I Wield Power Through My Talents and Forge a Heavenly Court

It's all nonsense, repeating the same things over and over again. It's so annoying and ruins the viewing experience. If you're going to talk about the setting, just talk about the setting. Can't you be more concise? Something that could be explained in three sentences, taking the latest chapter I've read as an example.

This is truly outrageous. They've decided to pursue a supernatural path, and you're training soldiers for me, calling them soldiers of the common people, soldiers of the people? This is the Ming Dynasty! They don't even have basic ideological guidelines or a sense of awakening. They're applying modern ideas and theories to ancient times.

Don't limit yourself to the framework of the 108 Heavenly and Earthly Stars. After all, the Heavenly and Earthly Stars are ancient people's fantasies and have limitations. For example, many of the supernatural powers in the Heavenly Stars are related to mountains or seas. Many modern ideas are far more imaginative than the Heavenly and Earthly Stars.

To be honest, the subject matter is good, and the author has a lot of ideas, but in a feudal society, you're telling your soldiers that everyone is equal, soldiers of the people... Soldiers of the common people... People who were starving and rebelling with you one moment, and the next moment you're telling them to die for strangers... Shouting lofty slogans...

Author, please stop with this plot where others can actually cultivate, while the protagonist, this person who defies fate, remains at the very bottom! You should have the protagonist truly become a god, so that no one in the world can cultivate anything real!

Five out of ten chapters are spent explaining the premise, which is really unnecessary. Keep it concise; there's no need to be so explicit. The protagonist's premise is probably to conquer the mortal realm and establish a heavenly court, but to explain this premise, he's spent dozens of chapters as a bandit. Why bother? The protagonist is also incredibly honest, to the point of being naive.

It's a perfectly good fantasy world, but the supernatural power system has to include guns and cannons. It's so annoying that I can't even watch the part with guns. Either keep writing the fantasy world from beginning to end, or why does it have to include a modern element?

Author, I think your setting shouldn't always be limited to supernatural powers. You could refer to dragon energy, and other cultivators, like those in the classic Yi Ding story. In that world, their cultivation definitely involves absorbing the energy of their subordinates. The protagonist could also develop some military commands, such as "rushing," "invigorating," and "ready to die."

It's a pity about the subject matter; most of the chapter is just explanations of how supernatural powers are formed and used. After all that explanation, the content is at best dry grass—tasteless, yet too good to throw away.

Come on, the more you explain, the more confusing it gets, the more you try to cover it up. Everything you've said is from later on, but you didn't control it well. That's why the problem arose earlier: the protagonist is the source, yet you can't control others—a fatal flaw.