
A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: From the Start, Lying in Wait at the Seven Mysteries Sect to Take Han Li as My Disciple
凡人:开局蹲守七玄门,收徒韩立
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- Ongoing
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- 148k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 2d ago
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- Qidian
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55Chapters
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689Recs
35Fans
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Even if you plan to accept Han Li as your apprentice, you can't follow Xuan Gu Ji Yin's tactics. Although the corporate culture is good, it can easily fall apart. For people like Han Li, you can only be like Li Huayuan. You have your own selfish motives and you have to respect the fact that he calls you master. As the saying goes (father is kind and son is filial), if the master is not kind, the apprentice must be unfilial, even if filial piety is the filial piety that "contains filial piety and nine springs".
It's actually a chain. What a rubbish magic weapon. Mortal inner mirror. Sword. Needle. Mountain. Tower. Banner. Bell. Bottle. Bow. Make. Picture magic weapons are quite powerful. You actually arranged a chain. This kind of magic weapon is usually used as an auxiliary magic weapon. My expectations were in vain😅😅
Author. Just make such a rubbish natal magic weapon. Why don't you even want the corpse mandrill of Luoyun Sect? This is the natural Nascent Soul Refining Corpse. There is also a jade in her hand that can quickly transform into a spiritual eye. The roots and stems of the Luoyun Sect's Spiritual Eye Tree are not traded either. This is prophetic. Don't take chances. I feel a little helpless to complain 🔨
Mr. Han has found a spiritual stone, please get it quickly.
Explain, explain, what you have been looking for for a hundred years can't be found, but Han Li found it as soon as he came, with his hands on your body and his brain on your head. Didn't you come up with the plot of this old slave and write it yourself? Han Li's sons and daughters should stop shouting about time Dao Ancestor Reincarnation Palace Master traveling through time and space, blah blah blah. They will only follow what others say and it will be useless. The slaves who serve as characters in the novel are so unprofessional that they have not even read the original work. It is said that the ancestor of time, ancient or modern, cannot travel through time and space, and time Han Li cannot do it even more. The one who can travel through time and space is always the bottle➕bottle spirit. Qixuanmen Han Li was able to pick up the bottle because the bottle took Time Han Li through time. Time Han Li was afraid that Qixuanmen Han Li did not see the bottle, so he kicked the bottle, but that was all that Time Han Li could do. As for Samsara Han Li, this one is even more hilarious. There are a lot of unfinished stories about mortals in the human world, and there are not many that have been completed in the spiritual world, let alone the fairy world? It's unfounded. Even if it really goes to the fairy world and confronts Han Li in reincarnation, it is simple, just report it directly to the heaven. Do you think he will die?
The protagonist is already in the middle stage of Nascent Soul, why is he still like a mouse? Can't we just ask Han Li to lure his senior brother out and kill him?
What do you think when you are in the middle stage of Nascent Soul and you are so afraid of this and that that you don't even dare to kill a single pill? What if someone uses a secret method to find out that it was the protagonist who killed him? Become an enemy of a mid-stage Nascent Soul over a pill formation? Those who were killed were not people from the three major monk sects.
What is the purpose of writing the main character so stubbornly? They are all mid-stage Yuanying monks. There are only three people in Tiannan who are higher than the protagonist. Han Li, who is so stubborn, has been arrogant for a while after forming a baby. He only started to be stubborn after being chased by the divine master. The protagonist has no Yuanying skills at all.
He was really good at licking it, so he found the Palm Heaven Bottle and left it to Han Li.
It feels like the more you write, the worse it becomes. Do you dare not touch the original plot and just want to follow along? It is simply inexplicable that a middle-stage Nascent Soul dare not touch Xuan Gu and still wants to wait for Han Li to form an elixir a hundred years later.
The writing of Han Li was too heavy-handed, and the protagonist forcibly intervened so that Han Li did not experience the things in the original work. It is impossible for him to be so heavy-hearted. What you wrote completely made Han Li suspicious and unable to speak his mind.
The author wrote the protagonist in a very low-level manner. Although his level has improved, the skills, secret techniques, magic weapons, spiritual pets, and elixirs are not specified. From our point of view, the protagonist seems to be very poor. He has to dismantle his own body to control himself. When can we clearly tell you what abilities the protagonist has now and what magic weapon you have? Let the author write down the trump card of the protagonist in your mind for our readers to see. Don't make the two parties have unequal information, sometimes it will appear that your operation is very low. He also said that he wanted to recruit Han Li as a resource-supplying disciple, but based on the impression he has left on Han Li so far, I would only believe him if he didn't rebel against you.
Not much of Nascent Soul's strength has been written, the natal magic weapon has never been used in combat, and Tiandu Lianpuppet and Tiandu Corpse Fire have not been shown.
