Reborn in 1980: The Northern Frontier Hunting Grounds

Also see the armored pig, 56 semi-thin steel plate can be penetrated. No matter what kind of armor your wild boar has, the gun can't penetrate it. Would you like to use this pig skin to make a body armor?

This is my first book. I have read online articles for almost 20 years. The first time I came across online articles was when I was in junior high school. At that time, I was completely shocked. This year I had a sudden idea to write a book. I just got in touch with Writer Assistant and joined the group. I heard various seniors say that signing a contract is the first big hurdle for novice authors, and the signing rate was less than 5%. I was confused at the time. It turns out that online writing is so difficult! So I tried to write an opening and submitted it to the editor, but it was rejected directly. But the good news is that the template was rejected, which proved that I still have hope. Hahaha! This is the beginning of the second edition, which is a different story from the first edition. I pitched this beginning to Qinghu Da Da, and Qing Hu Da Da asked me to send it straight, saying that the word count was enough to get me. I asked in the group and they said that Qinghu Da Da liked to fish for people like this, but based on the data, so I gritted my teeth and decided not to do it behind closed doors and started posting. Sure enough, Qing Hu Da Da Da Da Qing Hu fished me out on the fifth day. I was very happy at the time, hahaha😁That was my expression that day😁 2023 Phoenix City was the first person to recommend me a ticket, and the first person to give me a monthly ticket YangF, the first person who gave me seven recommendation votes at once. There are many, many friends who have given me support. Thank you. If you have any opinions, please mention them. I will change them as soon as I see them. Thank you all for your support! Thank you all!

It's really well written! Very contemporary! The details and plot are also very good! Read it in one sitting. But the holes were initially left 😴. It is difficult to be the core of what you do when you are too young. In the past, 14-15 year olds were considered semi-adults but not yet adults. Lack of height, strength and endurance. The peak physical endurance for men should be around 25-33. 18 Is basically grown. 14 Is still in the breakthrough stage. I used to use it as a young apprentice. It is difficult to connect with adults on an equal footing.

The plot is interesting, the writing is very immersive, the fireworks in the world, and the feeling of home

I would like to make a small suggestion. Divide a large paragraph of text into multiple small paragraphs. For example, in Chapter 7, the text paragraphs of 1-2 lines add up to 25 paragraphs, the text paragraphs of more than 3 lines have 22 paragraphs, and the longest paragraph has 14 lines (I read it on a computer webpage, and there should be more if I read it on a mobile phone). Small paragraphs of text look more concise and comfortable, and can improve the reading experience. ps: Because I haven't finished reading it yet, I'm not sure about the plot yet, but there are no common poisonous points in rebirth novels. Like it.

It's okay, I can see some traces of other books, the plot arrangement is okay, nothing particularly bad, and there aren't many outstanding places. Personally, what I want to see more is the description of the unique scenery and creatures of Xinjiang. I have seen too much about fishing and hunting, and I am a bit tired of aesthetics, especially dog ​​hunting and gun hunting. There is nothing new about interpersonal relationships. After all, there were a lot of books about businessmen and officialdom back then, and nothing could be said about them. The process of making money and getting rich is actually not that important. What is important is what you do after you get rich. Many business articles are written in a rolling style of making money for the sake of making money. It is boring to just throw away a lot of gold and silver at home. I suggest you take advantage of the popularity of the Northwest topic to analyze what you want to write about and come up with something more differentiated. Hopefully it will be a good one.

The author is good, and he responds immediately to comments. Basically everything that can be changed has been changed. And the plot is okay, I can watch it, and I recommend it.

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