Peninsula: Starting with Collecting Debts from the Nation’s Little Sister

What's the point of the protagonist becoming a debt collector? Just to get to know Lee Ji-eun and have the plot unfold? It would have been better not to write it at all.

No one can refuse love when it comes. Truth knows that her heart cannot be controlled by her. The moment I was sure that the other person was looking at me, my body temperature evaporated from the inside out, and my hands seemed to be extremely hot. The truth is a little dizzy, but I can't help but chase it. That finger. "

Can you please not write about Truth's mother? Wasn't the last storyline about giving away the sports car forced to be changed because of her? Why are you including her again to disgust the readers? Do you think readers will accept this version of Truth's mother as superficially kind, unlike the realistically harsh one with the sports car?

This book is not bad. Nowadays, you can read a bit of Korean entertainment as long as it doesn't have a bulldozing plot. The kind where there are ten or eight girlfriends all the time is outdated!

First of all, congratulations to the author on the release of the new book! Having read a few chapters in advance, I'd like to share my thoughts with you all. The time from the initial idea to the start of writing this book was not long. The author improved the outline while writing, rather than following the traditional approach of improving the outline first and then writing (because he wanted…

I'm still a little disappointed now that there's less and less content I want to see. In fact, as of now, the height of the protagonist is too high, which makes it uncomfortable for you to write that the protagonist is awesome. Even if you can't find a work with a height worthy of the level, it will give people the feeling that the protagonist is so awesome and ended up like this.

The recent chapters feel like they've gotten overly sentimental. The protagonist is purely rational, lacking any emotion; at work, he's just a blank-faced robot, completely devoid of feeling.

The provisions were just dry rations; they were edible and could fill the stomach, but they were bland and tasteless, and it would be a pity to throw them away. For someone like me who's indifferent to sports and subscribed because of K-pop, the tennis anime next door that mixes K-pop with other content makes me more inclined to follow it.

This is progressing too fast! And while I was writing, I got sidetracked into writing songs for Western films and TV series, and then I stopped writing about the movies and TV shows. The beginning was alright, but now that it's all gone, there's nothing to read!

The writing style is okay, but I always feel something is off. You didn't use the relationship between the protagonist's parents, you might as well have written that they were all dead. You are blindly confident about the future songs, but in reality, even the best songs can have their rankings manipulated.