Starting with the Creation of a Superhuman Civilization

2023*1*4 The author updated Chapter 22. Let me write some thoughts after reading it. The beginning is very realistic. The mysterious fog monster. Ordinary people dare not go out without gas, electricity or water. Catching rainwater and eating raw rice alive has the feeling of survival. The author describes the meridians and consciousness of the human body well. The author gave it to the vitality of consciousness. The idea is very good. The consciousness energy invades the body of the ant to obtain the information (including genes, etc.) Of the consciousness meridians of the ant's body. The writing is very touching. This book made me very (obsessed) with reading it. It is not like some books that I don't feel immediately after reading the beginning. The content is hollow and uncreative. The writing style is written in a flowing style and I can think of the ending after reading the beginning.

The reason your book is not good is because humans on Earth have too high a priority. It's useless for you to create a blue star. Do you understand that all living beings are equal, except for the protagonist?

Regardless of priority, the crisis in the real world has not been over yet, but it has been focused on the world of ants. If a stronger monster comes in the real world, the protagonist will be K0!

One update a day is really too slow. The author's imagination is okay. If the author maintains this quality, there shouldn't be much of a problem in increasing the amount of updates and the cost.

It was pretty good at the beginning, but it became a bit boring once I got to know the ants. The length given was too long, which resulted in the protagonist having no sense of existence at all, and it became quite boring.

In my rebirth, I am very good at playing ants.

Can the author see it? There is always a big problem in this kind of creation literature, time and space For example, your concept of time, even if their thinking is accelerated dozens of times, is equivalent to a month's lifespan while floating. Your time scale is equivalent to decades, at least more than ten years, which is equivalent to day by day, as if every 24 seconds passes, it is 24 hours a day. You have to understand that this is one second under normal thinking, even if it is an insect's thinking, but it cannot be used as an hour. This is not accelerated thinking I checked the normal size of the floating space. Even if it is one centimeter to two centimeters long, the actual longest one is 27 millimeters. So according to their concept, one centimeter is equal to one meter. The size of your living room is at most ten meters long and wide, which is equivalent to one kilometer. A so-called ten-meter-long flower is actually only about 20 centimeters at most, which is just tens of meters high. Even if it is 100 square meters, that is 1 million square meters, each square can hold 25 people. Since it can already stand, its length is not counted. That means the entire living room is filled with floating humans, which is estimated to be only tens of millions. But if you send out an army, it will cost tens of millions. Serious problems have been discovered before with ants. The concepts of time and space are becoming more and more serious. If you say that you can reduce their size by 100 times, it will be different.

The one about Ant is too classic, a classic failure. Now everyone knows that this is unreasonable, but you still write

Actually, I think a large part of the reason why your book is so bad is because you talk to yourself too much. You always say um, uh, but you can't change it. You write too much.

Can the world not always be related to the earth, and stop messing with the Holy Mother?