The Tale-Tale Trainer

Standard Japanese light novel writing style. Unfortunately, it's not suitable for Qidian.com. It starts with a plot-driven death, creating a grand, sophisticated spark. Then, the protagonist is completely helpless, as weak as a little dog. There's hardly any satisfying moment.

I don't really like the occasional strange tale inserted; the insertions feel too abrupt, and my first reaction is always confusion—"What the heck?"—It disrupts the narrative rhythm. It could be used as a side story.

The various mystical settings are very detailed, showing that the author put a lot of thought into it. However, the beginning portrays the fish as having a very high social status, including the title of "King of Ghost Stories" in the synopsis. But then you see the protagonist is a weakling in the first hundred chapters, constantly on the defensive when facing ghost stories.

There's just too much dialogue throughout the chapters, it's really affecting the reading experience. Try introducing new concepts or advancing the plot in a different way.

There really was a blood moon today, April 2nd!

That's unreasonable. How can someone who absorbed five hundred years of a fish's spirit still be so weak?

Is this for real? 🙂🙂 You actually made a prediction, huh? 🙂🙂 Let's see if it gets abandoned first.

I remember someone wrote about the idea of ​​a ghost trainer before.

Yes, the work is very youthful, but isn't the official rule that minors can't date? The protagonist is still a high school sophomore, whereas many novels have changed high school to university.

The idea is good, the writing style is light novel-like, the NPCs are a bit strange, the plot progression has some flaws, but the system is decent.