A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: The Reincarnation Dao Ancestor

The author has done a very thorough research on the original work, and has given full play to the advantages of foresight. Although there are some secondary assumptions, the content of the secondary assumptions is reasonable and not obtrusive, which is quite rare. It can be felt that the author is very careful about the structure of the book. As for the shortcomings, firstly, the emotional line is less important and not so delicate, but after all, this book is more focused on the career line, and the original emotional line is more... Rudimentary, so I can completely accept it personally. Secondly, there are too few updates and the recent updates are relatively watery and not interesting. It is recommended that an expert transform the author into an incarnation and code 24 hours a day ( In short, it is a very good fanfic. I have also voted for the author with the monthly votes I saved recently. I hope the author will work hard and present us with a different and exciting mortal world. ps: After reading the 3.8 Million-word fan novel by the author, and comparing it with this one, I can feel the obvious improvement in the author's writing skills. The problems that often appeared in the previous book have also been optimized a lot, such as the names of NPCs that appear in the drama, the plot characters of Rui Ping's original work, and the super long narration explanations. Settings, etc., Made me feel more immersed in reading. At the same time, I also saw many plot settings that appeared in both books. In addition, the content of the fairy world that was foreshadowed from the beginning but failed to be written in the end always makes me curious. Is the author opening a new book because of the unhappiness of the previous book?

It doesn't count the setting of someone else's novel 📖. I also have to arrange for the author to be lucky enough to be reborn and throw it into the book...😂 You are really awesome! ! Completely making full use of Wangyu

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I have read it in the early days. The setting of Wang Yu was too greasy. I don't know which editor gave you the suggestion to change it to readers. This is really a stroke of genius. There is one thing to say, and the subsequent writing is really good. The early thinking is clear and unique, and the middle period is smooth. There is nothing special. The Nascent Soul period is a bit interesting. The writing of the newspaper group is very humane. Overall, it is the author's culmination of the experience accumulated in the first two parts. This one is really good.

Having said that, the impact of not having the little green bottle is really big. There are many places in the original work that cannot be done in the old way. For example, how can you get the awesome formation of the Five Elements Array, which is the foundation building method of inverting the Xinghai, and how can you get the fifth-level mantis, the Blood Demon Leader, and how can you trade with Xin Ruyin if you don't have a thousand-year spiritual grass. Without Xin Ruyin repairing the teleportation array, he would not be able to reach the Chaos Star Sea. There is no way to wholesale Golden Thunder Bamboo, and the impact is huge. How to wash your eyes with alcohol from the tree of spiritual eyes, and how to use the demon-luring grass to kill demons and get elixirs. It is difficult to transfer the upgrade route from the original work. The highlight of this book is to find a new approach, how to rationally acquire resources, and how to deal with useful talents. Without the little green bottle, it would be impossible for one person to develop alone. At least it would be very difficult to make alchemy. Resources have to be fought for even more.

I've watched a third of it, and everything else is okay, but as for the emotional drama, I feel that the writing is a bit pretentious. Except for Yuan Yao Yanli, the female supporting characters all feel like they have to take it in or not... It feels like they are both incompetent and independent at the same time.

Author, I dare to think that there is no need for mortals to have female protagonists. This is what a netizen said, and I quite agree with it

I like this book, especially the theme. I will not compete with the protagonist Han Li, because he is Han Li, and there are all kinds of beauties. Of course, they are all very reasonable together, and they will not mindlessly accept the harem. At the beginning, I felt that the protagonist upgraded slowly, but later I felt that the protagonist upgraded too quickly, and I was afraid that the author could not grasp the writing. This is really a good book, and I sincerely recommend it to fans of "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" ✌️✌️✌️

Previously, in the later stage of the pill formation, Yuan Yao was deliberately tested in the early stage and even listened in to test the loyalty of the two of them. Later, he forcibly threatened Song Yu (before his identity was revealed), demanded a magic pill, and then gave him a storage bag. The title was a joke to his junior sister. There is also the idea of ​​​​killing Gan Rushuang by force, for fear of exposing the teleportation array. And this paragraph: Something else came to my mind immediately, and I suddenly felt a little wary. I immediately smiled casually and asked, "By the way, Rushuang, can your skill absorb other skills to recover its own losses during reincarnation?" Here again, there is caution and suspicion. The writing is so contradictory. I know you are being cautious in cultivating immortality. If you are afraid of having a woman problem, don't write about women. You want the traffic of a mortal harem and the traffic of beautiful modeling of anime female characters. With the aura of the original female character, what you write is really weird. I feel that this book is better written than the previous one, because it treats women with caution, suspicion, and weirdness.

