A Punch to the West

The author has started a new book. As for the unfinished book, I hope the author can write it well! But the speed of your update makes me worried about your new book. If you still update at the same speed as the elixir, I have already seen the ending of your book~ I hope the author will write carefully!

The author has opened a new book, Does the elixir require eunuchs? 😐 My writing is slow, there are many typos 🤭, and it's double-edited! ! ! 😡

Coming from the previous book, author, please don't neglect your job, hurry up and write the elixir

When I saw this book, I found that it was in a complete state, which meant that it was a eunuch again. Are you kidding me, author?

The author is not serious about writing old books! Are you writing a new book about ghosts and monsters because you want to cause trouble and die? !

I've read a few chapters, but they're boring. Pig's feet don't have anything of their own, so it's hard to write later.

I don't think I need to write this one, it's very poorly written! Always forcing the protagonist, the Virgin

If a good elixir supplier doesn't write about it, why write about it? ?

Love the introduction – new ideas…

My new book, "I Have a Date with Martial Arts," tells the story of an ordinary man who was struck by nine thunderbolts when he went up the mountain to collect medicine and became a master of martial arts. The appearance of the mysterious family confirmed that Xu Fu indeed went to Penglai Island to search for the elixir of life in history, and discovered the secret of the elixir of life. From then on, he began an extraordinary life. Everyone is welcome to come and support us, thank you all.

Come on, vote, I thought it was just a punch to defeat a ghost.

Alas, it would be great if the author could speed up the update of the previous book. Not to mention other rewards, at least read it. If you write well like this, everyone will just follow the book and won't be too interested in giving rewards.

Does this mean that eunuchs are being prepared?

I've finished reading the book, it's very good. It seems that there is a new book that I haven't finished yet, so I won't put it on the bookshelf. When you finish writing that book, I'll come and support you.

Rhythm issue, it feels a bit weird. The plot is not a big problem, but the pace feels sometimes too slow and sometimes too fast, and many descriptions are passed by in one stroke without a sense of saturation.

Let me see if there are any typos

Why? Isn't it well written?

Let's disperse, everyone, there's a eunuch over there, I guess we won't even wait for it to be released on the shelves 🤫🤫🤫