Starting with the Creation of a Superhuman Civilization

2023*1*4 The author updated 22 chapters, and after reading them, I'd like to write some reflections. The beginning was very realistic, with the mysterious fog monsters, ordinary people afraid to go out, no gas, no electricity, no water, and people catching rainwater and eating raw rice—it really captured the essence of survival.

Your book is bad because it prioritizes Earth and humanity too much. Creating a different planet wouldn't help; all beings are equal, except for the protagonist.

He can't distinguish between primary and secondary issues. The crisis in the real world hasn't even passed yet, but he's still focused on the world of ants. If a powerful monster were to appear in the real world, the protagonist would be dead!

One update a day is really too slow. The author's ideas and concepts are quite good. If the author can maintain this quality, increasing the update frequency shouldn't be a big problem in terms of cost and resources.

The beginning was fine, but it got a bit boring after the ants started appearing. They were given too much screen time, making the main character feel completely insignificant and ultimately quite dull.

Reborn as a master at playing with ants.

Can the author see this? These creation myths always have a major problem: the relationship between time and space. For example, consider your concept of time. Even if their thinking were accelerated dozens of times, a gliding being would only have a lifespan equivalent to a month. Your time scale is equivalent to decades, at least a dozen years, like each day equaling a year.

The ant analogy is a classic example, a classic blunder. Everyone knows it's illogical now, yet you still wrote it.

Actually, I think a large part of the reason your book is so bad is because it contains too much self-talk, always using "uh" and "uh," but you can't seem to change it; you've written too much.

Can we please stop linking the world to Earth all the time, and stop being so sanctimonious?