Middle-Aged, and the System Won't Let Me Give In Anymore

It's a rural novel set in a martial arts world 😦

Can this kind of subject matter really keep readers engaged in the early stages? I, for one, couldn't continue after reading three chapters.

It makes me sick to watch. People with talent, systems, strength, and ability are all suppressed like this. Sigh.

Suppressing strength is understandable, but it shouldn't be done indefinitely. After reading forty chapters, only a few involve characters breaking through with the system and then having a sudden enlightenment to increase their strength. The plot is also problematic; while others receive a slap followed by a sweet treat, this one is a series of elaborate schemes, like the Eighteen Subduing…

You need to understand that you only write a plot that starts with a stagnation and then culminates in a climax if you have a large readership. If you really want to write it, you should say in the comments, "Don't worry, there's a twist." Otherwise, how many people will continue reading?

The first three chapters set the tone for the entire story. If it weren't for the opening section, which was neither particularly strong nor particularly enjoyable, the readership could have increased even further. The story was quite good in its forties and fifties. Unfortunately, many readers were kicked out by the author himself before they even got to the beginning.

It feels like an ancient, pretentious novel. 😅😅😅

Middle age? Perhaps the author has simply lost their ability to write with passion in middle age.

It's a bit strange. It's not particularly bad, but you can skip some chapters if you want. Well, it does seem to have some merit, and some chapters are even quite enjoyable to read. He wavers between good and bad, like the good one.

I've been a graduate of a top-tier Wuhan University for almost 10 years and I'm still not even at the third rank. I'm just wondering how they got in and how they graduated in the first place.