Transmigrating into Shrouding the Heavens, Projecting Across the Heavens

The main character's name is a failure. At least half of the people can't understand it when they see it. Usually everyone just makes fun of it, so that's no problem. I really want to spend money to support your book. Do you think it's possible?

Let's change the name. The name of the protagonist really makes people want to stop reading.

I have no motivation to continue reading without changing the name of the protagonist.

Good guy, it's outrageous that the protagonist used his mobile phone to take pictures of the Kowloon Coffin. Is your memory so bad? You have already become an immortal, so this is outrageous

If you are practicing another system in Zhetian at a low level, you may have never died, and you are not looking for death like this. When Shi Hao first opened the Reunion Sea, he suffered a divine punishment plus an Immortal-Decapitating Guillotine and died once with the Reincarnation Seal. If you are at a low level and want to practice another system, you may die without knowing how.

The Shilipo Sword God doesn't want to do anything, so he has to go out and wander around.

The protagonist doesn't know how to play Goldfinger. The protagonists in a lot of urban fantasy novels all have that kind of small world. As a result, the protagonist insists on small-capacity space accessories and so on.

If you don't know how to write about women, you don't have to write about it. Why make the protagonist so sexually repressed?

Isn't War Immortal a joke? Has anyone become successful? Not even the trilogy, right?

There are too many secondary assumptions. I don't know if it's the author's own understanding of the book or because he hasn't read the original work at all.