Jinmen, Start Immortality from the Side Door

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Well written

Author, you have written more than 300 chapters, haven't you found that the main line of what you wrote is unclear? Other novels either seek immortality, seek a way to survive, seek power, seek power, follow a path of stubbornness, or are coerced into following a certain path. But the Dong Yi Lang Chui and west Yi Lang Chui you have written in the past few dozen chapters are still some plots in which the protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, and the supporting characters pretend to be cool and get slapped in the face. It is very boring to read.

It's too deeply involved in history. Just use the background of the Republic of China. What about the French Concession and the Japanese Concession? You're doing this in the extraordinary world. It's so annoying.

I can't do it in the back, and I don't leave any means of self-defense for the family. The family members are constantly being arrested and arrested, creating conflicts.

At the beginning, it was said that the protagonist used the most awesome Dragon Evil, the most awesome Yellow Spring Water, the most awesome Ten Thousand Soul Banners, and practiced the most awesome physical skills to advance! I thought he was awesome, but who knew that anyone of the same level could be as good as him! Others are still contaminated! So what is the use of the protagonist's plug-in? ? ? ?

So far, the main line is still too thin. Folklore weirdness is the focus. It is good to avoid horror. The world line of the Republic of China is not necessary at present. It is not a story about hegemony and rights. It is a bit redundant to write about troubled times and the laws of the Black Forest. Moreover, it would be very unpleasant to write about a hundred years of humiliation in an alternate world. After all, it is not a historical story. Later, I suggest speeding up this avoidance or world line to unify. The skills are also a bit messy and complicated now. The protagonist can actually develop honestly. The folk customs of the main line are the focus.

It's a bit watery, but okay, the water chapter and the plot chapter can be separated, so just skip it. The most disgusting thing is the book "The Rickshaw Driver Goes to the Sea-turning Monkey King". The plot chapter gives you 99% clues, and the last sentence gives you a plot, and it is specially written to be a big chapter of 10,000 yuan. It disgusted me to death.

It's getting worse and worse. From the time it was released to now, the first part is very exciting, but the second part is full of loopholes. You can find many poisonous points in every chapter!

The names of the characters are all mixed up, sometimes Zhao, sometimes Liu. If you can't tell the difference, don't give it that kind of role.

The protagonist needs a lot of conditions to upgrade, but others don't need it. If others also need those conditions, then there won't be many people with high cultivation in this world!

The book is good, I haven't found anything annoying so far.

The writing style and subject matter are both good, but the protagonist's level is a bit heavy-handed. It's already 500,000 words long, and he still has no ability to protect himself in the face of high-end combat power, let alone top-level combat power and national-level combat power. The protagonist's realm corresponds to the realm of martial arts, and the realms of other countries are even less clear.

The recent plot writing is not good.

The concept of taking life souls to control people is very poorly planned. If it were useful, at least half of the forces would force its use.

The pressure is too harsh, it's boring! You have to carry a few burdens with you wherever you go. If you like burdens so much, why doesn't the protagonist call her the Virgin or the nanny? Also, as I said before, how awesome my foundation is, how powerful my Dragon Demon is, and how good I am in both magic and martial arts. In fact, I am just a little trash, and it is difficult to even cross a small realm! Others have obtained the resources, but their own path has been polluted, but they still upgrade. The protagonist has not been polluted. He has obtained the resource realm and cannot move for a long time, and he even talks about his own physique.

Is there a female protagonist? Hope there is no heroine

This book is very good, why is it not so popular 😒, I am very selective in reading books, and there are not many books that I can order all at the moment.

What are you writing in these recent pictures? They are all filled with water and cannot be read.

It smells like a Korean devil from the Republic of China, but his father, the mistress, and the illegitimate daughter are such a burden. It feels superfluous. It would be very abrupt to fill in the holes later. Can you get them offline quickly 🙂

Does the protagonist want to develop his own power? Can he practice a kind of puppet-like technique, such as the method of cultivating gods from demons, the method of attaching gods to puppet sources, the method of soul-inhabiting gods... Only low-key plundering can develop faster.

Recently I am studying AI and writing a book, and I am now seriously concerned that the author uses AI hydrology in many places, and the writing is getting more and more shitty.

Chapter 18 is unreasonable. Is it in a city? Is there just a paper-tying master? If so, will the official people keep an eye on it? This is targeting the protagonist

Not updated yet? Waiting for the New Year?

You say you don't like you, I'm already fucking the butler, you say I like you, look at what you wrote 🈷️The ticket is about to expire, I don't even want to give it to you 😡

More than 400 chapters have passed and the foundation has not been established yet 🙂

Great book, I've been following it, so hurry up and update it.

The writing is good, I gave it to all 7 monthly passes

The author's combat description is very good. The disadvantage is that the realm is not well handled. Often an enemy's realm will be particularly blurry before the author announces it. There is also insufficient preparation for the level setting of the realm, and the reader's perception of the intensity of the pig's feet fluctuates greatly!