The Origins of the Dao Ancestor
道祖起源
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 347k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
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82Fans
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After Cola finished her previous novel, I started reading another Mortal Realm fanfiction, "I Cultivate Immortality Scientifically in Mortal Realm." Seeing the recent content really infuriated me. While the protagonists of several books are all incredibly powerful, Cola's protagonist, Wang Li, clearly has a much grander vision.
Cultivation aptitude settings: Number: The amount of magical power refined each day when starting cultivation. Grade 9 Five Spiritual Roots (Pseudo) 1-2 MAX Qi Gathering Triple Level; Eighth grade, four spiritual roots (pseudo), 3-5 MAX Qi gathering level six; Seventh Grade, Three Spiritual Roots (True) 7-13; Grade 6 dual spiritual roots 20-30;
A very verbose, extremely verbose book.
In "A Mortal's Journey to Immortality," the chapters don't connect well, and there's too much self-talk. I've read it four times and still can't get through it; it's too difficult. I hope you can reduce the amount of your own interpretations in your book. Readers will understand. Please stop talking to yourself all the time.
I've been very busy these past few days, so updates have been inconsistent... I've decided to dump her in a few days and get back to my career.
May your new book launch be a resounding success! Keep it up!
I hope to finish writing the second volume of Inuyasha and then focus on writing this one, updating three times a day. As for the comments about this book not being published, I'll just ignore them. It's only right to work hard and get paid.
Are you trying to provide scientific explanations? Even if it's based on facts, you can't just spout huge chunks of scientific information. Writing like this, with long paragraphs that are hard to remember, is pointless. You should only briefly explain what the protagonist is about to encounter, leaving out some basic concepts. Long, unexplained explanations are boring.
Writing two books at the same time, the author is amazing, how come they have such a great imagination?
Author, your self-answered novel, *A Mortal's Journey to Immortality*, is over a million words long, and you even need fan points to comment! Sigh.