Survive the Eternal Night: Become the God of Mount Tai at the Beginning

It's really a book shortage. After reading about 200 chapters, my brain turned into mush. I kept eating my own settings. After writing about 200 chapters, I was overwhelmed. The setting content written in the previous chapter will be different in the next chapter. I just write it as I like. . . .

The man is 182cm tall and weighs 130kg. Hasn't the country already solved the problem of food and clothing?

The latter will not work. What you write is a lord story. This type of landlord type belongs to the land fairy management type. In the beginning, the original capital is accumulated and the protagonist charges into battle alone. What you later do is this and that. The protagonist has various fields, various skills, and various magic weapons. Don't you think it's confusing? Like a headless fly, what are you doing in this paradise? You have raised a bunch of people, do you really treat them like pigs? Does the alliance you built only provide you with a little faith? Then help you with some chores? Even if you go to find a treasure map yourself, there will be no one else. You are writing about a lord, and your own strength must be fundamental, but for some simple world strategies, you do everything yourself every time. What kind of lord do you want to be? What kind of landowner? Which emperor attacks others by himself every day? You are already at level 3 and level 4, but you are still charging outside alone. You raise so many people together. It is really like raising a group of pigs. A lord article makes you become a lone wolf. What do you think about the future? The entire logical development of the plot is directly contrary to logic.

The setting is messy and complicated, but after reading through it, I found that it can be summarized in one chapter. The meaningless setting explanation accounts for 90%, and the plot accounts for 10%. Not very readable.

The writing is very boring. The protagonist is like playing a single-player game throughout the whole process. The beginning is boring, the process is boring, and even the ending is boring. The flavored copy is even more boring. Moreover, the author often messes up the setting intentionally or unintentionally, and it is almost as if he writes it and plays it.

Even if the setting is crazy at the beginning and it doesn't advance the plot, the data setting is still weird. The upper limit of incense belief (6/10). Can you believe that the upper limit set in this data is 6 instead of 10? Since the upper limit is 6, what are the 10 at the end?

It's a mess, I've given him all the good stuff, and I don't see how awesome he is.

The front part is all about settings, and the protagonist is still a virgin. I couldn't bear to see the protagonist exchanging copper for things, and I couldn't bear it when I saw the protagonist announcing the method of obtaining copper for the sake of fame. Before, he was saying that Gu was raised in the same area, so he acted like a virgin bitch.

It's a very simple setting, but it's unclear and confusing. It gives me a headache just looking at it.

There are too many settings thrown away at the beginning The protagonist was just a pony who lived for dozens of days in his previous life, but the author knows all the settings very well A pony who had no godly status before his death can be absolutely sure that it is okay to usurp the godly position, and that the gods are fake. A protagonist who only had levels 1 and 5 before his death can freely comment on the settings of levels 3 and 4, etc.

The left and right brains compete with each other. As mentioned before, humanity requires landlords to protect their many tenants, and the quantity is large. Later, the second chapter will be put on the shelves to eat the settings. Quality is needed, not quantity.

Why do I feel like the author is getting more and more wrong as he writes? The first clone and the second book Dark Infinite are the pinnacle. The following books are more and more like setting collections. The dense settings and diary-style narrative are not as good as the first and second books.

The author's ideas are always very good, but his writing habits are very discouraging. According to a comment in the author's previous book, the protagonist focuses on a certain skill or technique, constantly integrating other skills, and other unrelated skills are used to assist. As for the last book, I only saw more than 200 of them. The protagonist has several extraordinary professions, dozens of skills, and N extraordinary props linked together. I can't wrap my head around it at all, and some of them are lost after being used once. Although it conforms to the characteristics of hoarding rats, it is better to establish a system and have a direction.

The author is used to crazy settings and cheats, but he can't control his writing skills, so basically all the books he wrote collapsed in the later stage.

Tudou, I released a new book and didn't say anything about it.

Just as he was about to talk about this, he also set up the use of the mysterious realm. The way of heaven has been polluted. You (the landlord) are a dick. The landlord is at most a humane and tunnel to give humane beings a Jedi counterattack. If you lose, you will die. However, humanity is also finished. How can the power system you (the author) write survive? Isn't it that it has already collapsed in the early stage? When you stare into the abyss, the abyss is also staring at you. This is not a system article. The system can at least explain that the power system is more powerful than the heavenly way in your world, and it can naturally absorb, use and purify it.

The doomsday survival cabin is wearing a strange skin. The plot is basically not an introduction to the game settings, and one or two chapters of details about a prop. The weird version of Don't Starve has no role in Pidian's Tarzan God's Skin. This novel is suitable for use in Don't Starve game planning. After reading Chapter 20, it's not suitable for me to run away.

There are a lot of settings, a bit messy, and a bit complicated

I still remember the shock of the infinite darkness to the little me. My Infinite Flow Enlightenment Book seems to be unable to go back now 😢😢😢

The author seems to be engaged in popular science, and he popularizes the content of the novel he designed, which is no different from a running account.

The setting is mixed with a small amount of plot. The settings introduction is repetitive and long-winded, like a bunch of weeds slapped into the brain, without any logic, and it makes my brain hurt 😒.

I read the first 10 chapters carefully, and it felt a bit like a setting collection. Then there is a big problem, that is, the logic is not smooth. From the perspective of the reader, isn't it just a new world for me, who is reading this author's book for the first time? And it is still the dominant one, so why should we follow the original mythology? That is, the Evernight World and the Blue Star World are two different worlds, and the Evernight Great World has robbed many things from the Blue Star World. Even at the crushing level, in the world of eternal night, the way of heaven will sink, the way of earth will collapse and shatter, and the way of humanity will disperse and merge. He needs these people to work on Huawei and other electrical appliances. Why should he abide by these mythical systems and make extra payments? These areas consume their energy. Why should he follow those so-called mythological settings? The mythical settings on Blue Star, for the world of Evernight, are they not equivalent to novels? Ah, you are bragging. You said you have the power of a Saiyan, so I will give you the power of a Saiyan. Why? Are you doing well in your dreams?

The abilities are too complex and lack of systematization. They basically appear in various introductions. The introductions are very dead and ordinary, and people can't remember so much. The ordinary replacement abilities, materials, and messy numerical anchors make people feel dizzy.

There are too many settings, and it's written like an instruction manual

The author is suitable for creativity, let good writers write

Because

Highlights of this book: Brains water the God of Mount Tai, and kill the rat demon in the field of micro-management. Disadvantages: The fruit trees cannot be transferred to the temple with the land deed? It is completely inconsistent with the search mode of survival and battle royale.

Let's write a dark infinite manga, other genres can't be tolerated. . . .

The storytelling is getting worse and worse, and the more I write, the more it looks like an instruction manual.

Let's write another dark manga with unlimited streaming