Peninsula: Starting with Collecting Debts from the Nation’s Little Sister

So what's the point of the protagonist being a debt collector? Is it because of the drama about getting to know Li Zhien? It's better not to write

No one can refuse love when it comes. Truth knows that her heart cannot be controlled by her. The moment I was sure that the other person was looking at me, my body temperature evaporated from the inside out, and my hands seemed to be extremely hot. The truth is a little dizzy, but I can't help but chase it. That finger. "Oh pretty baby——" he sang, pointing his index finger at her, as if he were completing a confession that only belonged to two people in front of hundreds of people. In the dim light source, surrounded by crowds. Bai Shiwen's moment of fame, one of the biggest winners in Guinness. People gathered around him, and he only had me in his eyes. Truth felt that his heart had nowhere to hide. Romantic and cherished actions are more moving than love words. Pumping, banging, beating violently, the heart showed its presence due to the movements of another person. He was still singing, still pointing, and still at the top of the crowd. With his drunken voice and hot eyes, he aroused the heart of Truth like a deer jumping for joy. When the song ended, he jumped off the table and she left. I can't face him now, I need to think, I want to be quiet, I, I want... Before returning to Korea. "Are you okay?" "Not good." Very bad. Life is so wonderful these days. I don't want to go any further here. Cinderella had a fairy godmother and a pumpkin carriage, and I was not living in a fairy tale. There is more than one Prince's Ball, and this may be the only time we stay in Guinness like this. He talks and she listens. Bai Shiwen's reasoning aroused an undercurrent of emotion. Before the truth could be spoken, it was interrupted by his collapse. Worry and surprise overshadowed everything else. It was too heavy. I couldn't turn it over twice, and I lost strength the third time. Don't care about this. If you find that the other person is just drunk and luckily not sick, then try again! The sound of the back of the head hitting the stone floor was very clear, and recalling it many times in my mind would inevitably make me feel guilty. "Your cousin has drunk too much. He's on the stone steps outside the garden. Come quickly." "Bring someone here, we won't be able to move it." End of sending. Keep guarding the drunkard. Then, putting his head on his knees, the man's body temperature spread through the dress, lingering in the smell of alcohol as if he was back to that day by the Han River. Besides that action, the most impressive thing that day was. He said: "It's quite exciting to be alive." At this stage, at least before returning to South Korea, this is true. And, is it possible? Want this state to last longer. Is it possible? Always like this. Is it possible? It's not an illusion, it's not a hallucination, it's like my heart is throbbing, Bai Shiwen, can you love me. I don't know whether pure friendship between men and women can reach this point. What you give me can never be friendship. The first meeting, the day we were filming together, taking photos on the streets of Paris, hands stretched out on the deck, standing in front of the red carpet. God, please forgive my greed. Bai Shiwen is my courage and armor. If you give him to me, don't take it off. He is like a snail and a shell to me. Please let what happened to the two of us in the past continue to appear in my life thousands of times.

First of all, congratulations to the author for opening a new book. Because I have read a few chapters in advance, I specially talked about this book with all the book friends It actually didn't take long from the initial idea to the writing of this book. The author improved the outline while coding, and did not follow the traditional operation of perfecting the outline first and then coding (because he hopes to meet everyone with the new book earlier) In terms of the overall style, the author The author has basically matured since this book, that is, he has abandoned the vacillation and hesitation of the previous book, and firmly followed the line of "telling a story well". All the characters, characterization, atmosphere creation, emotional progression, plot structure design, etc. Are all responsible for telling the story well. It is a style that strengthens the narrative logic and enhances the sense of the picture. In short, the current work The route taken by the author is to write the novel as if it were a Korean drama. Everyone has their own preferences. Personally speaking, I prefer this style, and I hope all the book lovers will like it This book has multiple female protagonists, identified as Lee Ji-eun, Sulli and Bae Zhuhyun. There is the timid and funny Bae Zhu Hyun, who is the one piece that Baek Si On cannot live without. Milan Kundera said, "Everyone is born with a missing piece in his heart." Maybe our male protagonist was born miserable, missing three pieces, and has been looking for those three pieces This story is not based on the daily emotional lines of female idols or actresses, which is more popular at the moment, but more on the realization of the male protagonist. The protagonist interacts with the heroine while pursuing her own personal pursuits, whether it is seeing each other at the peak of Li Ji-eun's ambitious response, the warm redemption with Shirley in her final years, or a gentle smile with Bae Joo-hyun's funny character when she is overwhelmed by reality. In essence, this book has a traditional writing style with a sense of picture and strong narrative logic In terms of plot design and character design, I am satisfied with this book. There are great expectations. For the male protagonist Bai Shiwen, life is not so smooth, but the pressure is so great. His father's dying instructions, his mother's often pitiful eyes, his uncle's expectations, and his cousin's dependence are all the paths that the male protagonist must take; the honor of the family and the interests of the faction are intertwined on the way forward. "How can the road you are determined to take be smooth sailing?" Life One certificate will not last forever, it will always spiral forward between breakthroughs and proofs, and the three female protagonists and auxiliary lines will be intertwined while the career line is going backwards. It can be said that this is a grand picture, and it is also a wonderful story When I read the outline and the first few chapters of this book, I was actually quite pleased and moved. In the current Korean entertainment literature, the "imaginative flow" and "female pushing flow" are very popular. At the same time, there are actually authors who are willing to take up the banner of telling a story well. Many, many people come to mind (the names of Qiqi, Grenades, and Heads appear in front of my eyes). I believe that no one likes just one genre, and the author is not fighting alone At the end, he said something "From now on, we look at each other in the blue clouds."

This book is not bad. Nowadays, Korean entertainment can be read as long as it is not a bulldozer plot. It is often the kind of ten or eight girlfriends. It is outdated!

In recent chapters, it feels like Wenqing's illness has become serious. The protagonist has only rationality and no emotion. When working, he is an expressionless robot with no emotion at all.

The progress is too fast, and I am writing songs in Europe and America, but not TV series or movies. The front is better, but the back is on the shelves and I don't have to look at it!

Can you not write about the truth about his mother? Wasn't the plot of the sports car given last time forced to change because it was about her mother? Why do you still write about her mother this time to disgust the readers? Author, do you think that the truth and kindness in this writing are different from the real and meanness in the sports car last time, so readers can accept it?

It's strange. The writing of this book is good, there is nothing poisonous, and the heroine and the plot are quite attractive. But every time I read more than ten chapters, I want to watch something else to spice things up... Be it short videos or other novels, otherwise I will feel very tired...

The writing style is okay, but I always feel that some aspects are weird. If the relationship between the protagonist's parents is not used, you might as well write that they are all dead. You are blindly confident in future songs. In fact, even the best songs can be manipulated. You know clearly the tragic experiences of several female idols and still use cold and violent child temper.

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