Who Taught Him to Practice Swordsmanship Like That?

I hope the author can write this novel longer. I really like this novel. If I write it longer, I can read it for a long time 😭😭

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I've written 11 books and I'm still at level 5. Can you do it?

My scalp explodes frequently, really bad

I went, I had a weird feeling when I read it. It turned out that it was written about the Demon Sect and Tian Zong. I lost it. It's a pity. The Demon Sect is good in the early stage, but tastes bad in the later stage. Tian Zong can't stand it in the early stage. No wonder this book is weird to read.

It's rubbish. The social logic of the novel is really confusing. Immortal cultivators are afraid of the secular dynasty. Any internal guard can seize the Qi training mirror of the second mirror of cultivating immortals. Facing the emperor, they will be suppressed in cultivation, and the demons can do whatever they want. Spreading plague on the front foot leads to the relocation of the capital. On the other hand, the dynasty colludes with the demons or is deceived by the demons. The Changchun Palace has nothing to do about it. It still retaliates because the Taoist temple of the protagonist was burned, which slightly alienated the relationship between the two. What a stupid plot.

Immortal cultivators are so cowardly towards the dynasty, they are not some awesome dynasty.

Is this a fairy tale? Did the author travel through time? Why do you feel like you're writing like a fool? Or was he assimilated by the indigenous people?

Daily guidance, leading to this

The story is interesting, but the writing is too poor, and the protagonist's training system is a mess

I don't understand why the score is so high. A cultivator is dragging his feet when facing an ordinary warrior. Why go out after practicing Qi and end the world of mortals? Go out and ruin your future.

The only thing that I can't stand is that the protagonist looks like a brat to everyone he meets. Who calls himself a brat? You can call yourself a brat in front of your elders, but you can call yourself a brat to everyone you meet? The son of a prostitute, because anyone could be his father.

Immortal cultivators are elephants, ants are ordinary people, and among the ants, the officials can do whatever they want, the emperors can do whatever they want, the enemies of the elephants can do whatever they want to the ants, and the elephants who protect the ants will hesitate and hesitate when facing the slightly powerful ants, and their strength will be suppressed hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha🤣This is the society written in the early stage of this book

I don't know why I write this, but it's very discouraging.

Looking at the setting of cultivation, it looks like a fairy tale Looking at the setting of martial arts, it feels like a martial arts story It feels uncomfortable to watch, but it can barely be regarded as a fairy tale.

I feel like the plot has gone astray and it's starting to become suspenseful.

After reading the comments, I understand. Goodbye.

Although the author is the protagonist who always has upright views, I just don't know if the problem of the plot's awkward playfulness has been corrected in this book...

In ancient times, County Lord was the title of a woman with a higher status, not an honorific title for the County Magistrate. Mingfu and Yi Zai refer to the County Magistrate. In addition, the old parents and Futai (only for flattering horses) also refer to the County Magistrate. Calling the County Magistrate County Lord is extremely insulting and worse than calling others by their names directly. It is equivalent to saying to a man, "You are a pervert and a second-rate person."

Illusion + sword + genius + handsome guy, waiting for a famous scene of "I knew it from the beginning", and the sentence "Longing is the emotion furthest from understanding". But don't imitate him, otherwise you will have to go to Wujiang to sit in the Bureau after being handsome for only three chapters🤣

The idea is okay, but the writing is terrible

You can kill indiscriminately, but you still keep getting ink

This author's writing is good, but there is one major poisonous point that is quite disgusting. The main characters are all the Great Virgins. Several of its books were abandoned because the protagonists were too holy. This is also the reason why it cannot become a great god. The protagonist is indecisive and constantly makes decisions. Quite disgusting.

After reading more than 40 chapters, it is obvious that the imperial court has become cruel and unkind. You are still playing house with the imperial court. You are the Immortal Sect Cave Mansion. Is Daliang Kingdom so important? If senior sister is captured by the Emperor of Liang Kingdom, don't you need to think about revenge? Still talking nonsense!

The plot is too bland. After reading twelve chapters, there was no conflict at all and I couldn't watch it anymore.

Is this the Madonna world? ? ?

Very white, suitable for people who don't read much

Are most of these eunuch books?

The writing style is not very good and the jokes are awkward.

The first three chapters have attracted me deeply. I think it is a good book.