The Main God's Infinite Dimensions

The first two pages are purely stream-of-consciousness. Jiligulu talks a lot and sums it up in just a few sentences. He always uses some weird nouns and explains the same thing over and over again. When reading, it is recommended to skip the prologue and the first chapter and start directly from the second chapter. It doesn't matter.

I'm really speechless. Why don't the protagonists behind the scenes just escape and directly eliminate the possibility of exposure?

The writing is quite good, but there are too many adjectives, too complicated, and it is flashy. It can be written in one sentence, but the author can write it in two paragraphs.

I have read about 40 chapters so far, and it seems that it has a strong style, a good writing style, and a good story. It's very good! However, they are all covered up by the author's gorgeous techniques. All kinds of rhetoric, things that can be summarized in one or two sentences, are written into a long paragraph by the author, full of gorgeous and inscrutable feelings. It is like looking at large clusters of flowers piled together. It looks messy and troublesome. The layout of the protagonist, the player's process, and realistic countermeasures are all hidden under these flowers! Most of it is the protagonist's thinking about himself, the exploration of the golden finger, and part of the discussion on human nature. One sentence can be followed by a long artistic description It can be seen that the author's cultural literacy is quite high. At least this paragraph must be artistic, profound, and have powerful sentences. I can't think of them, but there are too many. This is like the finishing touch, embellishment in the story, and it looks very amazing. , But I feel numb after reading it for a while. Every time I watch a paragraph, I have to spend 2 seconds to think about it and translate it in my mind. It's hard to skip it, because there may be some storyline hidden in it. Two or three of the 10 paragraphs are plots, and they are randomly interspersed! I don't know if the author will become more proficient in his techniques in the future. For me personally, it is a good book, a book that seems to make my mind buzzing, but I still don't want to put it down!

I remember there was a description that the bullet loaded into the gun must be activated. You described many characters in great detail, but after a few chapters you did not see their deeper connection with the plot. If this is just a cutscene NPC, then too much description is invalid.

The author can write about behind-the-scenes stories, but you give me a situation where you have too many words. You are explaining it repeatedly and in detail, but you don't know what you are explaining. It's like eating, chewing it in your mouth and picking it out to look at. Then he put it in his mouth and ate it. I'm just a junior high school graduate. My explanation is not clear, so please forgive me

A Chinese Ghost Story has such a sense of déjà vu that old readers really can't tell. Damn it, you still dare to change your vest and play a dual-player game. You yourself say that the world's heroes are like crucian carp crossing the river, do you still expect readers not to notice?

This main god's religion is inexplicable. The big light ball itself should not have a position. The subsequent development is like a kind of chaos and then gradually order is better. Now it is a main god's religion directly mechanically descending. This means that an "official main god" organization has appeared 😅

Is the focus biased? There are more than a hundred chapters, most of which are about the country's various temptations, reactions, and plans for the Lord God Space. Of course this is something that needs to be written, but it won't take up so much space, right? It's a bit of putting the cart before the horse. The contents of the copy are briefly mentioned, and the millions of reincarnators in the real world are living a peaceful life. To be honest, I didn't see anything cool.

If you don't write about the most important parts of a book, the fight and the appearance of the saint in front of others, then I will have nothing to say. These two are basically the best parts of every book, except for female comics, they are basically the best parts of fantasy books. You are surprised that after watching this movie for so long, I have rarely seen a remarkable fighting and fighting part. There is also the part about appearing before others, but you haven't written any of it, basically you haven't written anything about it. If you continue to stick to your writing method later on, and leave all your self-motivated writing methods alone, then I guarantee I will not let you make much money from this book. You probably won't even be able to write the next 300 chapters.