The protagonist is extremely nervous. As the boss of Yuanying, the protagonist has personally been guarding the Qixuanmen for many years. Isn't this a pure illness? It will be revealed later that the author established a sect in Tiannan, and asked a few disciples to monitor Mo's family or inquire about how soon the Seven Sects of Yue Kingdom's Immortal Ascension Conference will be held. Wouldn't the timeline be determined? I desperately longed for Han Li's little green bottle, so I took Han Li away and trained him. However, for the sake of the original plot, the protagonist accepted Han Li as his disciple, but actually didn't teach him anything and secretly monitored Han Li for two years. In reality, he took Han Li away to teach an 11-year-old boy and trained him for two years before he returned home; Subsequently, they wanted Han Li to experience the cruelty of the world of immortality alone to gain Han Li's heart. However, he dug out his own eyes on the spot and asked Han Li to swallow them and said that he would protect Han Li. The deliberately disgusting operation caused Han Li's rebellious psychology. The protagonist is an evil cultivator and not a mental illness! The author of the comment also used Brother Huozi's world as an example. Is I Really Drunk a world or a power system? Just give me an example.
I think the author needs to make it clear whether he wants Han Li's master-disciple emotional line. If so, then Han Li must be changed so that he can no longer be afraid of the protagonist, and the protagonist must change his behavior to be too demonic. Reasonable is reasonable, but how can Han Li have a master-disciple relationship with the protagonist? If not, then just kill Han Li.
Why do everyone seem to have a grudge against Han Li?
Good guy, I've read several mortal novels, but they all seem to have a grudge against Han Li, shouting and killing each other. I really don't know how Han Li, a virtual character, can have so many enemies in reality. It's like Han Li killed his parents. I wish Han Li died on the spot. When I read the novels and animations, I didn't see any of them have such a big hatred against Han Li. It's really hard to handle.
The longevity fruit can increase your life span by 180 to 300 years at most. How is it possible to extend your life by more than five hundred years? Plus the Tianling Fruit is almost the same. Can it be more consistent with the logic of the original work? Moreover, the protagonist does not switch to practicing martial arts. If you keep practicing this incomplete Xuanyin Sutra, you will be very dull. There are Nascent Soul cultivators who can't get top-notch techniques. It's just that the more you practice the skills, the deeper you go. It takes more time to change the practice. There will still be a slight loss in cultivation. Therefore, there are very few people who turn to practice Qigong. Moreover, most of the top techniques require special physical fitness. Or consume resources. You still need to practice and understand new techniques. Come down like this. It can be as fast as thirty or forty years. It can take hundreds of years at a slower pace. The protagonist has a model worker as a tool man. Without lack of resources. Why don't you switch to practicing Kung Fu 🔨🔨
It feels like the aboriginals have taken the memory of the time travellers, seven points of the aboriginals and three points of the time travellers, and they even regard themselves as aboriginals. It doesn't feel much better to be prophetic.
Either don't offend me, or offend me from the beginning. What's the matter if you're not above or below?
The author is very clever and directly writes about the extreme dazzle after Yuanying, but Yuanying does not reflect Yuanying's strong character. Whose Nascent Soul doesn't have several elixirs under his command, building foundations like clouds, practicing Qi like rain, and planning other Nascent Souls? Being in the qi training circle day after day is too low.
It's a pity that the protagonist doesn't repair Cthulhu. The protagonist takes off his eyeballs and forces Han Li to eat them. It's so outrageous.
This is the first time I have seen Xin Ruyin become a disciple and take care of his family.
It's well written. If I don't write it anymore, I would like to be an eunuch, just so that the apprentice can use himself as a graduation test 😁. If the protagonist dies, there is no need to write it 🤭
The author starts from Nascent Soul. Why haven't I found out the protagonist's spiritual root yet? Information like magic weapons. If you lack powerful means to use as your trump card. Find ancient spiritual roots or plant-based spiritual materials and let the model workers ripen them. As long as the material value is high. Pass the weapon refining level. The refined magic weapon is indistinguishable. Like golden thunder bamboo. Yin spirit wood. Soul nourishing wood. Dragon scale fruit. The Tree of Spiritual Eyes are all known. And there must be other top spiritual roots in the world of immortality. As for the exercises. You can consider Tianjing Sanren. Or get it right in one step. Turn to the Brahma Saint True Demonic Skills. After all, the protagonists are all in trouble. It's not that it can't be done. This is a magical skill that is currently known to have no back-up. Or you can go straight to the Mahayana through dual cultivation of Dharma and body. And don't underestimate the longevity fruit. The attraction of the life-extending thing like Tianling Fruit to the Nascent Soul monster. This thing can be exchanged for many precious or even extinct things from other Yuanying monks. It's just that you have to be strong. Otherwise, someone will have other ideas🔨
It's a little bit toxic, but overall it's pretty good.
Han Li is already an immortal, and you still threaten Han Li. Han Li will reverse time and space and slap you to death. Come from the future. Shoot you to death.
Diaosi mentality, fortunately you Yuanying started, otherwise the combination of diaosi and weak people would be the same thing
Do you know what an introduction is?
I want to know how long it will take for the protagonist's eyes and little finger to recover?
{"NickName":"Apollo is Mars","UserId":473092611}Author I would like to ask, don't you think it's awkward for a mid-Nascent Soul to be physically disabled all the time? Anyway, I feel quite awkward. It's quite uncomfortable to see self-inflicted physical injuries. I want to know how long it will take for the protagonist's eyes and little finger to recover? 😅
Bengbu, author, how about I teach you how to write a book😂
The latest two chapters are too watery, go and take revenge on Chaotic Star Poster