A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Beginning with the Martial Arts of Myriad Heavens

Let me help the author screen readers: Using his grandfather's body as gold finger bait for fishing, I have a memory of being a little master of cooking. (Grandpa is very kind to the protagonist)

I don't have spiritual roots, I just don't want people to see me.

Just by reading the introduction, you can tell that this book is a sure bet.

After reading the introduction, I understood that the protagonist is extremely selfish and does not recognize his relatives.

Forget it, let me put it bluntly, you don't have the spiritual power to create your own martial arts practice, and the plot has little connection with the original work. So why are you writing a mortal fanfic? Why don't you just write your own original novel? The title of the book is just like that of a mortal. At present, after reading Chapter 30, you are still a mortal martial arts cultivator, which is not interesting. You have to say that you have reached the level of combat power comparable to that of the immortal cultivation system. You are still a mortal now. The plot is nothing like the original. It just feels dull and dull. Also, the protagonist's grandfather's body was used as bait to catch the little master of China. The memory is not stretched. I recommend that the national comic be added to the animation of the childhood, otherwise I am afraid that you will not die quickly enough.

The divine author created his own martial arts in the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. That's a shitty fanfic

The author violated all the taboos in writing novels 😂 He attacked the corpse of the grandfather who brought him up, abandoned his wife and children, and suffered injustice and became a son of a bitch, with murderous intentions at every turn. The protagonist's image of being weak, lacking in responsibility, lack of courage, and coward is vividly portrayed,

It took ten years for the protagonist to discover that using the system requires the corpse of a monk or the flesh and blood of a monster. What was caught after the fishing was not an object but a person's lifetime memory. The system did not have any protection measures, so the protagonist almost couldn't tell whether he was a boy or a girl. Then the martial arts in different worlds can be used universally without being exclusive. Also, the energy level gap cannot be settled casually, otherwise the martial arts and immortality in the mortal world would not be so different. Just like the protagonist, just modifying the skills can break through the innate birth consciousness. Each world also has differences in energy circulation such as internal energy and true energy. It is impossible for human beings in every world to have the same acupuncture points and meridians, unless the system can force the protagonist to master all martial arts skills in the world. Or catch a skill that is compatible with all the skills in the world. It is understandable that the author wants to write a story about mortals cultivating immortality, but it is outrageous to force the protagonist to use the system with restrictions. According to this progress, the protagonist will go completely crazy in at most two more times, and maybe even suffer from schizophrenia. A Sea Tiger Martial God personality split directly out: Power, TMD, I command you, come out, the magnetic field rotates half a million times! ! ! ! ! 🙂🙂🙂

The protagonist discovered the use of Golden Finger for the first time. He did not use monsters or the corpses of other immortal cultivators, but directly made "dearest grandpa" into fish bait as the first pot of gold. He was also drunk.

Martial arts, Tongxuan, fighting ability is no worse than cultivating immortals, Shouyuan has lived for more than two thousand years with just a Sacred Heart Art Phoenix Blood. What spiritual root do you need? I just want to understand the wantonness of the angle The core of this book is the collision between high martial arts and cultivating immortals between systems What spiritual root is written later? Pure bullshit Completely gone astray🙂