I Wield Power Through My Talents and Forge a Heavenly Court

It's all nonsense, Che Zhuluan said back and forth, it really affects the perception. If you talk about settings, just talk about settings. Can't it be more streamlined? What can be said in three sentences, take the latest chapter I have seen so far as an example. The previous paragraph "Stronger power is needed to press the national destiny into the ball of light" The next paragraph "This will lead to the stronger and stronger power needed to condense the national destiny" This kind of wheel talk appeared more than once or twice, and it appeared in a large space. I really couldn't stand it anymore. I glanced at the title and went to the next chapter. I don't care about the few dollars I spent on the subscription, but it's really unacceptable to spend money and be disgusted.

It's really outrageous. We are determined to go in an extraordinary direction. You train soldiers for me, saying that they are soldiers of the common people and soldiers of the people. This is the Ming Dynasty. They don't even have a basic ideological program or awakening of consciousness. They use modern ideological theories in ancient times

Don't limit yourself to the framework of Tiangang Disha and 108 magical powers. After all, Tiangang Disha is the fantasy of ancient people and has limitations. For example, many magical powers in Tiangang are either from the mountains or the sea. Many modern imaginations are much stronger than Tiangang Disha.

To be honest, the subject matter is okay, and the author is very thoughtful, but in a feudal society, you are telling your soldiers that everyone is equal, that everyone is a soldier of the people... Soldiers of the common people... The people who rebelled with you because they were still hungry at one moment are told to die for people they don't know... You are shouting lofty slogans... You have not yet unified the whole world. The next one is within the scope of your rule... Promote that everyone is equal and can live and work in peace and contentment... Who is willing to risk their lives to fight with you (don't talk about modern times, it's different), and the aristocracy will not want their own interests to be harmed... Since everyone is equal, how should you, a powerful person and a god considered by the world, deal with it? Now that we are all equal, if you build the Heavenly Palace in the future, can ordinary people travel to the Heavenly Palace when they have free time, visit the Lingxiao Palace, Tushita Palace, etc. I also want to sit on the throne in the Lingxiao Palace 🤓... It's really fun... I think I feel excited just thinking about it... I want to live longer... Go get the book of life and death and change it. I don't want to die after living. You can live for so long, I also want to live longer, okay? Jade Emperor, didn't you say that everyone is equal? Have you forgotten what you said at the beginning?

Author, please don't engage in a plot like this where other people can really practice cultivation, and the protagonist, the person who defies heaven and changes his destiny, is still at the bottom! You should make the protagonist truly become a god, only then can someone in the world be able to cultivate something real! You come up with such a random thing, which does not have much blessing on the protagonist's ability. The fake method written by other fantasists has come true. This shows that the setting is spiritual recovery, which is fundamentally opposed to the ordinary world you originally mentioned. Since it is the protagonist who raises the upper limit of the world, it should be the protagonist who has gained the most fortune. The way you write this chapter just makes the protagonist retro and revives spirituality again. Think about it!

Five of the ten chapters are about explaining the setting. It's really unnecessary. Let's be concise. There's no need to explain it so clearly. The protagonist's setting is probably to push the human world to establish heaven. In the end, in order to explain the setting, he insisted on becoming a bandit for dozens of chapters. Why bother? The protagonist is also honest and stupid when it comes to people. In ancient times, he even lied when he was a leader. If not, then don't be a fool. All those emperors claimed that they were gods descended to earth, and many of those who revolted were doing so in the name of gods descending to earth. Zhang Jiao could make up any magical power he wanted to gain momentum. The protagonist actually had supernatural powers, but he was still a bandit. A time traveler with plug-ins, he couldn't compare to the ancients. When will the protagonist become the emperor of heaven like this?

In a good fantasy world, the supernatural power system has to involve guns and artillery. It's so damn hard to persuade me to quit. I can't stand the one about guns anymore. Or I'll keep writing fantasy to the end. Why do I have to modernize it?

Author, I think your settings here should not always be limited to supernatural powers. You can refer to dragon qi. Other practitioners can refer to the most classic cultivators in Yi Ding. With this world view, their cultivation must rely on luck to absorb the training of their subordinates. The protagonist can also think about some marching laws, such as marching quickly, cheering up, and seeing death as if he is home. Later, he will luck in the dynasty, step by step to legalize the rule of heaven, the emperor's dragon qi, etc., There is no need to think about magical powers to strengthen himself and so on. , This view of the world that the dragon energy is invincible to all methods is no joke. The main thing is to gather people to nourish the energy, consume the dragon energy to activate laws, and in the later stage promote the harvest, and other practitioners, use a hammer to speak the law and wipe out all the cultivation of the opponent with one sentence. , Now the protagonist can also build a military flag and add faith, and create this kind of luck magic weapon, which will make him unparalleled in conquering the world. The protagonist is still the pioneer of this system, but if you fight with other latecomers who have thought about their own cultivation, you will lose.

What a pity about the subject matter. Most of the chapter contains instructions for the formation and use of magical powers. I have to explain them over and over again. The level is at best like hay. It is tasteless to eat and it is a pity to discard it.

Come on, the more you explain, the more confused you become, and the more you explain, the more you cover up. Everything you said is later, however. You didn't control it well. So it has appeared before. The protagonist is obviously the source, but he cannot control others. In this fast-paced era, no one has the patience to wait for you to get two or three hundred pictures before you can get that kind of real qualitative difference. Who is in the mood to just paint a big cake? Don't you think everyone is eating enough of the pie in reality? If you keep thinking like this and continue writing your book, you'd better wait to be thrown into the street. There is nothing wrong with sticking to an outline. But because you stick to the outline, you don't listen to the readers at all, and most of the people in the book still don't approve of your book, so you should just wait and pounce.