The Tale-Tale Trainer

Standard Japanese light novel writing method. Unfortunately, not suitable for starting point. The plot kill at the beginning made a great spark. Then I can't do anything and become so weak🐶. Nothing cool

I don't really like to insert a weird story from time to time. It's too stiff and my first reaction is always inexplicable. What the hell? , Interrupting the narrative rhythm. Can be used as a sideshow

The various occult settings are very detailed, and it can be seen that the author has really put a lot of thought into it. However, the fish is created in a very high style at the beginning, including the king of ghost stories in the introduction. As a result, it turns out that the protagonist is a weakling in the first hundred chapters, and he is very passive when facing ghost stories several times. This will obviously leave readers with a psychological gap. Coupled with the dense settings in the plot, the overall story lacks excitement and is a bit depressing. In addition, I really want to complain about something. Every time when encountering danger, the protagonist has to quarrel with the fish house style. If the protagonist is a junior high school student, it would be acceptable. But after all, a sophomore in high school, is it so naive? The protagonist can see the death/disappearance of his younger sister and classmate without any psychological fluctuations. He is calm or cold-blooded and is not like a student. It feels very contradictory.

There is too much dialogue throughout the chapter, which really affects reading. Let's change the setting or advance the plot in another way.

There is really a blood moon today, April 2

It's unreasonable. After five hundred years of absorbing the soul of a fish, why are you still so good

It's true and false 🙂🙂 It's actually a mouthful of milk, right? 🙂🙂 Let's keep it for now and see if the eunuch can do it first

I remember someone once wrote about the idea of ​​a ghost trainer.

Well, the work is very youthful, but doesn't the official rule stipulate that minors cannot fall in love? The protagonist is still a sophomore in high school. In many previous novels, high school has been changed to college.

The idea is good, the writing is light novel, the NPCs are weird, the plot progression is a bit flawed, and the system is okay