A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting as a Rogue Cultivator

This book is good. If you don't grab the golden finger during time travel, it's just a piece of cake. If you're afraid of death, don't become an immortal. If you don't grab it, you're worse than a stray dog. At least a dog can grab food to survive.

The protagonist, as a scumbag who runs a harem, has nothing to do but Han Li. The author is writing about the original novel of "Don't be crazy about Diss". This is a basic moral sentiment. Others are too lazy to mention it, but I just want to say one more thing.

1: This book does not consider the mortal world and the spiritual world, and adjusts the background from the spiritual world. This mortal is not that mortal. You can understand it as a person who has read the legend of mortals cultivating immortals, and the mortal world in their conscious imagination. As for the vial setting, it is simply a tool for accelerating the ripening of the elixir. The bottle spirit will be obtained by Han Li, forming a double dragon pattern. In the end, whether two dragons compete or the loser becomes the winner, it depends on the opinions of everyone in the group. Don't be stubborn with me. I don't have any extra energy to waste on explaining this. 2: Many book friends said that my writing was a bit long-winded and explained too much. I always used some events and plots in the original work to make sense. It felt like I was writing an argumentative essay. I can only say I'm sorry about this, I'm really sorry. First, it's my writing habit. During this period of time, my head is full of argumentative essays. What would I write if I don't write argumentative essays? (How can I have no one to share my pain? Hehehehe). Second, my writing skills are limited. I am just a science and engineering undergraduate who moves bricks on a construction site, and I have no gorgeous words. Third, my energy is really limited and I know everything I know. I recognize all these shortcomings. I will try my best to adjust my state. After I go back every night, I will calm down and adjust my Qi for half an hour before writing. Reduce the plots related to the original work to give everyone a little more sense of exploration. 3. If you don't like this book, think it ruins the original work, think Han Li is good at everything, or think my verbosity is unbearable, you can go out quietly and turn left! Please respect each other, come quietly, and leave quietly! The mortal in your eyes may not be what I see, nor may it be what everyone sees. You have to be capable and write your own book. I will be the audience and I will pick out the bones for you and see how you feel. Since you don't dare to write, then don't just talk. Okay, life is not easy, just do it and cherish it. Happy reading everyone.

After reading some, I don't understand why I have to go out to get so many clones if I don't practice hard. I only get one or two, and I waste my time and spend several years looking for them.

I think this novel can be renamed "The Encyclopedia of Mortal Opportunities" or "The Guide to Mortal Cultivation through Time Travel" 😁

Hundreds of Mahayana cultivated over hundreds of years? Where do you get so many resources? Not even if you have the resources, right?

What to say about the writing, it is good sometimes and sometimes bad. I can't grasp the strength of the writing. In addition, the protagonist's temperament has not changed and is as unchanged as a diaosi. I think the character of the protagonist in the last update has not changed at all. The second grade is immature and sometimes silly. It should have something to do with the author himself. He has little experience and his writing is tender, but it is still okay for a newcomer.

Huahua without clothes＊Ancestor of the Demon World＊Sister Baoer

Stick to yourself, the writing is very good, many readers did not write comments, not because they don't read, but because they just read the book and have no time to comment. After the revision, it is very troublesome to comment! I have been a bookworm for about ten years and am very picky about books. I basically can't fault this book. Kill decisively, there is nothing wrong with it! No Holy Mother, nothing wrong! I'm not a boy who makes money, there's nothing wrong with him! It's not like you can't move when you see a woman, there's nothing wrong with it! Many people are too mortal and dislike the protagonist's solo career, instead of clinging to Old Devil Han's lap! In fact, to be honest, with Han Lao Mo's character, unless he has an immortal body, Han Lao Mo's thighs are really hard to hug. But this is what makes Mortal and Han Lao Mo unique and attractive! If Han Laomo is the heart of the Holy Mother, then we will definitely not like him!

Come on, the author, he has really written his own characteristics, and without violating the original work, he has directly or indirectly clarified many contradictions in the original work, making the work more complete and reasonable. The plot is thoughtfully conceived, not only losing the ups and downs of the original work, but also adding new whimsical ideas, which is very good.