Martial Arts!

The male protagonist's character is up to par, the plot rhythm and writing are good... Although there is not much innovation, I almost didn't feel that the word count was too high or that the progress was under pressure.

Hong Kong is a big place, with so many awesome people?

This Li Nanshu is really a poisonous point in this book. There is a female character in Lu Wugui's hometown association who is similar to Li Nanshu. People worship Jindan Sect's foundation elders. There are traces of her strength. Li Nanshu came here smuggled in together. Even if she practiced for three or four years earlier, her current level is unknown. What is her talent compared to the master? There is a big boss master who is Dragon Elephant or above. He focuses on profiling the female protagonist. There is no logic.

I gave you six monthly passes, let me complain. Everything else about this book is good, but there are too few updates. If I were the author, I would update at least 30,000 words a day, coding like an old donkey every day 😏😏😏😏

This is a very clichéd start, just average.

Just like the title, we are brainstorming. You can post here the names of martial arts that you think are good-sounding and powerful, as well as the corresponding moves and effects of the martial arts, so that the authors who have bad names can use them for reference QAQ

How do you create a colony with so many gods and demons?

To put it simply, the functions of cheat cheats must be measured. Don't add other functions after writing it for a while. This will waste the previous highlights. You should not have it in your dream practice. It is a cheat that can last forever. Okay, there is one more cheat. Many authors just add it when they have some ideas, and don't write about the outline and the role of golden fingers at all. Therefore, if there are too many golden fingers, it will be more difficult to write, because the pace will be too big and it will be nonsense. Easy to hang. You practice during the day and you rely on eating to recover. So what do you rely on to practice in your dreams? Spirit? After all, you are still an ordinary person, not an extraordinary person. You must always have logical thinking, and don't think you can break it. Isn't that what Bai Xi wrote earlier?

As far as I can see from the free chapters, I feel that the routine is still too obvious. It's fine without bubble comments. I can read it. But with bubble comments, I can't read it at all [Take the little ones to get old][The magic power comes to send][Inferior bones][The dog is sneaky] These are the ones that I can see without reading the bubble comments. They are too obvious So I want to ask how it will be after it is released.

These few pictures I wrote today seem a little speechless🙄

I feel that the author has average talent, which means he is talented at writing online articles. The creation of the protagonist, the setting of the system, the creation of the family, the master, the villain, and the description of the fight... Mediocre It belongs to a skilled web writer, and it is difficult to become a master.

Protagonist: Li Xiuwen (Cense Burner, Taixu Illusion) [Practice] Sea Sand Stump, Sleeping Shark Kung Fu, Whale Swallowing Technique Heart Furnace Three Casts (Heart Furnace Style) [Fighting Method] Turn Sand Palm, Shatter the Sea (Kick Technique), Killing Whale Fist Paoding Zhenjie ( Sword Technique) Shen Technique Thousand Waves of Floating Light Jinghong Wandering Dragon (Red Qiu Flow) [Hard Qigong] Armor-Binding Kung Fu (Mountain Moving Flow), Iron Buddha Kung Fu Golden Bell Shield Level classification: Beginner, Small Success , Dacheng, perfection, extreme realm ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [Border division] Pi membrane (green membrane, purple membrane, black membrane) Jiao muscle (snake muscle, python muscle, dragon muscle) Tiger elephant (condensation species, tiger hunting, throwing elephant) ) Jin Luo () [School Level]: Wild Boxing, Authentic, Famous Sihai Martial Arts School-Huang Sihai (Haishaliu, Authentic) Three Heroes: Chen Beiwang, Qiu Xiang, Xiao Tianhong, Bai Lang (abandoned disciple, thirteenth young master, the adopted son of Tianyi Hao)

There is actually something wrong with the logic of the author's plot. The villain has become a tiger elephant after three months, which means that he has very good qualifications and cannot be a servant. Moreover, he comes from a martial arts master's family who is not poor, and the martial arts atmosphere is good, but he has delayed becoming a tiger elephant until he was 25 years old...

The writing is good, but the plot is really over. At the beginning, I smuggled into Hong Kong from the mainland. Later, when I practiced martial arts, I found that the mainland was stronger. I learned martial arts from the mainland passed down by my master. After the protagonist upgraded, he went to the mainland to retrieve the inheritance. There is no one else in this plot.

The author deliberately kept this weak point in his mind because he wanted the protagonist to be looked down upon no matter where he went and then pretended to be a slap in the face. This would be too easy. An early setting can be used when the protagonist dies

Could it be that the protagonist is looking for trouble, rather than the trouble looking for the protagonist? It is still the thinking of more than ten years ago. When the protagonist comes, enemies will fly everywhere. Everyone can guess the protagonist and will cause trouble for the protagonist no matter how small the matter is.

There are no big poisonous points, but there are too many small poisonous points. Maybe the author doesn't want to use his brain. Many plots are unreasonable and forced to push forward. The protagonist Tang is set as a trio. I finally know why the author has written three books and he is still at level 5. This is the flaw in the plot. If he writes ten more books, it will be at this level. But the advantage is that AI should not be used, because the AI ​​plot cannot have so many poisonous points 😄

The Lu Yu in your book was made to fly by you. According to the timeline in your book, it only took a month for Lu Yu to break through the Jiao muscle, and he was 40% gone. Isn't it unreasonable that a person with average bones can do so quickly without taking drugs?

It's inexplicable that Lao Tian writes about women. Wouldn't you be done with the main character in one stage? How can you raise expectations by two or three more? Is this some kind of ancient routine where grassroots meet a saint? And you are not as good as someone else who is a saint with a grassroots background. Their background is that of a saint. You are a character created by a deus ex machina. You are so talented that all the early struggles of the protagonist are gone.

Ninety-nine percent, wouldn't it be possible to break through if you just practice it yourself? If you have a golden finger and you use drugs to achieve breakthroughs, then why do you need a golden finger? I don't understand.

Suddenly I discovered, could the heroine be a sewer crocodile? Zha, is this actually a novel about exotic beasts? 😐

Can a place as big as a palm like Hong Kong support extraordinary things?

It's not interesting, just make hay, the characters can't stand up

I feel that the author's biggest failure in writing is that Mojiji is not crisp at all! No wonder my grades can't go up!

Not many people care about the people at the bottom. It is better for the protagonist to take the initiative to eliminate hidden dangers, instead of being stalked by the void every time. Forcibly creating conflicts will affect the perception.

Before Gu Huoniao, I wrote about martial arts in either Guangzhou or Tianjin. After Gu Huoniao, I added Hong Kong, and I can't write about other than these three places.

It's not considered brainless, nor is it a cool article, it can only be regarded as a cultivation article. The protagonist's thoughts and actions are not like those of a time traveler, but more like an aboriginal, an aborigine with a relatively mature mind and awakened superpower (goldfinger). The plot is rather daily, with almost no excitement.

The previous book was about women pulling their crotch in the middle, but this one is better because it was about women pulling their crotch in the first chapter.

It's pretty good-looking, but I always feel like I'm missing a breath. Every time I have a mini-orgasm, I feel like I'm just a little short of it. It's always a little bit less satisfying. Or maybe the enemy isn't strong enough or vicious enough?

Hey😑 It's still the same as that of a bad guy with mixed prefixes, but with the addition of martial arts, the knowledge and understanding of the time-travel zone are meaningless. The "Zhutian Film and Television Winner" next door also started in Hong Kong, but the author's follow-up writing is really big-picture and bold! Let me see that Hong Kong style has this style influence!