Transcending from the Start: I Created the Abyss and the Netherworld

I have read a novel before. After hundreds of chapters, the protagonist becomes invincible, and then transcends into the real world, kills the author, and seizes the author's body. Then, based on the source of his own transcendence, the fiction becomes true little by little

I don't know what the author was thinking, but he gave the protagonist such a big hook and overpowered the protagonist's strength. The protagonist also wanders around to make himself unhappy. I really can't figure it out. Or we should be more decisive. Since all the traps are open, we should just write a cool or semi-happy story, and then make the protagonist a little darker. Or don't make such a big fuss and overwhelm the powerful person, and then write the protagonist as a virgin, for example, use the rules to protect everyone concretely. It seems like you want to do whatever you want, but in the end you are not pleasing either side. People who like to read cool novels can't accept that you suppressed your strength and was trampled on by others to insult others. You are also not decisive at all in doing things, and you are nagging. Since you have offended yourself, you should use a better writing style to write how the protagonist killed them. Also, make the protagonist a bit ruthless and dark, so that it fits the underworld and the abyss. So what did you write? You suppressed your strength and let the protagonist go out for a wander. You were trampled and said that it was impossible for you to escape. But in the end, others who were much stronger than the protagonist still let you run away. Not decisive at all. I don't know what the author thinks

I read the author's last book and then read the current one. Talk about the pros and cons of your personal understanding. The advantage is that the author's imagination is as big as ever and the logic is tight. But the shortcomings are the same as before, which can be summed up in three words: too wordy. It cannot be said to be hydrology. Hydrology is just water injection. If it is too wordy, it will not look very good. In fact, the author does not need to explain the various current situations of the protagonist in three natural paragraphs. This is too long-winded. Modern people rarely want to look at these explanations carefully. They can just say that they are not strong enough, their level is too low, they don't have enough time, etc. It is true that some people are willing to read a logical and rigorous explanation, but the author's three-paragraph explanation is actually too talkative and not refined enough. Sometimes there are too many repetitive words.

Personally, I feel that the efficiency of things like the underworld is somewhat low. When you send a person to a hospital, you have to give it soup. It is better to inject it directly and be careful that it doesn't drink it. The ghost is reincarnated by turning water into a dragon. Merits and lifetime career achievements are scored. As currency, choose which fetus you want to be reincarnated into.

These two people are also bold and want to find out the details of the Netherworld. Although the protagonist is not as powerful as the legend, but since he wants to become like the legend, there are still some taboos.

There are three big hooks at the beginning, one is the transcendent origin of a transcendent strong man born from illusion, and two is the origin of time and space reincarnation. As a result, it cannot even strengthen the soul of an ordinary person. Not only does the soul not grow stronger, it almost destroys the strengthening of the soul of this ordinary person. I stopped reading after that. After reading this, I know that the author's writing is not very good, Let me re-write an outline for the author using this idea, Starting time and space. The power of the source of reincarnation has been integrated with the protagonist's soul. After the protagonist awakens, the memory of the previous two lives returns, the protagonist will become quite calm, and then the protagonist borrows the power of these two sources to control the transcendent origin, integrate it into the soul, and then use the soul origin The power of the protagonist, as well as the powerful thinking that transcends the heavens, create an artificial intelligence, use a little of his own soul to fuse the artificial intelligence, the protagonist completely controls the online world, and then opens up a virtual world game on the Internet, because the protagonist's soul merges with the origin of the transcendent person in the illusory world, the game developed by the protagonist can absorb all living beings because of their passion for games. Love and the energy generated by the soul fluctuations when playing games are integrated into the online world with the power of illusory transcendence. Slowly, the entire online world will become an existence similar to the Kingdom of God. The soul of the protagonist has been integrated with artificial intelligence. It can be said that the artificial intelligence is the clone of the protagonist. The artificial intelligence has mastered the online world, which is equivalent to the protagonist being the way of heaven in this online world. Because the protagonist's soul is of high quality, he can use people who play games in reality as a medium to absorb the extraordinary characteristics of the real world. Then these extraordinary characteristics can be divided into 30/70, or even a few, with the people playing the game, and rewards are given to them according to their game levels. These extraordinary characteristics can be used to strengthen their souls and bodies, so that people in the real world can resist those strange things and can easily control those strange things. , In this way, the protagonist can use people in the whole world to practice, Other derivative plots can be written at will, When the game is launched, it will directly control the entire network and tell the entire network that playing games can strengthen the body and soul. The game announcements and promotional videos will directly dominate the screen for a month. Don't tell me that you are afraid of the official. The protagonist integrates artificial intelligence and can run around on the global network. Forget it, typing is very annoying.

I found that several of the author's books basically start from the aspect of soul and mind, and gradually extend to the body, reality, and later the universe, which is a bit homogeneous. However, each book has a different way of developing imagination, which can be regarded as a great expansion of imagination. I just don't know if the author has conceived ideas that purely cultivate the soul. For example, the will distorts reality, the mind controls the rules, the soul's will runs the universe, and the unparalleled power crushes the enemy... However, the whole book may be too single, and it can only follow the high-burning literary flow or the scientific research flow.

The author is not good enough, the plot is not good, the writing is poor (verbose), the imagination is not big, and the layout is small. The behind-the-scenes story just wrote about thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi, and it doesn't have the temperament of a big boss behind the scenes.

When you go behind the scenes, don't always do it yourself. If you can hide behind the scenes and kill the enemy, don't hang around in front of people (although the protagonist hides his face in front of people, but when reading, you don't have the secret feeling of hiding behind the scenes to solve the problem). Don't show off in front of people and deliberately arrange the protagonist's arrogant plot. For example, if you can kill him all at once, you have to test the enemy's power to see what tricks the enemy has, or when the BB fights back and forcibly saves people.

The opening feels very high-end! I saw a few pictures! That's it! Abandon the book decisively