Domestic Realm: You Have a System, So Why Join a Chat Group?

As long as you write about one person, even if you are the return of the Immortal Emperor, the resurrection of the Demon God, or the Lord of the World who rules countless worlds, you will still participate in the Luotian Dajiao Competition and act like a monkey to others, and at the same time, you have to kneel down and act like a dog to the company, for fear that the other party will not give you the opportunity to kneel like a dog.

I thought of a joke. The pig's trotters can extract other people's abilities, and then the pig's trotters extract Lu Mingfei's courage, Han Li's talent, Xu Zhu's face, Aqua's IQ, Hawking's physique, and Guiwu Shimu's courage. I don't know who has the worst luck. If there is anything else to add, please remember to mention it.

The protagonist is living for others, or the author has too heavy a filter on the original characters and always gives too much respect to these characters, making the protagonist look a bit humble. The description is more biased towards the group, and even overshadows the protagonist. There are these signs at the beginning, but they are not so obvious. The world of Zhu Xian will no longer be played in the future. For example, Zhongli is called emperor, which is a name for a superior person. The protagonist is just Zhongli's group of friends and not his subordinates. The limelight is all given to Zhang Xiaofan. The words and skills that are in the limelight are all given by the protagonist. Even the harem is opened, and the protagonist is like a passerby.

The character of the protagonist is a bit fragmented. In the first forty chapters, he acted as a knight, but during the demon-slaying conference, as the main character, he could take action, but at least explain before taking action, giving the many soldiers who came from the gang a chance and space to think about quitting. However, the protagonist did not say a word and killed them all regardless of whether they were good or bad, leaving only a few good people in his memory. It was very fragmented. It seems that the protagonist has no behavioral logic, no desire to seek truth, no good or evil, and he does things based on his own preferences. The knight's behavior in the previous forty chapters is very embarrassing. It's understandable that you don't explain it at the beginning. After all, it's useless to explain if the situation is wrong, not to mention that you've already explained it the first time, but if you don't explain it when everyone is gathered together, the character you embody is too murderous. Summary: The character is undefined and the behavior is illogical, but the style of acting is still very refreshing and refreshing, but it is easy to collapse in the follow-up. A protagonist who has no general direction and acting style can easily collapse the entire novel, and the female emotional drama is the same as dog training. I suggest that the harem just stop it, don't engage in meat drama, it is too abstract

I don't understand your reason for helping Duan Yu! He doesn't want the protagonist to take on a disciple, and he doesn't want the protagonist to take on a disciple as his master. Normal people should become indifferent because of this. Let's not talk about whether Du Yu will ask for help at this time, and what reason the protagonist has to help him. Although Duan Yu is naive, he is not stupid. He is always attentive to others and is either a traitor or a thief.

I am writing a martial arts fanfic, please change the title and book title 🙂🙄

Can't we ask the group members and Han Li to save people? The injury of an ordinary person, the matter of an ordinary healing elixir in the world of immortality, it is so complicated, and there are various skills and spells. I don't even ask. Is the protagonist planning to die in Tianlong? There are too few plots in the chat group, and some plots are hard water. Isn't it possible to solve it in the chat group?

It's Chapter 94, and you haven't even appeared in the chat group a few times. You have basically no sense of existence. You have been writing the martial arts article. In the chapter about martial arts, the chat group has not appeared for a while. I logged out and looked at the title. I must have read the wrong book. You didn't write like this in the world of martial arts. Now you still write about Zhu Xian. This kind of ridiculous novel has basically disappeared. There is no fan book written by someone. You picked it up. This novel is not well-known now. How many people still remember the plot? They can't remember the plot or they haven't read it. Are you sure you have the ability to make people interested in reading it?

This title is deceiving. I came here for the domestic area.

The inspiration comes from "I Join the Chat Group of the System Streaming Protagonist" by the polar traveler boss, but don't worry, it won't be plagiarized. Please feel free to watch it. The author will delve deeply into the domestic area.