I think whether the protagonist has a small bottle or not will really lead to two completely different development routes. Because this book didn't have the Sky Vase at the beginning, I had to make friends with various big shots, and even created my own Xuantian Sect to make money. But if he had a vial at the beginning, he would probably have taken a similar route to Han Li in the original work, because there is no need to socialize in order to obtain resources, and he would be more suitable to be a casual cultivator.

The necessary conditions are to ascend or smuggle into the area of the human and demon tribes, otherwise you cannot take advantage of the intelligence in the original work 1. In the human world, go to the Jinhua Ancestor to get half of the Golden Palace and Jade Book, find the soul in the cave to learn the Silver Text, and develop the magic weapon "Wanlong Pearl" and the supporting magic circle. This is a better monitoring method than the ban on some Silver Texts in Tianyuan City in the original work, and it is also used by the Jiao Chi tribe in the original work. The combined powerhouse of the Sea Royal Clan who can defeat the True Spirit Corpse Nine-Headed Bird is considered to be a better method than the entire Feiling Clan. This is a strategic level. If you take the ancestor Ao Xiao's route and sell it to the demon clan or the Xu family's Tianyuan Saint Emperor route and sell it to Mo Jianli, at least ten people who have cultivated to the peak of the Void Refining will not worry about the resources. Find the Fatty Transformation God named Jin (apprentice of the old monster Jin in the Void Refining Stage) or the Diao Mei Transformation Deity named Weng (the apprentice of the old monster Ming in the Void Refining Stage) on duty in Tianyuan City, and sell it to Ao Xiao via the Silver Moon route, which can at least exchange for a Heavenly Spiritual Treasure 3. Qin Su'er of the Sky Fox Clan has an item that is "extremely precious to human race fusion monks" (probably the tens of millions of beast soul-level Nie Yun from the original Black Domain Auction) Hai), you can try the calculation and then go the Xu family route and sell it to the Tianyuan Holy Emperor. If you are worried about the risk, you can directly reveal it to the Tianyuan Holy Emperor to get the reward 4. Take the news that there is a Bingpo in the Mahayana period of the thirteenth clan of Tianyun, go to the Xu family directly for support, exchange the Xutian Cauldron for three times the spiritual treasure level materials, ask the Xu family for tokens, and then you can go to Tianyun to eat both of them from Weng Dacheng.

The plot of Tian Nan was well written, and the plot of Luan Xing Hai felt like it was written by a different person. 1. I am not opposed to multiple female protagonists. The female protagonists written now are more dependent on each other, just like objects, lacking character traits. 2. Han Li's heart towards Taoism is no longer pure. He does not want to live forever on the immortal road, but wants to accept this and that.

Well written, even without the green bottle, I found an even faster path by knowing the plot.

I personally think that when Han Li finally dispersed all the Nascent Soul essence of the wind-attributed Nascent Soul to nourish the body before condensing the body, he could make some small attempts. For example, the body has not yet formed a baby. Its own Dantian, meridians, mana and other comprehensive qualities have completely reached or even surpassed those of early Nascent Soul monks. The massive wind-attributed Nascent Soul essence was refined and nourished to nourish the body, and a kind of acquired wind-attributed spirit body was born independently, which is enough to replace the wind-attributed spiritual root qualifications. After all, Han Laomo now has very strong wind-attribute supernatural powers and escape skills, as well as top-level wind-attribute ancient treasures. It would be a waste to let the external incarnation use it. Having an acquired wind-attribute spirit body can not only maintain the power of the current magical powers, but also have many more powerful ancient treasures to use. It would be a pity if the power of these spells will be reduced or even unusable after the body is formed!

