Cultivation: Raising Beasts to Grind My Proficiency

The novel's premise is relatively novel: spirit beasts work for the protagonist, who can lower their cultivation level in exchange for their talents. The protagonist can also use spirit stones to upgrade the spirit beasts' techniques and skills. The pacing is decent, but there are flaws.

What's most annoying is that someone who has just reached the Foundation Establishment stage doesn't focus on cultivation but instead wants to save the world; that's just too cruel.

A good book just isn't popular yet. I've already given you my monthly votes, so you need to step up your game and update more often; the daily update frequency is too low.

Friend, if you're going to write a serious cultivation novel, don't let your own daily life interfere. A prostitute suddenly appears out of nowhere, acting as both bed warmer and nanny, huh? This book is clearly influenced by "The Great Dao Contention." Why not just focus on writing your cultivation novel instead of having this extra element interfere?

Exploiting beast tamers for work doesn't quite match the master-disciple relationship; let's just change it to following or acknowledging a master.

I feel like the main character is useless; it would be much better to make Iron Head the main character. Hahaha.

Those demons are so cunning; they'll definitely tamper with the cultivation techniques they acquire. They can't just do nothing. And all those years of gaming experience seem to be getting less and less useful. The protagonist should probably deduce and verify the techniques themselves; otherwise, it feels very awkward. I have this subjective belief that anything taken from the enemy is problematic, and everything needs to be thoroughly checked.

The fantasy beast Paru has recently become very popular, and its setting is somewhat similar to this book. The author could take inspiration from it.

The abilities are too numerous, too varied, and too disorganized. Readers can't remember them, and even the author can't. Abilities that appeared early on never reappear later. You forget them if you don't read the book for a week or two. This disorganization and complexity create confusion for readers regarding the combat power, forcing them to abandon their mental effort.

Having read so many books over the years, there are almost none in the fantasy genre that can truly offer something refreshing. This book is like a white rabbit jumping out of a coal pile, a pure white lotus flower blooming amidst filth and squalor—it's incredibly rare!