Global Web: A Bard's Slacking-Off Diary

The first thirty or so chapters written by the author are quite good. The protagonist joins the Magic Network and starts cultivating immortals. He is free and easy. He improves his strength and does things he likes when he has nothing to do. However, after the protagonist comes out of the second copy, his brain goes crazy. The live broadcast is obviously just a hobby. He earns money to give an explanation to his family. He also does the first, second and third editions just like at work. The boss urges him later and he goes crazy. Is the protagonist short of money? He has already started cultivating the Magic Network. Wouldn't it be nice to improve his strength without any trouble? Wouldn't it be better to go to the Mowang Tieba and buy some skills to practice? If you have nothing to do, you still have to go to work as hard as a real beast.

It's still possible. It fits the characteristics of the bard profession. It feels like being carried by the clouds. If you can persist, you can be promoted to the food and grass in the comprehensive network. PS, at least in the new comprehensive network, your writing is the best.

There is too much modern content, who is messing with modern content on Zhejiang Net?

The theme of Genshin Impact is a bit novel but a bit unlike the traditional and authentic variety network

Overall, I feel pretty good. The Zongnet background incorporates some elements of Genshin Impact. Let me just say here that there are actually not many elements of Genshin Impact. The elements of Genshin Impact are more of an existence similar to Goldfinger, and the sense of existence is not obvious (the emphasis here is to prevent some people from getting stressed when they see Genshin Impact). Then there is the profession of bard, combined with the modern Internet. I think the idea is good, and then the first and second dungeons, "Crown of the Gods" and "Swordsman" are also well written. Then let's talk about the shortcomings here. The first is the balance between the plot of the dungeon world and the plot of the real world. For example, the plot of returning to reality after the second dungeon ends. I still feel that it is okay, but I have seen comments saying that they think that plot is too long. I can understand this. I think the plot after the end of the second dungeon does not need to be written. For example, if a plagiarized song is not popular at first, then becomes popular, gets caught in the public opinion, appears on a show, etc., Just write and publish it, and then write about it after it becomes popular, the audience's reaction, and the interpretation of the film critics. If you are an entertainment article, you can write like this, but you are not an entertainment article. Although I think it is interesting, not everyone can accept it. I think you have not balanced the two roles here. Let's talk about the conclusion. Overall, I think it's pretty good. It is not the kind of traditional sect network where you kill and kill and download dungeons to get good things, but reality and dungeons coexist, and the rhythm is slow. If you want to read the kind of killing and killing to get good things and then quickly upgrade, then you may not be suitable for this book. But if you can accept the things I said before, then you can read it.

I hope that the attributes of the protagonist can be displayed in detail before it is put on the shelves.

When will there be a serious comprehensive network?

It's quite innovative and looks pretty good.

It looks good, very novel

I haven't read many chapters yet, but there are quite a few typos.

Just passing by, I am the second one to post

Historically, bards were a special cultural group in European history, communicators of culture. They used poetry to satirize the current situation, or eulogized heroic epics among tribal groups. They were communicators of grassroots information and guides of public opinion. They were an information dissemination medium older than newspapers and the Internet. dnd5e's introduction to bards: Music and language are not just vibrations in the air, but a unique power. Bards are masters of magical singing and speech. They believe that the multiverse was "said", that the words of the gods gave shape to the multiverse itself, and that the original "Word of Creation" still echoes in the depths of the universe. The poet's music is a manipulation of this reverberation, trying to weave it into the required spell and power. I personally think this is a tribute to the creation movement of The Lord of the Rings.

It's nice to write for a while, but you don't want to read it for a while. It's relatively sudden to enter the dungeon in just a few sentences. You can write more about the dungeon selection. Generally speaking, it's okay. I'll give you food and grass.

It is very important to follow up on the new book issue. Please take a look at it. If you keep raising it, it will be difficult to put it on the shelves. 😭😭😭 I beg you all readers! Give the young author a little encouragement.

To me, the second martial arts dungeon is not as good as the first fantasy dungeon. Especially the Zhou family behind you is incomprehensible from the beginning, especially the scene at the end where a female passerby who is not even a female supporting character drinks aphrodisiacs. What does it mean?

In the first copy, I saw the novice plot of Crown of the Gods.

The quantity is large, the quantity must be large. Now if you have a large quantity, you will definitely attract a lot of people. A large quantity can automatically avoid many poisonous spots. I kept it for a week and ended up reading it in a few days.

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This is a good book for improving your career while advancing the plot. I see that many of them are about the profession itself without much description, just promoting the plot.