A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Song Yu's Cultivation Journey
凡人之宋玉修仙传
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- Ongoing
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- 551k Words
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- Xianxia
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- Fantasy Cultivation
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- 1d ago
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264Chapters
83Monthly votes
8.2kRecommendations
7.6kFans
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No system cheat and no sucking up to Han Li
I really like these two points. I've read a lot of Mortal Cultivation fanfiction, and most of them involve system overpowered abilities or similar divine artifacts, many of which have effects similar to ripening elixirs. Also, they're either acting as Han Xin's babysitter or his sycophant, even though they already have such powerful abilities.
Why can't female-oriented novels be submitted to female-oriented platforms? Why do they have to be submitted to male-oriented platforms? It's inexplicable.
Han Li's part was a complete failure.
It made me laugh. Either don't write or don't fawn over him, or you almost succeeded in besieging Han Li, and then you failed and tried to absolve yourself of the blame. Are the three sects of Yunmeng supporting each other? Huolong offended Han Li and the Ancient Sword Sect, and he still wants to run away? No matter what, their stance is biased towards your side.
Some details
There are many details that are problematic for some people: 1. The protagonist's refusal of the free SSR isn't about insisting on being with Han Li, but rather the hasty handling of the situation. It's as if the intention to kill Han Li and steal the little green bottle is written all over his face.
There's already a book called "Mei Ning" (梅凝), and to be honest, I'm not a big fan of this type of story. It's about a male protagonist transmigrating into a female character and then transforming the original body's personality—whether it's aloof and arrogant or gentle and tender—into a tomboyish, overpowered woman. I don't want to read BL (Boys' Love) or purely feminine characters. At least make it more neutral; don't write a male protagonist who just cross-dresses. 🪖
To be honest, I always feel that the protagonist's mindset and values haven't changed yet. While it's true that he should rely on powerful figures, he doesn't have room for negotiation on certain matters. For example, the protagonist in the Core Formation stage has no right to refuse the demands of the Great Evolution Divine Lord unless it endangers his life or ruins his cultivation path.
Jade
White Phoenix Fairy
This is outrageous! Finding a woman for the Great Evolution God Lord? How am I supposed to explain this? It's too much to handle!
The Han Li section was poorly written. Fanfiction about Han Li usually involves either fawning over him, killing him, or ignoring him altogether, avoiding any interaction. The author's approach—being unable to defeat him and offending him—is baffling. Of course, I don't recommend killing Han Li.
Han Li's handling of this was a mistake; I feel it will be difficult to mend the relationship afterward.