gentleness and compassion. He does not judge high and low based on realm, and does not greedy for treasures. When he was robbed, he spied on the secrets of heaven, and gave guidance to help others resolve disasters. In fact, the protagonist, who also practices the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique, tells people's fortunes. He said that everyone should be destined to have such a calamity, and all of them turned into Taoist food. Finally, I have serious doubts. The protagonist is not a hegemonic body. The protagonist has a strong body, purple blood, can cultivate the divine form, and has a strong connection with the holy body. The protagonist thinks he is a hegemonic body. If you think about it carefully, the Overlord Body Immortal Platform cultivates the divine form, the protagonist cultivates the Dao Palace, and also cultivates visions. All kinds of special physiques are responsive to the Holy Body, such as the divine body, and the physical body is not weak. The protagonist may not be the Overlord Body, but may be the Hongmeng Purple Body. The author deceives the audience as well, and physical fitness may be the biggest point of contrast. For example, there is the Hongmeng Purple Qi species.

I probably saw the protagonist and Ji Biyue getting tired of each other for a while and then going down the mountain with Weiwei to find a chance (viewed on another mobile phone number). Advantages: 1. The author's writing style is excellent, the style is very mature and gorgeous, various ancient Chinese classics are at hand, and each plot is wonderful. This book is overall very good, and it is one of the few novels that I have read with excellent writing style. 2. The portrayal of the protagonist is also very interesting. He has the detached nature of a Taoist monk, and at the same time, he has a chivalrous heart that draws his sword to help when the road is rough. He has his own set of rules for his behavior. The purpose of acting and speaking is very clear and concise, without too many long-winded plots. 3. There is not much to say about the female protagonist. Anyway, the male protagonist is just a walking succubus. One day, there was chaos in the universe. I believe it was not started by the Dark Lord. It must have been a fire in the backyard 🙂 4. In terms of combat, there is one sentence, 'Those who can do it will never make noise.' The plot before the relationship): 1. The author likes the description of artistic conception, environment, dialogue, character psychology, etc., The author tends to express it as if it can only be understood but cannot be expressed in words. The feeling of paradox is very strong, which is reflected in the plot. It seems that the plot has a kind of erratic feeling. The protagonist has a very strong feeling of floating outside the world, as if he cannot integrate into the character, cannot participate in the plot, and loses the immersive feeling. 2. There is very little description of the psychological activities of the protagonist, coupled with all kinds of gorgeous words, which makes the protagonist look a bit unhuman. He either scolds the protagonist or takes it literally. The protagonist lacks very important emotional expressions and emotional expressions. He is like a non-human creature without emotions and emotions, doing things and thinking only for the purpose. This feeling began to improve until the relationship with Ji Biyue was established. The author began to pay attention to the description of the protagonist's emotions, psychology, and emotions, and the protagonist began to look like a human being. 3. The wording and sentences are too gorgeous, too archaic, and too dense. The author can use more vernacular descriptions as appropriate, which will make the reading more comfortable. Reading comfort is better than anything else! 4. The only thing that I think is a lightning point is the plot where the protagonist parasitizes the Holy Son of the Purple Mansion. The plot where the protagonist controls the body of the Holy Son of the Purple Mansion and conquers the Saint of the Purple Mansion is actually a doppelganger. Because the author's writing is so good, I can barely accept this plot. I hope the author can handle the future plots about the Saint of the Purple Mansion. That's all. It's my first time to write a book review like a short essay, (`へ´*)ノ. Finally, I would like to praise the author's writing style, which is really excellent (actually, I am quite afraid of authors with excellent writing style, some always like to make trouble, such as literary youth disease). I hope the author can persist in finishing the book, come on!

Alas, the writing is so good and it is my favorite harem novel. Let me say a few words. I clicked on this book at the beginning and read the beginning. I was amazed by the exquisite writing, smooth plot, and interesting content. I have been reading the plot of Hime Biyue and I feel it is very interesting. She picks up girls and fights to win the treasure. The first deep love is well-deserved. Going to the homepage, I wonder why there are no high-quality products. Isn't that right? As a result, I unknowingly read the plot of the Son of Purple Mansion. The titles of each chapter became longer and longer, and there were more and more words describing the appearance of the scenery. Sometimes it may exceed two-thirds. Isn't the author tired of writing? From Big Black Dog Kidnapping the Holy Girl of the Yin Yang Cult, I watched it all night but didn't see the follow-up plot. When I saw it at five o'clock in the morning, I had a headache when I woke up. There were long paragraphs describing the scenery, the appearance of the Yaochi Saint, Jin Jieyu's appearance description, and the description of clothing. It was like a word of mouth. Regarding dialogue, 95% of Qidian's readers are novice readers. It is difficult to make big money by writing this way. Don't deliberately show off your writing skills. Just describe the appearance and clothing of these saints occasionally. Readers already know that they are peerless beauties. Repeating descriptions back and forth will not retain readers at all. Sometimes after reading a few chapters, the plot is not advanced at all. The story about the Palace of the Empress of Heaven is about picking up girls and fighting to steal the treasure. The writing can be more straightforward, the author can write more relaxedly, and the readers will not be tired after reading it. Of course, this is just my suggestion, and I will continue to order it in the future. Who can write emotional dramas well 😢

But to be honest, I personally don't like this style of writing. Indeed, this book has neither a nerdy smell nor a loser vibe, but it goes to the other extreme - ruthless. It's called "Zhetian's Most Affectionate", but I only saw the acting skills - which heroine does the protagonist get close to not just for her training resources? Except for the scene with a group of little girls from the Li family at the beginning, I didn't feel there was anything human about the protagonist. In addition to anger, there is also the so-called joy when the level is improved, and the rest of the time is indifference hidden under the rich acting skills.

