Eerie Revival: I Build a World with the Eerie

Having read dozens of chapters, I can say that the setting and plot are not bad. It's quite different from the usual supernatural stories and is relatively original. However, the setting is too verbose, with too much dialogue, and much of it is repetitive. This is the author's biggest problem; the language is not concise and refined enough.

He wants to create his own power base, his own app, a black market for trading items, where he can post tasks and ask others for help with anything he needs. He does everything himself, without any semblance of a powerful figure.

Here are my thoughts after reading: The author's writing style is good, indicating practice, but the protagonist's personality is lacking. It would have been better if the protagonist had a bit more maturity and wasn't so childish. Right after gaining his abilities, the protagonist was already thinking about taking on freelance work.

The writing is poor, the language is verbose, and the author lacks storytelling ability.

I couldn't keep watching after that streamer entered the bizarre space. I forced myself to read a few dozen chapters, but I just couldn't take it anymore. The earlier parts about showing off in real life were alright, but then suddenly they started writing about bizarre space transformations and creating some kind of Heavenly Dao or Great Dao, throwing out a bunch of settings in a dozen or so…

Some readers found the beginning uninteresting because the setup was too complicated. This is like putting something in when there isn't enough water, resulting in a very dry and sluggish consistency. This is actually the author's fault; they didn't know that moistening is necessary before a smooth and silky finish can be achieved. In terms of content, it's actually quite exciting.

First-rate concept, second-rate plot, third-rate writing. The author's writing is so poor that it doesn't do justice to such a good subject matter. 🙂

The author is still terrible. The main character only appears in the first dozen or so chapters, which is destined to kill off 90% of the readers! I thought there would be some behind-the-scenes content or something, but no characters have appeared in over ten chapters. What's the point of reading this?!

Everything else is tolerable, but he's too long-winded, repeating the same sentence over and over again.

Well, the beginning was pretty good, but the further I went, the less I understood it. It became just a rambling, disjointed account, and they were desperately trying to suppress combat power.