1980: Starting with Enlisting in the Army

Let me talk about the biggest problem of this book. Many people may not agree with me, but the protagonist is indeed a selfish person, and the starting point of doing everything is for himself. Although everyone is not for himself, God will destroy him, but everything is like this, and it does look uncomfortable. As a veteran, a party member, and a civil servant, so far, in addition to making money and resources for himself, he has also driven the economy of his village, using the privileges within the rules. I have not seen anything else done. With such achievements, it can be said that living a life is to allow yourself to live a well-off life in advance, and it is of little use to society and the country. When it comes to this, you will find that the protagonist's outlook on life and values ​​are problematic. While using privileges to squeeze the wool of the country, he wants to retreat to a corner and not assume the responsibility for regional economic development. I am very disgusted with this. Maybe the author thinks that society is like this, and I am too pretentious, but is this right?

Then he was discharged after serving as a soldier for one year. It turned out that he came to the army to cheat and make meritorious service so that he could find a job when he returned. He kept saying that this would not work and that would not work. You are 20 years old now, not 60 years old. Don't make excuses for yourself. You don't even dare to study. Then what's the point of being reborn? It would be great to continue farming. If you don't want to change, it's fine. If you don't want to change, don't change it. Opportunistic

There are less than 10 chapters out of the first 50 chapters on the military. I just talk about signing up to join the army. Then I skipped the military training and wrote a chapter about shooting, a chapter about other training, then a chapter about joining the army, a chapter about a gathering of comrades, and then 2-3 chapters about fighting floods and rescuing. Then I changed my career. Please author, please remove the military label in your introduction and change the title of the book. It is pure fraud...

The biggest flaw of this book is that the main character served as a soldier for only one year and then retired due to meritorious service and injury. It was too utilitarian and hurt many readers' military feelings. It would be easier if you arranged it in the third year. How deep is the comradeship established in one year? The protagonist is in the army, and after making meritorious service, he can fully use the insights of later generations to contribute to the construction of the army. He can also be worthy of rebirth and join the military career, and at the same time expand his network of contacts. Now? It was written that I changed my job just for the sake of a small family, and the situation was too small. With the knowledge of later generations, it is really easy to make money after the change.

You can't read this book. The author has ideological problems. He joined the army through the back door. He got second-class merit within a year and became a deserter. What do you think of the army?

Thirty or forty people were prepared to enter the army. Use those three or four pictures to describe a few months of life in the army, and then retire directly with meritorious service. The protagonist you wrote is only 20 years old, and he is still a rebirth. He has only been a soldier for a few months and he is still in 1981, and he is in a hurry to retire. Are you in a hurry to retire early and die early? Then what kind of military label do you wear?

The pace is a bit slow, but the taste is right. Old bookworms will probably like it. But to be honest, many newcomers may not have the patience in the early stage.

I can't stand the second one. You have to be in junior high school or high school to be drafted. What the hell are you writing about? It's better if you write about elementary school and junior high school.

It can be cut. There is no need to write a follow-up. It is extremely utilitarian. The protagonist should go back to his wife and give birth to a baby as soon as possible and repeat the old life. A second-class martial artist cannot go far, and a disabled soldier can be raised for a lifetime. What ability can you, the protagonist, cheat food and cheat merit? Where did the floods in 1980 wash away the steel bars in the things? Since I can break out of the steel bars, why don't I give you a penetrating injury? Damn it, 40 minutes is definitely an amputation, the flood is so dirty.

I gave up after reading about 50 chapters, and regarded being a soldier as an act of speculation, and it became an act of opportunism. The key is that I am still a reborn person, which is really a bit embarrassing.