I have never seen the Mie Ji family. To be honest, I have to destroy them all. I wonder if the author can let everyone do what they want, just use their soul blood to summon the Void Emperor. The Ji family is the most useless family.

I just started watching it, and I saw the main character being a teacher, teaching his disciples, and managing a group of insignificant people. It felt like a boring plot, and it was hard to continue watching. Currently 24 chapters

The overall feeling after reading it is that the writing style is very close to Zhetian, and it is a very good book. I think there is still some room for improvement. The protagonist has been speaking in ancient Chinese. Although the writing is very good, it feels too old-fashioned and a bit unnatural. Then there are some details. Ji Biyue's feelings for the protagonist were too fast. It felt like teasing, but later it seemed like real feelings. Resources were given out of nowhere, and it felt like the author deliberately arranged them to give away resources. The same goes for Yan Ruyu's feelings for the protagonist. There were no details and it was too fast. The overall rhythm is a bit rushed, and I personally feel it would be better to slow down a bit.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 (only personal suggestion, if the author has his own style and rhythm, you can ignore me)

I don't understand why the heroine has Jin Jieyu? Yan Ruyu has the Demon Emperor's Heart and Emperor's Arms, and her talents are good. Yan Ruyu thought that Yu Heng was from the same race, and she didn't have many resources at the beginning, so she gave all her resources to the protagonist. Wei Wei has fairy eyes, very good talent, and is still a quasi-emperor in the later stage. Wei Wei seems to be the same in the late stage of Shaking Light Holy Land, and he also has a relationship experience. Ji Biyue also started to play the role of the protagonist. She gave her the source of alien species and some physical trainers. She also worked hard and gave the Void Sutra to help the protagonist avoid being chased. She will definitely have no problem being the heroine. Fenghuang gave Dingfengzhu and Fuxi the Bagua Pan, as well as a relationship experience in the Land of Jueling. Zixia is an innate Taoist with a very strong talent, and it can be said that she has been with the protagonist for the longest time. She stayed together in the Zifu Holy Land for a long time. The Holy Maiden of Yaochi also has the Western Emperor Sutra and the Imperial Arms, as well as a relationship with the Yuan Tianshi, and her talent is not bad. Xia Jiuyou is very talented. Most importantly, she has Gai Jiuyou as her backer and has a lot of relationship experience. Jin Jieyu really doesn't know why she should be the heroine. She needs strength but not strength, talent but not talent, background but no background, no imperial weapons and emperor scriptures, and the most important thing is no emotional experience. She is so embarrassed that she doesn't know where her face comes from. She has been working on it just because she knows some details about the protagonist. When the protagonist's identity is exposed, she can be said to have nothing. She is still robbing people, without any self-awareness. Unless there is some related plot to make up for it, it is completely unworthy

After reading some, I feel that this book's quality score is appropriate. If I want it to be higher, I can only do wonders for die-hard readers. Personal evaluation, this is a book with obvious advantages and disadvantages. Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is not bad, and the emotional scenes are described delicately. Disadvantages: Perhaps it focuses too much on describing too many female characters, taking away the most common scenes in Zhetian fandom such as fighting, practicing and breaking through, etc. Simply put, Zhetian lacks flavor. Secondly, there are two problems with too many female protagonists. 1. There are always some female characters that some readers don't like. The author uses writing to cover up this, but it still looks awkward, that kind of tangled feeling of wanting to sneer but feeling okay. 2. Because there are too many female protagonists, the male protagonist seems to be deeply affectionate for each one, but in fact he can't take care of them at all, giving people the feeling of a scumbag who is not doing his job properly... Summary: If the number of female protagonists can be controlled well, there are two, three, three or four, and more words and plots are used to make them more touching, and the rest of the saved space is used to polish other exciting points, I think this book may have better results. Finally, I seriously suspect that the author is addicted to the "comfort zone" and relies on constantly adding new heroines to expand the plot and lengthen the story. 😐

The main character's painting style is completely different from that of Ba Ti. It's better to change it to Tao Ti.

I feel that the protagonist's personality is quite split, like a great love god who insists on pretending to be a good person. Probably for the sake of ratings, although the protagonist has been trying his best to show the Taoist master's demeanor, the tyranny in his heart is still revealed from time to time. The protagonist is indifferent to his core.

The writing style of this book is very strong, but there is no fairy spirit in the lines. Instead, it has a weird and twisted feeling of evil beings in the fairy mist. The protagonist looks like some kind of anthropomorphic evil... The domineering power of Ba Ti can't be seen, but it is quite suitable for ruthless people's magic skills.

The author still thinks too highly of the so-called holy land sects. Holy lands without the inheritance of imperial weapons are just on the roadside, and they are not qualified to eat at the Beidou table!

Except for the two heroines with low likes, which I don't like, the others are pretty good.

Not accepting the Black Emperor? 😅😅😅

The author fast forwards to the story of the dog man revealing his true identity, encountering a large Shura field, killing everyone, and finally leaving Zhongzhou 🙂

It would be nice to fight more. It would really be a romance novel 🙂

How can we not like the Bodhisattva in this world who is so arrogant and charming?

Flirty but not vulgar, gorgeous but not seductive, elegant but seductive, this is how the emotional drama you wrote gives me the feeling. The battle scenes are also described with vivid details and appropriate details, making people excited. The writing style is close to the original text of Zhetian, but has its own style. In short, from the current point of view, this is a fairy tale, and it is close to being updated, haha.