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When can I finish writing the story of Thousand Medicine Valley? Is it...? It feels a bit long-winded.

Couldn't this book be written by someone else?

First, write this book steadily, write one chapter every day, and start a new book. Don't be greedy for more! Be practical!

After reading the whole book, I still feel that it is okay, a bit fairy-like, but there are still some shortcomings. The beginning is really too bland, and it feels like two books from the middle and later stages. Moreover, the effect of the medicine is not very obvious in the whole book in the middle and later stages. The ending feels too rushed, giving me an anticlimactic feeling. Some holes were not filled in. Tong Wei's narrative was not explained clearly. I really want to know what happened between her and Zhao Yinghao in the end, and how she faced Wang Yao. There is also Miao Tianchuan. I feel that the author hastily wrote it to death in order to complete the book. It is impossible for his character to take such risks. These are the main points, and there are no other big problems.

What the hell kind of novel is this? Anyone can write a novel, right?

I want to write about the twists and turns, love and hate in the book from a third perspective The author has forgotten that the most important thing in describing a person is not to let the readers guess, but to make the readers believe and understand in detail, so that they can have surprises and other descriptions after the letter As for the plot direction of the story in the article, the character's temperament and purpose, Let the readers see it, understand it, and then bring it into it, and then it will have a lifelike appearance Like this, the writing method is ambiguous and foggy, I think you are writing in a dream It is completely on the surface, sticking to the ridiculous and funny so-called "fairy spirit" and "love and hate" It makes the whole article look like Staggering here and there, like a spider web scrawled on a mess of paper The way to improve is to write about people, whether you look at them objectively, express them competently, grasp the heat, or imitate the writing skills and styles of some famous works At this point, using people to write scenes, from "scenery" to plot, When replying to characters there is no need to stick to this form. Only when the details are appropriate and the writing is smooth can we carve out the special "literary spirit" in it Like the author, making random guesses and writing is like learning to walk in Handan. Not only did he fail to write the literary spirit he wanted, but the whole article was also messy.

It was very well written, but why did it end up being written in a running style? I don't want to subscribe to anything I've written lately! If this continues, I won't be able to see it anymore.

Support the author I hope the update will be faster. I don't care about typos, but can you speed up the plot? There are not many votes, but I ordered every chapter.

I think this book was deliberately written by the author to be poisonous. You can find most of the poisonous points in the Internet. The most terrifying thing is that Green Glowing, Tong Wei, is the male protagonist's classmate. After the two of them got together, the article was halfway through, and suddenly the woman ran away with her first love. The most important thing is that the protagonist also exposed the secret to her and taught her to practice. My poisoned face was glowing at that time. This is the most disgusting book I have ever read, and it feels a thousand times more disgusting than Stallion.

It's quite poisonous. Holy Virgin Bitch, impotent, rotten relatives, and no brains. Cuckold King, you have all the poison you want.

I just saw a bunch of weird relatives and all kinds of nonsense about the villagers, and just saying a few words helped. Why is there such a holy person? This is a serious poison. I have never seen anyone like this in my classes in mountainous villages for more than 10 years. Not to mention that there are a lot of typos that are worse than those typed by pirates.

Poisonous Weed, I have just read about 80 chapters of the 14-year bookworm. I felt that the main character was too obscene and might be cheated. I searched for the chapter name. 😲 Fuck, after reading the ending, the heroine turned out to be another person. I quickly went to the piracy website and searched for Tong Wei. The heroine in the first half of this book is Tong Wei, and the second half is another person. I have never seen such a change of heroine in the last half of the book. I have never seen such a change of heroine🤮. Fortunately, I am experienced and I didn't feel that something was wrong before I saw the part on the shelves.

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My tummy exploded on the spot. I read Chapter 131, and I felt something was wrong. Is this male protagonist forcibly impotent? I want to read some spoilers in the comments. If you don't read it, you won't know it. If you read it, you will be shocked. There is actually ntr, oh my god, the heroine came back from her first love, and she was originally planning to get engaged to the hero, but she ran away? ? The same goes for the male protagonist. If I give it to you, you won't do it. You are really incompetent. In 470, the heroine's first love appears, in 643, the heroine cuckolds the hero and then never appears again. I was shocked! ! I originally thought that this kind of subject matter was okay. Although there was a lot of talk, I could continue to watch it. Then you suddenly gave me a minotaur, which is really disgusting, so I ran away first.

You haven't fully understood this book yet, and you've just opened a new one. You think someone will read your new book because of your disrespectful attitude toward readers? That's bullshit.

After reading it three times, I still don't know in which chapter Wang Yao and Tong Wei officially broke up! If the author sees it, please tell me!

I used to think it was grass jelly... Then I saw the heroine running away with unfounded charges! Hehe! This is the book I've always wanted to scold! I had forgotten about it! The result is seen again! I scold you every time I see you! Grass

The authors of Qidian are becoming more and more stoic. They are either eunuchs or have no female protagonists.

Haha, there is a mission here that requires people to agree with it. Over there, if you don't save your uncle's friends or relatives, you won't save them. You can save friends of friends you recognize. After all, the protagonist is also a person who eats and drinks!

This book is plain and simple. A classmate appears out of nowhere and becomes his girlfriend, and then stops showing up halfway through the book for no reason. Then the patient turned into a girlfriend. You can still see the system task level attributes in the front, but they disappear in the back. The task is to become a famous doctor, but if you don't know how to complete the task, you are not allowed to publicize it to others after treating the disease. How can you become famous without publicity? Maybe the protagonist has delusional disorder and believes that everyone is born with knowledge. You know he's awesome. Summary, the logic is confusing, and the treatment of patients is bland. I don't know if the author wrote this book to make money or to share his fantasy world. In short, if you want to make money, it is better not to have no desires or demands, because readers have desires. The above is purely personal nonsense. If you don't accept it, please argue.

I don't understand why some people like cuckoldry. I wrote it down after being cuckolded.

I feel like writing this book first is the most important thing.

This book is considered to be conscientious. After all, even if you read it without reading the reviews, you will be poisoned to death after reading only a few chapters.

Read Chapter 40 Summary Mentally Retarded

Some people say that green or something doesn't exist at all, okay? If you don't like it, just break up. It doesn't matter. The protagonist himself doesn't like it very much.

I reviewed the assassin system again. I have always felt that this genre can be popular, but there has never been an invincible book.

The old books should not be read now because they are too poisonous. They are too poisonous.

The author pretends to be so embarrassed! So poisonous😅

, The magical part of this book lies in the typos throughout. The entire novel is basically composed of typos, and the author also used perseverance to insist on using typos and wrong sentences to inexplicably finish the book The success makes people sigh: It is better not to read, the logic is rubbish! It's poisonous and white, with tons of typos, it's comparable to a divine book!

I didn't read the comment section before, but after reading Chapter 14, I felt something was wrong with the book. The writing and plot didn't seem to match the popularity. How many of these 6,000+ comments are bad reviews? 🙂 After looking at it, the heroine was changed halfway through. Who are the big brothers who are voting for this monthly ticket? Everyone must pay homage to the big brother 👏