Spiritual Qi Revival: I Become a Dao Ancestor in a Low-Martial World

The best in the world, he can dominate the world, but he still has to worry about food 😥, and he has to hunt by himself, so awesome.

This realm is a bit confusing. There are also local realms such as literary and martial arts. I can't remember it. Why don't the author write a single chapter or comment to explain which realm corresponds to which realm?

When I read the Golden Elixir of Martial Arts, I didn't see any description of lifespan. The main character is still clinging to time, and there is no perspective from the perspective of an immortal. With his realm soaring, I'm afraid he will become a Taoist ancestor in a few years. What's more, the martial arts is even more ridiculous. An ordinary person who is born casually is inferior to a pig or dog with Qi, blood, and martial arts.

I only read more than ten chapters, which is very long and smelly.

First, ancient Chinese days do not need numbers to express, such as the day of the first month or the tenth day of the first month. This is a modernized way of saying it. The correct name is the day of the first month or the tenth day of the first lunar month. Second, the ancient units of length were not meters, centimeters, and decimeters, but feet, and there was no term for kilometers, only mileage units such as miles. Third, the unit of time in ancient times was not hours and minutes, but hours. If you communicate with a modern person, and he talks a lot about classical Chinese, don't you feel that he is out of tune with the people around you?

The next almost 300 chapters have nothing to do with the protagonist. They are all about the natives trying their best and pretending to be cool. It's too watery.

Don't you read what you wrote? How many days can the old man in your low martial arts village practice spiritual energy entering his body?

It's too watery. After 300 chapters, I won't write about the protagonist. I'll just write about how hard the natives work and how they pretend to be cool. It's almost 100 chapters away. Without the protagonist, there's nothing wrong. If the author doesn't have anything good to write, just end it as soon as possible. Just write an ending.

It seemed fine at first, but when I first started practicing, I had to write almost half of each chapter to emphasize the setting. It was really tiring to read, so I gave up! The story is also relatively bland and not very exciting, alas!

Can you, the author, stop writing so many words during the fight? It looks very, very, very stupid. How much time does one sentence take and how long does one action take? Everyone died before he finished speaking.