Gan Rushuang

Mortals can become immortal cultivators. They need to change their professions. The warriors who first become warriors have internal strength, and then use the Seven Ghost Soul Eaters to convert their mana to seize the body and become immortal cultivators. Pay attention to the internal strength. If mortals don't practice, where will the internal strength come from?

Such a good book, why is it so tepid?

Another book introducing casual cultivation

The author's latest explanatory chapter made it clear what was on my mind. Let's make a digression, why have the reviews of the anime "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" been not so good after it was updated? Take the old man and lady in Huang Maple Valley as an example. They will be dead in another hundred years, but the production team arranged for these people to write a sentimental drama about Han Li... These so-called foundation-building and core-forming old friends simply do not have the corresponding value to quantify the sentimental drama. 😅 "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality", at least one of the backgrounds of the animation is to turn everything into quantifiable value, including personal emotions and the beautiful body of a female cultivator.

Let me make a few digressions: Zi Ling, a female cultivator whose appearance has brought disaster to the country and the people, really gets what she wants the more she wants... The original work wanted to be an independent and strong female cultivator, but she ended up being a prisoner time and time again. This work wants to find a backer, but Old Devil Han doesn't like her...😅

I woke up at 7:00 and went back to sleep. I dreamed that there was a big problem with the plot of the novel you wrote. I was shocked. I quit and took a look. It was not written by you. Just when I opened your book again, I saw that you suddenly added an update. There were at least 10 chapters. I woke up when I was about to read it. I was so angry. It must be because you only updated one chapter before going to bed and read too little.

Mortals cannot seize the body of a person who is cultivating immortality. This is an iron rule. Therefore, it is completely unreasonable for you to write that Doctor Mo seizes the body of a person with spiritual roots. If he could seize the body, the three laws should be changed to the four laws.

Started as a casual cultivator and came here

As the title states, the Qingyuan Sword Jue is not necessary for the technique. This technique consumes too many resources. In fact, Xuanyin Jing would be better, and the resource requirements are not high. The functionality of Qingyuan Sword Jue is inferior to Qingyuan Sword Jue.

Speaking of which, now that the protagonist has the little green bottle in hand, practicing the law of time is actually the most cost-effective law for him. After all, the little green bottle can produce time crystals. But it cannot be avoided in ancient times or today. I don't know if the protagonist knows some information about the Law Dao Ancestor, but if he doesn't know, then I think it is necessary to arrange a very, very important opportunity for the protagonist to firmly practice the Law of Reincarnation! Otherwise, once the protagonist ascends to the fairy world and discovers the wonderful use of time crystals, there may be no reason to practice the law of reincarnation. The three supreme laws are extremely difficult to cultivate, which is reflected in many places in the Immortal World. The law of reincarnation is the most difficult to cultivate among the three supreme laws, and it is also the least written in the original work. If you want a person to have the determination to give up on the bright road in front of him, I think the current protagonist has not experienced enough. The difficulty of practicing reincarnation cannot be compared with the difficulty of practicing time. But if the protagonist knows some information about the Taoist of the Immortal World, and clearly knows that the Law of Time is a big pit, just pretend that I didn't say it. But if the design is like this, it feels like there is no such information as "I don't know that there is a Taoist in the Law of Time, or there is only one Taoist." Then the protagonist experiences some major events, which makes him determined to cultivate the Law of Reincarnation no matter what. This is interesting!

I feel like this book has become a bit of a bastard. Isn't it supposed to be adventurous? It's full of excitement and bumps along the way. It's all based on the chance of the original book.

Will the author write the plot of Ling Yuling? Like her very much

The title of the book is The Patriarch of Reincarnation, and only those who ascend to the immortal world can have the fruits of reincarnation, so this book has a chapter on the immortal world

Got the little green bottle, the little cucumber🥒 is coming out soon

I feel that Han Li in this book is more like a mortal... There is no golden finger or any tricks. He relies on the foresight and foresight of intelligence to bring huge benefits to those around him and himself, thus forming a positive cycle in exchange for more and greater benefits. When one person attains enlightenment, chickens and dogs ascend to heaven. ps: What impressed me deeply was that the relationship between the protagonist and Zi Ling was not very good, and there was always a gap. This was only caused by the disagreement in early concepts.