From Mortician to the Sage Who Overturned Heaven

Everyone else has reached the four realms soon, but the protagonist is still wandering in one realm. Now he is about to grab resources with the people in the four realms. How do you improve the protagonist's realm in one go? It's a bit slow. You don't have to be completely in the first realm to lay the foundation.

This book is good, but I am dedicated to various industries, such as paper figurines, Feng Shui, ghost arts, supernatural arts, etc. Now that the protagonist is basically all martial arts, the appeal of this book has become mediocre. Have you never used paper figurines who are also advanced professional paper makers? Personally, I feel that these heretical or strange and strange magic techniques are the highlight.

The writing style is actually quite good. It can be seen that the author is ambitious and has a great world view. However, I feel that the plot is too slow at the moment. The protagonist did not get rid of the golden finger properly. He hits here and there with a hammer and a hammer, which is also a bit overwhelming. Chapters that have been saved for a few days feel like they are over without saying anything. The plot advances too slowly.

The professional level is constantly rising, and I can do all kinds of professions, but the realm is not rising. In these hundreds of chapters, all kinds of gods and demons are about to come out, and they are still in the second realm. If this book is not adjusted, it will be unfinished sooner or later.

The plot creativity is okay, but the pace is too slow. According to the current era when the master, the grandmaster and the grandmaster are chess pieces, the pig's feet are still dawdling in the first level, and they are not qualified to be cannon fodder!

It's almost unfinished. It's obvious that the core plot is to upgrade each profession, with plot attached. As a result, the level did not go up and the plot started to mess up. Author, did you lose the protagonist's upgrade data? It's time to change the characters. It has always been too far away from the core theme. It has been updated to this point. The protagonist is only in the second stage. Important plots rely on external means to forcibly improve the protagonist. It's obviously the route of killing monsters and upgrading, but the plot begins to unfinished. Naturally, the data will be poor if you are unhappy with it. I originally followed the line of refreshing writing. Recently, the protagonist I have been writing is a pendant. I have been messing around in group games. The protagonist can be messed up, but why should you, the author, mess around?

If you don't have a daughter, you can get thousands of orders. If you have a single woman, you can get thousands of orders. If you have many women, you can get hundreds of thousands of orders. If you have a group of wives and concubines, you can get platinum. The author should think more about it.

It's too ink, it's almost 300 chapters, is it still the second level? I don't know what to write next? The time span is also slow. I wrote 300 chapters in just a few months. The Hundred Industries category is just too poorly written. Can I finish writing so many occupations? It's probably going to suck

The writing is okay, but it's 200 chapters and it's still the first scene. The protagonist is too stressed.

Good-looking and good-looking. It's just that the title of the book is a little confusing. There are really too many articles on professional martial arts. But the author has written a lot of new ideas, which is very good, come on!