Fishing and Hunting for Survival in a New World

Is there any mystical element involved? Even a faint one would be helpful. Otherwise, how many days could an ordinary person survive in a primeval forest? Relying on hunting and gathering, it seems unlikely they could last a year. Look at Ed Stafford's desert island adventure; if it weren't for the emergency call for help, he would have really died on that island.

Please do not write about superpowers or anything like that.

It feels somewhat perfunctory. Many plot points are glossed over with almost no detail, and some stories are even omitted whenever possible. This is a survival novel, not a cultivation novel; many plot points cannot be glossed over. The plot feels weak after reaching the gathering point; the previous cautiousness and suspense are gone, and even the story's coherence has deteriorated. Keep up the good work; finding a book you enjoy is not easy.

The entire rhythm and focus of the content changed starting from the settlement. The title of your book is Survival I came to see you trying to survive. Watch as you fight against heaven, against earth, and against beasts. It's not about watching you play palace intrigue, internal strife, and backstabbing. Why don't you just go and try to survive with your name? Otherwise, what are you trying to survive for? Surviving in a primitive clan society?

You're from another time! But there's not a single element of mystery! How can anyone relate to it? If you just gave the protagonist a skill level panel, using the three elements of spirit, energy, and vitality, with skills evolving into crafts, and crafts culminating in a profession, allowing him to transcend from scratch! At the current pace, it would be a hit, or at least a niche success!

It's very well written, I've recommended it repeatedly in the group, it's strange that it's so quiet.

At the very least, you should write about the characters, the location, and the background of the story. For example, what kind of world setting is it set for farming? Feudal world, medieval world, modern world, outer space, primitive world, fantasy, etc. At least give some background elements; just writing "farming and hunting tribe" is too vague. I don't even want to click on it.

The author has done a good job. Write well, make sure it has a beginning and an end. Consider this 1 million+ word count as practice; you'll definitely do better in the next one once you've mastered the techniques.

Having read so many books over the years, I rarely speak. I'm unsure about the quality of my writing. However, I enjoy reading. So, I have a few suggestions: First, I suggest adding a highly specialized but flawed character. For example, someone proficient in biochemistry, metallurgy, or construction. However, this character should have a physical disability, such as paralysis.

I don't know where this seasoned author came from, pretending to be a newcomer; the writing is absolutely amazing.