Mount & Blade: Starting My Own Knightly Order in Pendor and Becoming a Hegemon

Damn it, the recommendation failed 🥲🥲🥲. Once the new book season is over, I'll freaking update like crazy!! Damn, no matter if anyone reads it, I'll just write 500,000 words first!!! Why not make money from Yuewen? I've already signed a contract, I'll just rack up a few thousand yuan in attendance bonuses first!!! (╯°Д°)╯

The author seems to have a lot of ideas, but the writing ultimately falls short, often feeling contrived and overdone. For example, in chapter 188, the scene where the author gives the boy who delivers firewood a large handful of copper coins is problematic. While Slin is a kind person, she also manages the team's logistics.

Let's calculate the rations for 3000 off-duty soldiers for two months, plus 2000 bandits, 1000 regular soldiers, and the main character. Assuming medieval soldier rations, each soldier needs at least 3000 kcal per day. One kilogram of rye provides 3200-3400 kcal. That's one kilogram per person per day.

My Mount & Blade game features a protagonist whose true form is transported to another world, so he's not particularly strong in combat (though he becomes much stronger in the late game). The focus is more on military and conquest aspects than individualistic, invincible rampages. The cheat system, while seemingly complex, is purely supportive.

What was the author thinking? First, he stole sheep, and later he was found to be a good-for-nothing. He still shamelessly wanted to become a blacksmith's apprentice. He insisted on participating in various activities that he wasn't supposed to attend. He had no sense of rules or respect for hierarchy. He neither went to the battlefield nor did he work. He just caused trouble every day, jumping around like a monkey.

There was a lot of build-up in the beginning, especially the fishing village brawl, but it ended up being a fizzle out. I'm not saying that failure is unacceptable, but you have to make the failure useful or entertaining. At the very least, you have to have Geese take down one of them or draw and lose due to exhaustion, right? This was handled very poorly.

The plot seems to be progressing with unusual difficulty.

The village brawls in chapters 14 to 30 seem rather meaningless, and the protagonist disappearing for chapter 15 in the early stages is quite ambiguous. At first, I thought you were trying to use this to make the big, clumsy Geese a major supporting character, and then show off the protagonist's superb sword-making skills.

How much do you know about Pand's prophecies?

It's one thing for this bird to snatch a bag of candy and bring back the female knight's armor, but to give away this obviously expensive stolen item as a token of love is truly unbelievable. Aren't you afraid the original owner will come looking for you?