Return of the First Immortal

I don't think it's good, it's written too young.

I don't know what the author is thinking. The plot has no logic at all. Since the country already has a special affairs bureau, why will the situation collapse after 12 years? Since there is a special situation, the country will definitely have an army of cultivators, and the situation cannot collapse.

Martial arts-style works are rare. Many comments are belittling this book. I think they all don't know the difference between them. Some people even clamored for the author Readers of online articles are generally younger and less educated. The author should not worry about it and come on.

Please give me more suggestions. My collection has not increased. Is there something wrong with my writing? I am seriously lacking in confidence!

As mentioned, you are welcome to give your opinions. What are the negative points? !

I hope this book is to your liking🤝🤝

Haha I am the first, author, come on!

Friendly reminder: The previous books written by the author were all bad, please don't read them, they are deceiving consumers! The author also banned me permanently from another book

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Qidian has been censored and many books have been removed from the shelves.

The latest update is not working, I don't know how to be a eunuch.

I have read several of the author's books, and obviously none of them are as good as this one. I feel that the author's writing about swordsmanship is very good, and it is very interesting. If it is not unfinished, he should not be far away from becoming a great god. I must work hard to write a few complete works, otherwise my character will be almost ruined, and old book friends will be gone.

Why do the protagonists in novels always have 10,000 ways to provoke the villain, and then die over the smallest things? Is this the so-called protagonist's physique? Villain outwit?

What on earth are you writing? Wang Xian smiled faintly. Is he laughing? He came back again just to study. The Virgin Mary is awesome

It's not your fault. Don't be a salty fish.

Come on ✊✊

Yes, it has great potential. The pit of foreshadowing is quite deep, but don't dig it without digging it.

I hope there won't be a harem, but now I've discovered a situation where a girl comes out who is as beautiful as a fairy. . . Everyone is like this. I feel like there is no difference except for the name. If the author does not portray women well enough, then he should write less female characters. The other one is acceptable with a single heroine or no emotional scenes, as long as she is not a harem stallion. So far, I feel good, but the description of women is insufficient and the facial makeup is too busy. I am going to follow it slowly and see the later effects.

Why did you die? The previous chapter on Enlightenment in the Mountains was quite mysterious, but why did you suddenly finish the book?

Feeling bad. I feel like I've lost my mind. It feels like a joke. Everyone is brainless.

That's it for the new book selection? Recommended Quante Meow Eunuch Book

A good book is like this eunuch. I originally wanted to gain weight.

I'm dizzy. Why does a very good novel suddenly end in a finale?

The elixir will cut off the tail. This is another day of disconnection

The urban immortal cultivation flow is simply in the palace.

The introduction is not good. Most people turn around and leave after reading the introduction.

Friendly reminder: The previous books written by the author were all bad, please don't read them, they are deceiving consumers!