Peninsula: Idols Can Hear My Thoughts

It's quite interesting so far, but the male lead's way of making money is a bit too simplistic. He's supposed to be reborn, and it seems his only goal is to make money, not experience life. So, making money is easy; he's currently focused on pretending to be the boyfriend, buying houses, and waiting for property values ​​to rise in a few years.

This is just my personal opinion; please don't criticize if you disagree. I've read about chapter 170 so far, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. The protagonist is a bit too obsequious towards the female lead, seeming to pamper her excessively. As a reborn individual, it's understandable that he wants to change the future, but he shouldn't be this subservient.

When writing about K-pop, characters like Sulli and Han So-hee, from single-parent, lower-class backgrounds with no connections, are basically ruined by the unspoken rules of chaebols. Forget about company protection; even Li Xiaoman (Sulli's real name) is overwhelmed by the chaebols' influence. The real reason Sulli later became self-destructive and committed suicide is precisely this.

The writing is too far-fetched; trying to reason with people about trolls is truly laughable.

Jiyeon ten years ago: an absolute beauty

The ability to read minds, allowing even women to eavesdrop, has too many logical flaws and will cause the plot to collapse in the mid-to-late stages. Mind-reading should have certain conditions and limitations.

Park Jiyeon

Is it really that hard for the main characters in Korean entertainment to be normal people? I've been watching a few lately, and they're all either gangsters, loan sharks, special forces kings, even ghosts, or super chaebols, and some are even native Koreans (this one is the most outrageous; if you didn't know better, you'd think it was written for Koreans). No wonder this genre is so niche; the stories are just too outrageous. It's hard to find a normal person among them.

The author's emotional descriptions are quite delicate, but their common sense regarding business matters is, if not completely nonexistent, certainly severely lacking. For example, they borrow accounts to trade stocks, exchange four million dollars in foreign currency at a bank in a single day, and claim that acquiring a company requires owning the company itself. It's suggested that they establish a clear business focus in the future, and consult an AI for specifics on how to achieve this.

Author, you have a female lead card for Lee Ji-eun, who has only appeared a few times, while Hara, who has already kissed you, doesn't even have a card. Isn't that a bit inappropriate?