Simultaneous Transmigration: Proving the Great Dao Across the Myriad Heavens

It's fine to say someone has lofty ideals. But to exaggerate their combat power is absurd. It's not about being a Western worshipper; Naruto, while not destroying planets, could at least be said to have cleansed the earth. At his peak, even a single person couldn't easily destroy a street. The strongest person is an ordinary human; do you understand the population limit?

I noticed some people praising Yiren (a popular Chinese fantasy character) here, and I can only say that Yiren is like Harry Potter: the initial concept is incredibly powerful, but the actual performance is quite weak! For example, while Harry Potter's magic isn't particularly strong in combat, it's characterized by omnipotence. He can manipulate space, time, life, and death—all at his fingertips.

Still searching for immortality alone? Can one person's immortality be as powerful as a giant wooden barrel? Can it destroy a star? Can it achieve immortality? What about being immortal? ...

The main character develops a split personality later on. When he first becomes an immortal, he says he has no interest in worldly power and doesn't want to concern himself with it. Later, after his alter ego, a fusion of the "Super God idiot world" and the "Joy of Life" world, arrives, he completely loses his mind and starts waging war against the entire world. I have no idea what he's going to do next.

What I dislike most about writing this kind of infinite flow novel is the random addition of settings and then writing haphazardly based on one's own speculations. Look at the successful books; they all enhance the plot's interest, not completely alter the world. If you want to write your own story, create original plots. Too many flaws make it impossible to know where to begin.

1. I feel that the protagonist has no goals of his own, does not have his own plans for doing things, and is not smart enough to have enough respect for absolute power! 2. The strongest power in Under One Person is not any superhuman or sect, but the nation! All-Access is merely a department representing the nation and cannot represent the entire nation!

Many people rave about their "theme" and such. What's the point of a lofty theme if the actual performance is rubbish? A theme without practical support is just bragging. For example, I create a palm technique with the theme of creating something extraordinary, but in reality, it's not much stronger than an ordinary person. The theme is lofty enough, right?

Just a heads up, there are a few issues with the *Covering the Sky* chapter that are making it difficult to read. Ask the author! The protagonist hadn't even become an immortal yet, but he created a technique that supposedly grants immortality! *Covering the Sky* couldn't grant immortality because the universe's environment lacked the necessary substances for longevity!

This is a good book. Chapter 16 is a bit far-fetched. Lu Jin wouldn't just hand over the Reverse Rebirth technique to someone he'd only met once. Who do you think you are? Just because your innate ability could potentially make you a great demon, and you managed to control it, does that mean he'll pass it on to you? Besides, you're just an enthusiast of supernatural culture, not a Taoist.

If I were a Kage-level expert in the real world, then sorry, I wouldn't eat beef.